Reviewer: NoxSomnium
Date: 05/01/08 23:12
Chapter: Goyle

But they didn't even check to make sure the woman didn't leave the baby! What if baby Pansy was left there to die. I'm sure you didn't do that, but still.

Reviewer: GrayLady
Date: 01/11/08 0:18
Chapter: Prologue

I think your story is well written and really intriguing. So, far, I enjoy it immensely. I just wanted to point out that in Ch. 2 of part 3, you say that Hermione and Ron live in Godric's Hollow. However, earlier in the story, it says that they live in Hogsmeade.
I will lt you know what I think of the whole thing when I finish- seems like Harry and company treat Draco badly.. I hope that changes!

Author's Response: Oh...thank you very much for pointing that out! Thats very silly of me. I will definitely be finding that mistake and correcting it. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Jameswys
Date: 01/09/08 12:40
Chapter: Pieces

This was a really goo story, I wish that more people will read it and that you write another story soon.

Author's Response: *turns bright red* aw, shucks. It's always nice to hear that someone enjoyed what I wrote, and don't worry, I'm still writing a prequel. Thanks for all of your reviews, and thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Jameswys
Date: 01/09/08 12:26
Chapter: Memories

Wait, you forgot to tell us ifthe Order won. It was a really good chapter though.

Author's Response: Did I? Hmm. Perhaps it's in the next chapter... Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Jameswys
Date: 01/09/08 12:13
Chapter: Another Day

The fight is on. I like your battle scenes they are quit fun to read. Fast paced and confusing just like a batte!

Reviewer: Jameswys
Date: 01/09/08 11:59
Chapter: Dinner

When will the battle come. I just hope Draco can help the Order and be welcomed back to them again.

Reviewer: Jameswys
Date: 01/09/08 11:39
Chapter: The Warning

Intresting devolopments. Luna became the messenger, that is quite interesting.

Reviewer: Jameswys
Date: 01/09/08 11:22
Chapter: Falling Out

I hope Draco gets past his little spat and tells Harry what happened. But I doubt it!

Reviewer: Jameswys
Date: 01/09/08 11:06
Chapter: Ten Days

well I am back and I love how this started. I have always liked your story, it is one of the few storys I like in this genre.

Author's Response: Aw, that's always a pleasure to hear *blushes*. Thanks for the reviews!

Reviewer: Pandapoo
Date: 01/03/08 5:22
Chapter: Prologue

Very good, Hooked definately

Reviewer: charlie black
Date: 12/31/07 19:20
Chapter: Pieces

this was beyond excellent. sequel?

Author's Response: Wow. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. and I am planning some sort of sequel. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 12/28/07 14:01
Chapter: Pieces

Wow that is quite an ending. Are you going to write a sequel? I can't believe it's over, you've had this story going for quite a while, and it's so good! By the way, it doesn't say that the story is completed on the little blurb thing that gives the story summary. I don't know if you're going to have an epilogue or not, but if you aren't than you might want to change that.

Author's Response: since the queue's closed, I can't edit the status just as of yet, but as soon as I can, It will be marked as complete. I AM planning sequels, but those bunnies are still in their infancy. Thanks for following through! <3

Reviewer: La_Rubinita
Date: 12/26/07 18:06
Chapter: Pieces

Oh my God, oh my God, oh my God! I can't believe it's over! I feel...sad. I fell in love with your story, and I really don't want it to end. Then final part was so ominous, too. Are you planning a sequel? *crosses fingers* Oh dear, I just can't believe it's finished... Even so, it was an excellent finale. Excellent work; you tied up the loose ends with a generally happy overtone. Meleia and Draco's banter is always enjoyable to read.

I don't know what your plans are after this, but I can't wait, whatever it may be. Congratulations on an absolutely fantastic story.

Happy Christmas!

Author's Response: I'm planning much more indeed. A prequel and a sequel, but that's all in the future (hopefully not tooo distant). Thanks for following, I've adored your every review.

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 12/17/07 17:05
Chapter: Memories

Yay! I'm so glad she rescued him, he really needs rescuing sometimes. They're so cute together, and at the same time extremely codependent.

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 12/13/07 22:23
Chapter: Memories

Was that Draco's way of proposing to her? I hope it was, they really should get married before either of them have another near death expierence. ^^

Author's Response: The next chapter will clear up their relationship a bit more. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: La_Rubinita
Date: 12/12/07 22:10
Chapter: Memories

Eek! Double eek! That was so exciting! Meleia is SO badass. I hope you get into what her Vampire abilities are in greater depth some time in the future. And her Partronus is a dragon! How sweet. She loves our Draco. *sigh* As ever, fabulous chapter. I can't wait for the next one :)

Author's Response: I'm actually writing a prequel just about her. :P I couldn't resist. The next chapter shouldn't be long: It's written and just needs to be touched up. Thanks for the review! I'm so thrilled you've followed this story so closely. Your reviews always make me smile.

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 12/03/07 18:12
Chapter: Another Day

I love it. I was wondering about the long update, normally you're speedy quick. It was such a good chapter though, it was worth the wait. Only one little nitpick, when Meleia first got in the lift, you said she was there with two met. It's really confusing cause it seems like she's met someone, but you really just mean two men. Just check it out. Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you for pointing that out. I'll fix it pronto (that much I CAN do at the moment). The next chapter is ready, and waiting only for my internet to be up again on my main computer. Thanks for the patience.

Reviewer: Ghoul In Pajamas
Date: 12/03/07 12:43
Chapter: Another Day

This is a really interesting story and Meleia's a cool character. I like how you added Hermoine's story in this chapter, and the Hogwarts attack as a distraction. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying everything. Hopefully it won't be long before another update (I'm relying on my internet beign fixed)

Reviewer: juli_dances
Date: 11/30/07 21:10
Chapter: Another Day

AHHHH!!! what comes next??? this fic is so intriguing! the suspense, the romance, the plot line...all wonderful!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for the review. The next chapter won't be soon as I have internet on my main comp again.

Reviewer: Marauder4Life
Date: 11/30/07 15:32
Chapter: Prologue

Now this is going to be've got me as long as you dont pull something like a Draco/Ginny relationship! Great story so far!

Author's Response: Alas, there is no Draco/Ginny (though I'm a fan of the ship) I hope you enjoy the rest! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

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