Reviews For A Few Short Words
Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 07/05/12 4:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

What!!!!!!????? This was really sad! But I suppose it was bittersweet.
I love seeing the different light writers put Snape in. Great job!

Reviewer: Seer_Witch
Date: 01/23/12 5:42
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was cute. I was a little confused at first because I was like "but he didn't leave Lily at eleven?" But I wound up enjoyed the structuring of it. I like the idea that Snape wasn't totally caught up in Lily Evans his whole life. Yes, he may have been on Lily's hook whether she wanted him to be or not, but the idea that he had somebody else on his hook is comforting. I like the idea of Sev with somebody else, too; I've read enough fics to actually really like the kid, and I like what you did with him here.

Reviewer: Rebecka Evans
Date: 07/21/08 19:22
Chapter: Chapter 1

OMG! This is so sad but awesome. I LOVE this story! However, is the girl supposed to be Lily? Because Lily was magical. I'm slightly confused, but I still love the story.

Reviewer: Emily_Anne
Date: 07/06/08 11:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

very very good =). me gusta!

Reviewer: princess_sweettart68
Date: 06/25/07 20:15
Chapter: Chapter 1

I loved this! Even though the ending is SO sad, it is really good. I have always liked Snape, and I did enjoy this story. Keep it up!

Reviewer: Fishka
Date: 10/22/06 23:01
Chapter: Chapter 1

I loved that!! I really loved that piece of work with no direct speech!

Author's Response: Thank you, I tried a work with only one line of dialogue for a school project and thought that it worked well, so I devided to try it again here. Thanks for the positive feedback!

Reviewer: JC_Cainstone
Date: 08/29/06 15:17
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was really good, I like your style of writing and the ending gave me chills! The whole story had a good, if simple and short, and effective plot and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this!

Author's Response: Thank you, I appreciate it!

Reviewer: THE_wOrms
Date: 07/27/06 17:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

oh my, oh my god. this is your FIRST fanfic! wow. i mean.... just, whoah. no words, it's just whoah. like a sad/touching/creepy/morbid/tragic/mystic -al/awe-inspiring, whoah.
*applause and tears*
I salute you!
Worms

Reviewer: THE_wOrms
Date: 07/27/06 17:11
Chapter: Chapter 1

oh my, oh my god. this is your FIRST fanfic! wow. i mean.... just, whoah. no words, it's just whoah. like a sad/touching/creepy/morbid/tragic/mystic -al/awe-inspiring, whoah.
*applause and tears*
I salute you!
Worms

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm happy you enjoyed it/ found it sad, touching, creepy, morbid, tragic, mystical and awe-inspiring. I appreciate the positive response!

Reviewer: TOMROHT
Date: 07/20/06 14:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ooh...very good. Haunting...

TOMROHT

Author's Response: Thanks! It was a tossup between dark/angsty and romance, so I flipped a coin to decide which one to put it in.

Reviewer: HogwartsxHoney
Date: 06/07/06 0:05
Chapter: Chapter 1

... Brilliant ...

Author's Response: Thanks for the praise :)

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 05/28/06 12:06
Chapter: Chapter 1

what a touching story! really well written!

Author's Response: Thanks for the positive feedback!

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 05/28/06 12:05
Chapter: Chapter 1

what a touching story! really well written!

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 05/28/06 12:05
Chapter: Chapter 1

what a touching story! really well written!

Reviewer: Bookwormy
Date: 05/28/06 8:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

I can't describe how much I liked this story. I almost cried... don't know why. It was so sad... It surely is on my faves. Well done.

Author's Response: Thanks! It's nice to know that it worked out well. Yay for book worm people!

Author's Response: Thanks! It's nice to know that it worked out well. Yay for book worm people!

Reviewer: Kerian
Date: 05/19/06 20:41
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aww very cool and sweet and angsty! I liked it!

Author's Response: Thanks! It's my first try, so I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Trucker
Date: 05/14/06 14:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is your FIRST? Wow! Keep writing!

And, as a professional truck driver, I did find it romantic.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!!! I'm always nervous about putting up stuff, so it's really great to have such a nice comment in return. Thanks again!

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