i love this please update soon
Just by the first paragraph of your story I can already tell it's going to be good. You've got a major talent of linking everything together in a swift and easy movement, making everything flow really well.
There wasn't a single grammatical error I caught in your piece, which is obviously great. You've also got Draco characterized just right here. He's sarcastic, yet as respectful as possible at the same time, which is how Draco is in reality.
I really liked how you added the little 'Play nicely," toward the end. It seems so Snape-ish, if that makes sense at all. It just seems like something he would do.
So far this is really awesome. You've really got a talent on your hands here and I can't wait to keep reading! Keep up the great work!
This is one of my favorite stories. I check constantly to see if it's updated, but I now see it hasn't been in 4 months! please hurry it up! I want to hear more about draco and his chest *Wink wink*
I've recently discovered the fan fics after seeing the awards page on mugglenet....
I've become an instant Draco/Hermione fan!
This story has promise!! I already LOVE it! Having it set at Order HQ rather than Hogwarts is awesome - less people to interfere. LOL
PLEASE update fast - I have way too much free time on my hands and am running out of new stories to read already.
This is awesome. I love the Draco/Hermione flirting in this chapter. Keep Updating, PLEASE!!!?
wow awsome storry so far. I can't wait for you to update!!!
Any more of the story??? I'm dying to know the next part of what happens. I can't wait to find out if Hermione actually gets together with Draco, and what Ron thinks of the whole situation!!!!! HURRY!
nice chap very funny lol! love the plot ever so much
nice chap work on word arrangment a little confusing trust me i know im a novelist reader can be truely confused by things that we think sound good in our heads but they really dont make as much sense as we thought.nice plot!
Loved the ending!! Keep going
hehehe! draco is fit as! Gd chappie, gd story so far. vair sehr gut
Grrr8! plz hurry an up-date!
dude this story is freakn awesome!!!!!!! i love how hermione said "you won't be wet or in a towel later" LOL that was funny!
I want a chapter! Love the plot tis great keep up the good work, but make sure you do it fast :P
grrrrrrrrrr hurry up and write the 5th chapter does she fall foir him?!/1?!?!?!!?
God, your Draco is gorgeous. Yum!