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Reviews For A Few Short Words

Name: Nagini Riddle (Signed) · Date: 07/05/12 4:13 · For: Chapter 1
What!!!!!!????? This was really sad! But I suppose it was bittersweet.
I love seeing the different light writers put Snape in. Great job!


Name: Seer_Witch (Signed) · Date: 01/23/12 5:42 · For: Chapter 1
That was cute. I was a little confused at first because I was like "but he didn't leave Lily at eleven?" But I wound up enjoyed the structuring of it. I like the idea that Snape wasn't totally caught up in Lily Evans his whole life. Yes, he may have been on Lily's hook whether she wanted him to be or not, but the idea that he had somebody else on his hook is comforting. I like the idea of Sev with somebody else, too; I've read enough fics to actually really like the kid, and I like what you did with him here.


Name: Rebecka Evans (Signed) · Date: 07/21/08 19:22 · For: Chapter 1
OMG! This is so sad but awesome. I LOVE this story! However, is the girl supposed to be Lily? Because Lily was magical. I'm slightly confused, but I still love the story.


Name: Emily_Anne (Signed) · Date: 07/06/08 11:32 · For: Chapter 1
very very good =). me gusta!


Name: princess_sweettart68 (Signed) · Date: 06/25/07 20:15 · For: Chapter 1
I loved this! Even though the ending is SO sad, it is really good. I have always liked Snape, and I did enjoy this story. Keep it up!


Name: Fishka (Signed) · Date: 10/22/06 23:01 · For: Chapter 1
I loved that!! I really loved that piece of work with no direct speech!

Author's Response: Thank you, I tried a work with only one line of dialogue for a school project and thought that it worked well, so I devided to try it again here. Thanks for the positive feedback!


Name: JC_Cainstone (Signed) · Date: 08/29/06 15:17 · For: Chapter 1
That was really good, I like your style of writing and the ending gave me chills! The whole story had a good, if simple and short, and effective plot and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this!

Author's Response: Thank you, I appreciate it!


Name: THE_wOrms (Anonymous) · Date: 07/27/06 17:14 · For: Chapter 1
oh my, oh my god. this is your FIRST fanfic! wow. i mean.... just, whoah. no words, it's just whoah. like a sad/touching/creepy/morbid/tragic/mystic -al/awe-inspiring, whoah.
*applause and tears*
I salute you!
Worms


Name: THE_wOrms (Anonymous) · Date: 07/27/06 17:11 · For: Chapter 1
oh my, oh my god. this is your FIRST fanfic! wow. i mean.... just, whoah. no words, it's just whoah. like a sad/touching/creepy/morbid/tragic/mystic -al/awe-inspiring, whoah.
*applause and tears*
I salute you!
Worms

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm happy you enjoyed it/ found it sad, touching, creepy, morbid, tragic, mystical and awe-inspiring. I appreciate the positive response!


Name: TOMROHT (Signed) · Date: 07/20/06 14:07 · For: Chapter 1
Ooh...very good. Haunting...

TOMROHT

Author's Response: Thanks! It was a tossup between dark/angsty and romance, so I flipped a coin to decide which one to put it in.


Name: HogwartsxHoney (Signed) · Date: 06/07/06 0:05 · For: Chapter 1
... Brilliant ...

Author's Response: Thanks for the praise :)


Name: Valentinia (Signed) · Date: 05/28/06 12:06 · For: Chapter 1
what a touching story! really well written!

Author's Response: Thanks for the positive feedback!


Name: Valentinia (Signed) · Date: 05/28/06 12:05 · For: Chapter 1
what a touching story! really well written!


Name: Valentinia (Signed) · Date: 05/28/06 12:05 · For: Chapter 1
what a touching story! really well written!


Name: Bookwormy (Signed) · Date: 05/28/06 8:20 · For: Chapter 1
I can't describe how much I liked this story. I almost cried... don't know why. It was so sad... It surely is on my faves. Well done.

Author's Response: Thanks! It's nice to know that it worked out well. Yay for book worm people!

Author's Response: Thanks! It's nice to know that it worked out well. Yay for book worm people!


Name: Kerian (Signed) · Date: 05/19/06 20:41 · For: Chapter 1
Aww very cool and sweet and angsty! I liked it!

Author's Response: Thanks! It's my first try, so I'm glad you liked it!


Name: Trucker (Signed) · Date: 05/14/06 14:53 · For: Chapter 1
This is your FIRST? Wow! Keep writing!

And, as a professional truck driver, I did find it romantic.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!!! I'm always nervous about putting up stuff, so it's really great to have such a nice comment in return. Thanks again!


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