Reviews For Believe Me
Reviewer: SheWhoMustNotBNamed
Date: 05/17/06 20:22
Chapter: A New Beginning

Wonderful beginning, very good in your descriptions, I felt like I was actually there with him. (don't I wish... hehe...) Well being the anal retentive girl that I am, I must ask u about Draco going to Grimmauld Place. With Dumbledore being the Secret Keeper, shouldnt he have brought Draco (instead of Snape) or written him a letter like he did with the Boy Wonder? (Boy Wonder and his pet weasel...LOL...priceless!) Also, the dialouge between Snape & Draco didnt sound like a teacher talking to his favorite student and vice versa. Did u mean for it to be that way? Besides my being all nit picky, (which I apologize for) I have a real good feeling about this story and your writing skills are very promising! =) It got ahold of my attention and I cant wait 4 the next chap. (Which I notice is in "Chapter Limbo" right now... yay!!!) So keep up the good work and remember not to rush into it. Nice & easy does the trick! ;)

Author's Response: lol thank you =D we all want to be there with him, that's for sure =P Now, I know that Draco couldn't go into Grimmaulds place without Dumbledore, and for some reason i didn't even think to have Dumbledore to go and get him lol =P ... but would Draco chose the order if Snape didn't go and get him? And the reason i didn't have him get it written on a peice of paper is b/c I don't want Draco to know where he is b/c that will cause conflict later... lol The Boy Wonder part is one of my favorites =D I did mean for Draco & Snape b/c I think that Snape and Lucius were close so he would have been around... more like an uncle you could say =P lol that's okay, I don't mind you being nit picky, if you have more questions, go ahead and ask, esp. if everything's not clear. =D Thank you very much! I hope the rest of the story lives up to your standards! Thanks for reading and the great review!! ♥

Reviewer: CLee
Date: 05/17/06 19:39
Chapter: A New Beginning

Ohhh, interesting! I like the way this sounds so far, great job! I esp. liked the opening paragraph, I thought that was great. But boy, you really jumped right into the plot what with Snape suddenly demanding to know which side he'd chose to be on....and then the ending! Priceless! haha, I'll be waiting for an update from you!

Author's Response: Oh thank you =D It took me seven re-writes to get the beginning perfect, I'm so glad you liked it!! Now that you mention it, i did jump in to it, but i wanted to hook you right away ;) lol the ending is my favorite =P Yay, I'm looking forward to your next review =D Thanks for reading!!! ♥

Reviewer: comewhatmay
Date: 05/17/06 17:11
Chapter: A New Beginning


Author's Response: lol can do =D

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 05/17/06 15:31
Chapter: A New Beginning


Author's Response: Thank you =D lol the romance is comming, trust me! =P Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Juicy_Couture
Date: 05/17/06 12:22
Chapter: A New Beginning

I laughed at the last line. I thought it was really good, actually. I like stories that are from Draco's point of view. When it's from Hermione's, it seems too forced, but Draco adds drama. Lots and lots of drama. I will give you a 4/5 stars, and keep up the good work! I'm anxious to see where this goes. I'm adding you to my favorites, for sure!

Author's Response: Thank you! =D Only one chapter and it's already in your favorites? Wow... that's... wow lol =P And thank you for the 4 out of 5 stars! The whole story isn't completely in Draco's POV. It swiches around a little bit, but it's mostly in his. I hope that when it's in Hermione's that it isn't forced and is still enjoyable for you ;) Thank you very much for taking the time to read and of course, review my story! ♥

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