awwwww...this made me feel so sadd =(( Poor snapeee
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... Poor Snapey!!!!
wow, this was pretty depressing. a different angle on things though, i liked it.
Ah! My heart's breaking for Snape! I know how he feels on Valentines Day.
Thats so sad!! it makes me feel REALLY bad for Snape.
~ Hannah Abbot
Aww...poor severus :(
*sniffles* so sad :( well written though :) and as for Sevy, wonderful portrayal, it really explains his feelings for Lily as well as his loathing/love for Harry...good job.
~The Tainted One
That was really good! I love the whole story idea and , despite a view spelling mistakes, it was a delightful little story! Poor Snape, though :P
awww poor sevii...this is too sad a story...
I never liked Lily and Snape before, but this story has totally changed me perspective. Its so sad I'm near tears. Keep up the good work!
awww poor snivelly
Damn *sorry* that's good...really good...too...too shocked. I can't say any more...YOU ROCK!
cool story i like it!
Wow, that was good! I liked when Lily stuck up for Snape, kinda weird that Lily would snog James for giving her a silver locket though, eh?
Keep writting! You did a great showing another side of Snape. Somehow he seems more human then I imagine him being even at that age, but I still love what you've done. Pax.
great story, and really well written. i loved it. you should keep writing!
Poor Sevy. He just never wins. Good story. Very entertaining.
It was kind of bittersweet at the end. James gets Lily and they're happy but Snape has a broken heart. *tear* It was sad and a good explanation why he is the way he is. Good job!
Awww!! that was so sad! i actualy feel sory for the insenitive, stupid, ugly brute.