hey...i love your story, its really original! I cant wait to read what happens because i love stories about jame and lily and this is a cool twist! you have to update!
Author's Response: I'm happy you liked it, and I'll update ASAP. Exams are in a week, though. Thanks for the review!
Hi! I'm PansyParkinson, you recommended this fic to me in the forums. This is really great! I can't wait to read more! : ) 10/10
Author's Response: I'm very glad you liked it then! More should come soon... thanks for the review!
Can I just say that I love this so far? Really, I do. It's wonderfully original and very well-written. I like Marie-Antoinette a lot; I think her character is refreshingly human, and not Mary-Suish. I think that, with the type of story this is, a Mary-Sue would be easy to create, but you haven't done it here. Nope, you created a great character of whom I can't wait to see more.
I think the whole arranged marriage idea with James Potter is going to be really interesting. I'm very eager to read about his reaction to the whole thing, and also to see some Sirius and his reactions. I can't help but want to see Sirius. ;-) Anyway, back to the story...I'm also interested in seeing Marie-Antoinette's reaction to Lily, and vice versa. A James/OC fic is, in my opinion, something difficult to pull off, but I do think you've managed it. You've got my attention, at least.
So, I am loving this beginning and I hope you update soon! I'm very excited to see more of this so far wonderful story!
Author's Response: Wow, that's a lovely long review! I'm glad you like Marie-Antoinette, I like her a lot too; I was tired of reading only about witty, brave and bold girls, to be honest. But you're right, it was hard not to fall in the 'Mary Sue' trap. I'm happy you think I avoided it.
James' reaction will be visible in chapter 2 I think, though we may get a glimpse of him already in chapter 1 (this one being the prologue). I already know what Sirius' reaction will be, and it'll BE interesting, that's for sure!... As for the Lily/MA interaction, it will be a key part of the story. Saying no more here :PI hope I update soon too... things are a bit difficult right now, but in two weeks something should be up! thanks for reviewing!
This is so original! I love your style of writing- clean & thoughtful.
Author's Response: Thank you! I wouldn't have thought of describing my writing style as clean and thoughtful, but I definitely see what you mean.
(This is just a reply) No, I am not French. My parents just liked the name Antoinette. Marie was just for the heck of it. And they must have thought it was unlucky too because I am "Antoinette-Marie: the HP fan" haha. Anyway, I HAVE to say something about the story because this is a review. WHEN WILL YOU WRITE AGAIN????!!!!! Thank You.
Author's Response: I'm working on one of my others stories right now... when I will be fed up with that one, I'll go back to 'Marie-Antoinette'. Promise!
Wow... I can't wait to read more of this - the writing is excellent, as usual - and very interesting idea! I really like Marie-Antoinette's personality - and the world where the Dark Lord won the first battle seems a chilling one. As I said, j'attends le prochain chapitre avec impatience (apologies if that was incorrect - but it's true)!
Author's Response: Your French was correct! I'm happy you liked Marie-Antoinette's personality. After all that sort of character isn't very often written anymore. See what I mean? Every girl is brave, bold, witty etc. Marie-Antoinette may be brave, but in a more discreet fashion. Thanks for the review, I'm having a little trouble with the next chapter, but hopefully something will come up soon!
I liked the begining. You go girl! I have a little joke to share with you. My name (I am being dead serious. If you look on my profile you will see that my name "Annie" is only a nick name. My mother wouldn't let me put my real name) is Antoinette-Marie. Isn't that a hoot? Another serious jokefact: my father and my sister can't spell my name! It trully is a curse!
Author's Response: Strange, how those things happen, eh? Your name's not very common, is it? Are you French or...? Because I am (though my name's NOT Marie-Antoinette, or Antoinette-Marie), otherwise I wouldn't have thought of that idea for a story... and you must be the first Antoinette-Marie I have ever heard of.
As I have for a principle to at least MENTION the story while answering a review... I'll merely say I'm happy you liked my beginning. How stunningly original.
Great story, i've never read anything even close to this plotline before. Are you going to include the marauders?
Author's Response: Yes, I certainly will... At least one of them! Only kidding. I'll include James (obviously) and Sirius for sure, and the other two will probably appear much later in the story.
verry good i can't wait for the next one
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review