Aww! Poems are always the BEST way to express feeling, and this is your best ever, in my opinion. I really love all your poems, but this one particularly struck me. It's so amazing. Thank you for giving me a little bit more insight into Nym's poetic little life. :)
Author's Response: Thank YOU for reading poetry! Not everyone does, unless it's mandatory in English class, heh.
*gasps then sighs deeply* Beautiful- just like Remus and Tonks together:-)
I ADORE this poem. You are truly talented beyond words my dear:-) Every time I think there is no way you could possibly impress me more, you go ahead and prove me wrong!
Author's Response: You read poetry...voluntarily...something that isn't assigned for required reading! That is awesome, and so is your review. Thank you so much!
awwwwww, how sweet!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and being sweet enough to review!
ooooooooooooooooooo me likee this poem! when get the tym i hope to read your related fics, but ill add them 2 my favs so i can read them at my leisure!
Author's Response: *jumps for joy* You made my day! The first story in the series Once in a Blue Moon may not have won a Quicksilver Quill award, but to go Jack Sparrow, it was nominated! :D
Awww.... How sweet
Author's Response: They are sweet together, and you're sweet to review. Thanks! :)
Wow. This is seriously GOOD. :D Excellent writing.
Author's Response: *gets all vaclempt* Thank you!
that was absolutely amazing. wow. what else am i supposed to say?
Author's Response: I don't mind saying Thanks over and over, because I really am thankful for your review! ^_~
that was absolutely amazing. wow. what else am i supposed to say?
Author's Response: I'm the one with something to say- Thank you! ^_^
I like the format that this was written in, it breaks the words up nicely and makes it seem like a stream of Tonks's conciousness as opposed to a proper poem. The metaphors and similies for fire in this work well, as does the way you describe Remus as fire.
I think I like verses 5 and 6 best as they really some up the rest of the poem.
Overall good job and well written!
Author's Response: Free verse is much more flowing, isn't it? Not confined by rhyme and meter. I'm glad you found it enjoyable if improper, lol. Thanks! =)
Good! Very good. Liking the poems right now, are you?
Author's Response: More like got challenged to try my hand at it, lol. It was very rewarding and whatnot, but I sure won't be giving up my "day job" of fanfiction to write poetry instead. Poems are hard work! ^_^
Author's Response: More like got challenged to try my hand at it, lol. It was very rewarding and whatnot, but I sure won't be giving up my "day job" of fanfiction to write poetry instead. Poems are hard work! ^_^
That was a nice one. I've read it before on the other one, but i didn't really read it, read it. You know? But it is actually quite good. How are these two poems being validated so fast?!? Huh. Oh well, great job.
Author's Response: Different cat, not as many submissions, the marvellous mod had time, so many possibilities, all of them happy ones for me since it validated and you reviewed!
