Lovely ending to the chapter. I can't wait to see what comes next! I have a felling this is going to be one of my fave fanfics on Muggle Net! Kepp it updated!
Author's Response: Awwwww!! Thanks very much!! I'd love it if it were your favorite!! That would be, wow, so great :P Glad you liked the ending :D ♥
That was such a good chapter! Update more, i want to see what happens!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! Updates are coming!! i want you too see what happens too XD Thanks for reading! ♥
great story so far, but hurry up with the
next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you!!! :D I shall hurry! ♥
Please sumit the next chapter very fast. I am really looking forward to it.
Author's Response: Sorry it took so long but it's in now ^_^ Chapter three is a good one, I think :P ♥
i love it, so awsome.
Author's Response: heehee thank you :P ♥
very awsime, i realy love it.
Author's Response: :D Thank you!!! Glad you are enjoying it! ♥
Nice! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! The next chapter is coming!! ♥
it looks good so far . keep it coming! :)
Author's Response: Tahnk you!!! I will ^_^ ♥
I like how this story is going so far, and I think Draco's allegiances should be tested to the max by Snape, and Hermione should jelp him or something along those lines.
Overall, I can't wait to read more of this story!
Author's Response: Glad you like where it's heading =D Hope you like where it ends :P You don't really see much of snape after chapter three :S I'm not sure why that is :P but Draco is put to the test ^_^ Thanks for the review and please keep reading!! ♥
Once again, thanks for updating so quickly! One of my definate pet peeves are authors who dont update a prettty decent story. Anyway, in the beginning when Draco was explaining to the Wonder Twins why he was there didnt really sound like a lie at all. I thought he was telling the truth. Is that a little subtle hint from you about what to expect later in the story? Also this chapter answered my question from the last review about Draco being taken to Grimmauld Place by Snape. I guess he needs to prove his allegience before knowing the hideout of the Order. Never thought of it that way and I also need to remember that this is your story and u can do whatever u want! =) The shock factor from Ron & Harry about Draco being there was right on the money but geez, Ronald really needs to take an anger management class. I really felt sorry for Draco! I know they cant trust him too quickly otherwise it would'nt be so believable. So you did a good job about their reactions. And I liked the way how u made something in common between Hermione & Draco. It seems that they are the only 2 in the school that has read Hogwarts: A History. So even though they still despise eachother at least u put something in where they have a common interest to build something on, not just the quick,"Hey, you're hot, sorry I called u a Mudblood. Wanna snog?" If it's too fast, it's gonna run out of gas. (Just made that up, hehe.) Anyway, I hope he's gonna be Intelligent Draco. Smart Draco is sooooo SEXY! ;) So keep up the good work & I'll be waiting for #3...hinthint...
Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the loooong review!! Now lemme answer all your questions ^_^ (in order :P)
Was Draco telling the truth? Maybeeeee.... maybe not :P I'm not gonna tell lol. Ron's out burst is just the first of MANY. Haha I agree with you, smart Draco is very sexy :P Chapter three is on the way!!! =D I'm very glad you are a careful reader :P When the song lyrics show up, payattention to those ^_^ ♥
Bravo! Bravo! Encore! Well, an encore of a different chapter! Can't wait for you to update!!!
Author's Response: lol thank you =P The next chapter is coming very soon! =D Thanks for reading! ♥
UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IT REALLY IS A GODD STORY!!!!!!
Author's Response: =D Thank you! I'm getting ready to put chapter three into "limbo" so it should be up in a few days =D Thanks again for readin and reviewing!! ♥
Ah, poor Draco. And poor Ron! The first 20 minutes and already they are at eachother's throats. I wonder if they'll *ever* get along.
I'm excited to see where this story is going to go. Keep writing!
Author's Response: heehee not in my story :P If I were you, I'd pick one to be sorry for :P It gets worse lol. Thanks for reading again! And reviewing again! =D ♥
aww, that left me hanging. but good start! really excellent how draco actually chose dumbledore's side. there's hope for him yet! =P
*sigh* love him, love him, love him.
Author's Response: lol there are many cliffhangers in this story :P Thanks for R&R!! ♥
this is soooo funny!!!
Author's Response: Thank you =D It gets funnier, well I think it does =P Thanks for reading! ♥
Nice start. Not being a Draco fan you got me interested. I want to see if he really has a heart! Looking forward to the next chapter. I didn't mention the arrival arrangements since others have.
Author's Response: Thanks =D Wow, I hope I keep you interested! He might have one... but then again... =D Ahh bless you lol :P I just want everyone to keep an open mind b/c this is fanfiction and it won't be perfect ;) Thanks for reading! =D ♥
Good start. I'm anxious to see where this goes.
Author's Response: Thank you =D And if I were you, I'd be too ;) Many good things and many bad things are ahead =D Can't wait for you to read the rest ;) ♥
intresting!!!!!
perfect begining
just one thing being the secret keeper shouldnt dumbledore bring malfoy to the headquater instead of snape?
i luv the way u write
cant wait for the next chapter
plzzz dont take long
Author's Response: Thank you ;) Yeah, dumbledore should have brought draco to Grimmauld place, but I honestly didn't think of Dumbledore, but, now that I'm thinking about it, Draco would be more apt to do what Snape asks of him. If Dumbledore asked him to choose sides, he would have most likely have gone the other way, which would ruin my plot :P Thank you :D I'm glad that you like the way I write :D The next chapter was submitted a few days ago so it should be soon =D Thanks for reading! ♥
Wonderful beginning, very good in your descriptions, I felt like I was actually there with him. (don't I wish... hehe...) Well being the anal retentive girl that I am, I must ask u about Draco going to Grimmauld Place. With Dumbledore being the Secret Keeper, shouldnt he have brought Draco (instead of Snape) or written him a letter like he did with the Boy Wonder? (Boy Wonder and his pet weasel...LOL...priceless!) Also, the dialouge between Snape & Draco didnt sound like a teacher talking to his favorite student and vice versa. Did u mean for it to be that way? Besides my being all nit picky, (which I apologize for) I have a real good feeling about this story and your writing skills are very promising! =) It got ahold of my attention and I cant wait 4 the next chap. (Which I notice is in "Chapter Limbo" right now... yay!!!) So keep up the good work and remember not to rush into it. Nice & easy does the trick! ;)
Author's Response: lol thank you =D we all want to be there with him, that's for sure =P Now, I know that Draco couldn't go into Grimmaulds place without Dumbledore, and for some reason i didn't even think to have Dumbledore to go and get him lol =P ... but would Draco chose the order if Snape didn't go and get him? And the reason i didn't have him get it written on a peice of paper is b/c I don't want Draco to know where he is b/c that will cause conflict later... lol The Boy Wonder part is one of my favorites =D I did mean for Draco & Snape b/c I think that Snape and Lucius were close so he would have been around... more like an uncle you could say =P lol that's okay, I don't mind you being nit picky, if you have more questions, go ahead and ask, esp. if everything's not clear. =D Thank you very much! I hope the rest of the story lives up to your standards! Thanks for reading and the great review!! ♥
Ohhh, interesting! I like the way this sounds so far, great job! I esp. liked the opening paragraph, I thought that was great. But boy, you really jumped right into the plot what with Snape suddenly demanding to know which side he'd chose to be on....and then the ending! Priceless! haha, I'll be waiting for an update from you!
Author's Response: Oh thank you =D It took me seven re-writes to get the beginning perfect, I'm so glad you liked it!! Now that you mention it, i did jump in to it, but i wanted to hook you right away ;) lol the ending is my favorite =P Yay, I'm looking forward to your next review =D Thanks for reading!!! ♥
