Reviews For Mistaken Love
Reviewer: ll1987
Date: 01/11/08 20:48
Chapter: Thundering Decisions Strike

if its a full moon, then how come lupin is sat in the great hall? shoudlnt he have already turned into a warewolf?

Reviewer: dargon12
Date: 12/05/07 15:14
Chapter: The Storm

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
keep up the good work

Reviewer: dargon12
Date: 05/28/07 19:53
Chapter: Roars and Silence

awesome chapter

Reviewer: Irish writter
Date: 05/02/07 21:23
Chapter: Roars and Silence

I love your stiry and think it has a great plot. I think it will just get better and better with more chapters. SO UPDATE SOON!!!! And soon would be nice.


(Hope my encouragement helped!:)

The Irish Writter

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 05/02/07 20:56
Chapter: Roars and Silence

I want to see Harry and Ginny together!
Nice chapter, anyhow.
Update soon, please!

Reviewer: AHP
Date: 04/06/07 17:49
Chapter: Thundering Decisions Strike

update quickly-i loved that chapter

Reviewer: bruja92
Date: 03/15/07 20:24
Chapter: Confessions with Darkness

cool

Reviewer: hpjunky
Date: 01/27/07 22:40
Chapter: The Calm Before a Storm

omg! I love your story! Update soon!! I'm dying to know what the hell is going to happen!!

Reviewer: joybelle423
Date: 11/29/06 19:45
Chapter: Like Father, Like Son

Wow! I can't believe it got accepted already -- ok, maybe I can, because it's so very good! I really want to know what happens next . . .

Reviewer: draco_lover147
Date: 10/01/06 14:46
Chapter: Truths Untold

please update soon. I love this soo much

Reviewer: AurorGirl101
Date: 09/08/06 13:36
Chapter: Confessions with Darkness

WOW!! This sure has come a long way since I was beta-ing it. I'm glad to see it was acceptedd and it now fluorishing, and getting lotsa reviews!! Good luck, and I cant wiat to see more!

Reviewer: amandahp
Date: 09/06/06 19:40
Chapter: Truths Untold

I love your story! write more and keep up the great work! You are a great writer.

Reviewer: Mrs JamesPotter
Date: 08/28/06 21:35
Chapter: Truths Untold

MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: carlay_parfait
Date: 08/19/06 10:37
Chapter: Confessions with Darkness

Update soon! I love your stories!

Reviewer: xXCandy_Dishx3
Date: 08/10/06 16:07
Chapter: Confessions with Darkness

Your a very great writer. And I really hope you update it soon. Because this is a awsome story and I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: carlay_parfait
Date: 08/07/06 19:54
Chapter: Confessions with Darkness

I love your stories! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Please update soon!!!!! lol.

Reviewer: rockstaragent
Date: 07/31/06 21:00
Chapter: Unpredictable Things

please another chapter I really liked this one is there any way you can add another one?

Author's Response: i'm working on it! =]

Reviewer: Chaser47
Date: 07/01/06 14:39
Chapter: Confessions with Darkness

I can't lie to you. I was a bit turned off when I saw that Harry ran into a beautiful girl on the stairs of Hogwarts, someone he has never seen before, and then chases after her into the Forbidden Forest. But really, I think that you wrote the situation well.

Ron has always been a good liar and she was always able to tell when he lied, How can someone be a good liar, but Hermione can always tell when he lies? Maybe you should say but she has always been able to tell when he lies.

I think that you kept Hermione very in character when you wrote her, which is good, but Ron seemed a bit off to me. I would imagine that he would be a bit more awkward in a situation like that, especially if it was the first time he was ever really acknowledging the fact that he loves Hermione.

Why are you always looking for something to fight? How does Bethatny know that Harry is... confrontational if they only just met? She would probably know the basics about him, but not a major aspect of his character like that.

I like how you made Bethany fiesty, but some of the things she says boarder on rudeness. For someone who seems to know a lot about Harry, I would think that she would at least try to sound civil towards him.

Nice first chapter, and good luck on the ones to come!



Author's Response: Bethany has history that I haven't wrote about yet. She tells off Harry a lot because she has her reasons. She's not nice to Harry because she doesn't find him fragile like everyone else does. And Harry follows her into the forest because he has a 'connection' to her. So, before I give away too much, I'll stop. I hope you read my other chapters. Thanks for your comments. I agree with Ron. I wrote him out character. I admit that... Thanks again! -katie

Reviewer: abbycadabra
Date: 06/24/06 18:06
Chapter: The Difference Between Free Will and Force

Hmm...good story. I hate when people have Dumbledore's "relatives" included in their stories (except for Aberforth, of course), but I am intrigued by this. I can't wait to see where it goes with Harry and Bethany (poor Ginny...), so update soon!

Reviewer: Seriously in love with Sirius
Date: 06/22/06 10:04
Chapter: The Difference Between Free Will and Force

Look!! It's chapter four and I'm leaving a review!!!! Even though you forgot to tell me that it was accepted!! **cough cough** This is the best fourth chapter I have ever read...The fourth chapters of stories are usually bad...including mine...but not yours.... You rock!! **ahem** OMG!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! I'M ADDING YOU TO MY FAVBORITES!!! UPDATE SOON!!! 10/10!!! [/fangirl squeeling rant]

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