Reviews For Semi Charmed Life
Reviewer: lily_writes
Date: 09/09/06 18:37
Chapter: Same Old Witchcraft

How did you think up the name, Panglossian? Is it Latin? *rereads few last lines and laughs* Grimmy the Wonder Dog, that's our Sirius! I'm so happy that he stopped the other Marauders from seeing Rosie and the other women, but why don't they just go up on the mountain? Where they're safe from Moony, possibly? Nice how Sirius was helping Peter, and himself with the Jane problem. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I had to read Candide for a class, lol, and Dr. Pangloss the foolish optimist is where the term originated from. I like the way it sounds, heh. No faery rings on the mountain, and a heck of a lot colder! I put the next chap in the queue, so hopefully you'll see what they're up to soon!

Reviewer: Lioness06
Date: 09/09/06 9:47
Chapter: Same Old Witchcraft

good chapter ! i really like the idea of Sirius and Rosmerta. That was really funny when Peter said "I'd drool" - i actually laughed out loud

Author's Response: Yay for laughing out loud! Thank you! :D

Reviewer: Lioness06
Date: 09/09/06 9:47
Chapter: Same Old Witchcraft

good chapter ! i really like the idea of Sirius and Rosmerta. That was really funny when Peter said "I'd drool" - i actually laughed out loud

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like the idea of Sirius and Rosmerta! They're non canon, and yet, when I read PoA now, thinking 'what if Rosmerta was playing 'blonde' when she was talking to the professors at the broomsticks and already knew about Sirius?'...the scene reads very differently! :D

Reviewer: Maeve_Issyra
Date: 09/09/06 5:52
Chapter: Same Old Witchcraft

Author's Response: Yay for starry eyed faces! ^_^ I wish your friend would read too, because I want everyone to read, lol, but I'm more than happy you are, and that you enjoyed the chapter!

When I see him again, I'll tell him to get the hell up here and read. Can't guarantee he will, though. Did you know, whenever I start talking about MNFF to him, he thinks I'm obsessed? *_* (Because you like the starry eyes so much!)

Author's Response: The eyes have it, LOL. Tell your friend I do have a male reader who likes the story very much, so it's guy-approved. heh. Thanks for being so encouraging!

Reviewer: Julybug
Date: 09/09/06 0:48
Chapter: Same Old Witchcraft

I totally cheated and read this on the other site already. But it's brilliant, of course, so I read it again here. Reading this story *totally* makes me want to make out with Sirius. Good job. Now I'm all...frustrated...and stuff...

Author's Response: I'm happy and sad. Happy you reviewed the chap here, and sad about the frustration factor. Vicarious romance is better than none with Sirius. Look at the glass as half full, LOL. Thanks for making me grin! :D

Reviewer: brokenhearted
Date: 09/08/06 15:43
Chapter: Same Old Witchcraft

I'm glad you make Peter a main character, unlike those other authors who don't want to write him so they ignore him. But he is a main character! Of course, what would I expect from Kerichi but the perfect story? I applaud you. And Remus for saving those women from the ogling eyes of Wormtail.

Do you enjoy writing Remus as a teenager as much as in your other stories? I find him sexier in the other ones, but maybe that's because his mouth is on Tonks' the majority of the time. Oh, how I envy that woman.

Out of all the characters you get to write, which one would you say is most like you? If I had to guess, I'd say Tonks since you write her first person. But, then again, I've written a first person story, and I was the complete opposite of the character.

Your stories are so unawkward, and I don't care if that's not a word. It's like you don't even try to make them sound good. They just are. Is it ever hard?

Author's Response: I'm glad you like that Peter isn't shunted off to the library or left behind on adventures. I try to see him like Sirius, with his 'good' points outweighing the irritating.

Adult!Remus is my fave to write about. I'm the rabid Remus/Tonks shipper who pairs him with Dorcas as a teen in all fics because the girl dies. (awful of me, heh) I think we're each character when we write them or read them, so I'm like all of them at different times. :D

Thanks for the compliment!I've had days when I did not want to sit down and write, when I had no idea what was going to happen, but it all works out, and I'm glad I kept writing.

Thank you for having kept reading! ^_^

Reviewer: Maeve_Issyra
Date: 09/08/06 13:27
Chapter: Same Old Witchcraft

I love this story! Love it love it love it! Of this chapter in particular, I loved the Dumbledore-McGonagall hint and the way Rosmerta signed her letter - that was so AMAZINGLY (is that a proper English word? *serious thinking face*) cute! I wish I could get my best friend to open up like this a little bit. Hm. I won't finish that thought. Carry on! Please oh please carry on *_*

Author's Response: Yay for starry eyed faces! ^_^ I wish your friend would read too, because I want everyone to read, lol, but I'm more than happy you are, and that you enjoyed the chapter!

Reviewer: lily_writes
Date: 09/07/06 17:25
Chapter: Same Old Witchcraft

I tried to read this chapter and all I got was "access denied".... Waiting impatiently (in a good way) for more Sirius. PS: I've nominated this story under OP for the Quicksilver Quill awards in the forums. ;)

Author's Response: *shrieks like a fangirl* Thank you so much! The Severus chap got validated, so I threw this one into the queue asap. Hopefully in a few days it will be up. Thanks for waiting impatiently, and being kind enough to nominate me. I'm thrilled! ^_^

Reviewer: Julybug
Date: 08/26/06 22:09
Chapter: Old Black Magic

Pathetic - only 4 reviews for this chapter? It's fantastic! Oh yeah - I'm slow, too. Maybe everyone else is as slow as I am in telling you how great your story is and how much they enjoy reading it. Here's to hoping they get on it and tell you, like I am now - great job, excellent character development ...steamy without going too far ...yummy (that'd be Sirius), what else... delicious... I love the push and pull between Sirius and Rosemerta. Keep the good work coming! I look forward to reading everything you throw at us.

