I ADORE THIS!
Gosh it's excellent!
The symbolism, the emotion, and the traditional references are amazing. It honestly sounds like something Draco would do to deal with the guilt of his father's villanous behavior. This is now one of my favorite fanfics just because of the metaphors and the simplicity yet complex way you arranged it. Congratulations!
That was just so sweet. It's just like 'Umbrellas'. Amazing. It actually made me cry. You're amazingly talented.
This was... amazing. It had a lot of feeling to it. I loved it. You're a good writer.
CUTE!!!! SO SO SO SO SO SO CUUUUUUUUTE!!!
beautiful story. what else can i say? you took a tiny incident and built something wonderful around it. the passing of the note in the 3rd film gives this fic a whole new depth that lots of fics dont have, especially harry/draco ones, they're usually quite unrealistic but urs was so believeable. and sad! thank you xoxox
That was ridiculously beautiful.
I wish I could write like you.
Wow, this fic was very beautiful. I loved it!
This fic is beautifly metaphoric and has a child like innocence that not many people can write so well as you. And as for it's companion...equal in beauty.
This fic is beautifly metaphoric and has a child like innocence that not many people can write so well as you. And as for it's companion...equal in beauty.
Wow! I can't imagine anyone making a thousand cranes that quickly! It takes me forever just to do one. I liked the imagery in your story, and the reflective mood in which it is written.
Wow! I can't imagine anyone making a thousand cranes that quickly! It takes me forever just to do one. I liked the imagery in your story, and the reflective mood in which it is written.
Wow! I can't imagine anyone making a thousand cranes that quickly! It takes me forever just to do one. I liked the imagery in your story, and the reflective mood in which it is written.
Wow! I can't imagine anyone making a thousand cranes that quickly! It takes me forever just to do one. I liked the imagery in your story, and the reflective mood in which it is written.
hi love the fanf fic just one tiny promblem with it. you say it was inspired by the crane scene in goblet of fire in potions,but this was in prisoner of azkaban and in defencs against the dark arts but snape is covering. other than that keep up the good work
hi love the fanf fic just one tiny promblem with it. you say it was inspired by the crane scene in goblet of fire in potions,but this was in prisoner of azkaban and in defencs against the dark arts but snape is covering. other than that keep up the good work
oh my God, this was amazing! So incredibly sweet! I loved it! It looks to the future but has a very painful nostalgia.
It's an odd fic but I like it. It ilistrates for me that love can win over hatred.
not sure i understand, it's sad that Draco had so many people he (i'm guessing) cared about die, that would be really hard to deal with, and were it true, i could understand why Draco would be the way he is.