Author's Response: Thank you! Right now, SCL is a cult hit, LOL, but I hope more readers will come out of the lurker closet....come to the light...or the Dark side...whichever they prefer. :D I'll put another chapter in the queue as soon as it opens and the ones promised to clear validate. Thank you again for making me look forward even more to sharing the story! ^_^

Reviewer: lily_writes
Date: 08/18/06 21:26
Chapter: Old Black Magic

Absolutely wonderful chapter! I loved every bit of it. Good thing Sirius has some brains (for casting that Disillusionment Charm), but aparently not enough to listen to the Peter and Remus parts of his conscience. Though I liked the flashback, it was very cute (you should do a mini-fic about Sirius returning to Grimmauld Place, finding the pillows and then ripping them up; just a thought). I think my favorite line was: “She said, ‘You are thick as custard, but luckily for you, I love custard.’ Then she kissed me.” While Sirius stared in amazement, James said, “When you woke me up, I’d been dreaming I was an enormous bowl of custard, and Lily was slathering me all over her…” That was too funny. I have to agree with Sirius, Jane is beyond clueless. She may have some brains when it comes to classes, but she is d-i-m when it comes to Padfoot. I just have one question (okay, maybe two). Are we going to see more of Rosie trying to set up Fiona and Mr. McInnes (is that right?)? And when will chapter 13 come out?

Author's Response: Fiona and Hamish will work their way toward coupledom, lol, and if one of the two fics that have been jamming my queue for days get validated, (cross fingers, eyes, anything!) I'll put another chap of this fic in asap!

Reviewer: Maeve_Issyra
Date: 08/18/06 11:50
Chapter: Grow the Roses

Author's Response: "Don't die!" Allright then, because you ask so nicely ;)
"The world would mourn..." Makes one think, doesn't it? "I would mourn...:D" I am very touched. "Can't say what happened between James and Lily, but his hair was smoothed down when he came back, LOL." No need, I already found out ^_^ And it sure as hell was! "Thanks so much for telling me the bits you liked." You're welcome! "Made my day!" That's what I try to do *_*

Author's Response: And you do such an excellent job! The little face at the end was appropriate, because good reviews like yours leave writers starry eyed! *_*

Reviewer: Maeve_Issyra
Date: 08/18/06 10:51
Chapter: Grow the Roses

A few words of comment.

"Because I'm so damn gorgeous, mate."

You're going to kill me with your sense of humour one day, I swear.

What a wonderful kiss. I do wonder what happened between James and Lily, smirk.

"He hadn't promised to wait in the kitchen, had he?"

Very amusing. Very amusing indeed.

Keep it up like this!

Author's Response: Don't die! The world would mourn...I would mourn...:D Can't say what happened between James and Lily, but his hair was smoothed down when he came back, LOL. Thanks so much for telling me the bits you liked. Made my day!

Reviewer: brokenhearted
Date: 08/14/06 14:09
Chapter: Old Black Magic

Sirius mad? Yay! Oh... uh... I mean... so long as he doesn't hurt anyone... besides Jane and Peter.

Author's Response: Even when he's angry, he's still a Siriusly good guy...although he has a black streak...bwahaha...ha... ;D

Reviewer: sweeterthanhunny
Date: 08/14/06 9:22
Chapter: Old Black Magic

James and Sirius: two peas in a pod- even have the same sleep pattern. tut tut *shakes head* Sirius shoulda known James would fall asleep aswell. Great chapter, as usual.

Author's Response: Thanks, and yes he should have! :D They remind me of Fred and George, without finishing sentences for each other or being twins, lol.

Reviewer: snowy_owl_92
Date: 08/14/06 9:00
Chapter: Old Black Magic

am i the first to review? i was going to review yesterday, but mt mom was screaming at me to get off the computer so i didn't have time... =(
BTW, nice story. update soon.

Author's Response: Yay for you being the first reviewer...and double for your mum not screaming that today! :D Thanks!

Reviewer: loveoverevil
Date: 08/13/06 13:21
Chapter: The Wild One

Wait, sorry I thought it was in a different category. I'm just an airhead. Dont' mind me.

Author's Response: I do have a couple of Mary Sue parodies, if you're looking for outright humour. :D If you keep reading this story, however, I guarantee you'll smile a lot.

Reviewer: loveoverevil
Date: 08/13/06 13:17
Chapter: The Wild One

This really isn't funny. It's mostly just long and cheesy. However good writing, if that makes any sense. I just think it's in the wrong category.

Author's Response: I think all fics, even romances, should have a sense of humour, although mine's the smiley, not slapstick, kind. : ) The first chap is introduce-the-romantic-pair. Second chap, Marauders, and village life come into play. If you read it, you'll like it!

Reviewer: lainey3600
Date: 08/10/06 22:22
Chapter: Grow the Roses

Oooooh, what's he gonna do? Another cliffie, honestly, don't you ever get tired of them? Or is it like an addiction, where you build up tolerance and need even more of them to satisfy your sick, twisted need to hear readers cries of agony? LOL

I just realized that Semi-Charmed Life is the name of a Third Eye Blind song. Is that where you got the title?

Author's Response: I want something else, to get me through this life, baby... Yeah, I liked the tune, all those do-do-do's, catchy. :D I prefer to think Cliffies hold interest, give readers something to look forward to. ;)

Reviewer: Julybug
Date: 08/09/06 14:28
Chapter: Grow the Roses

Jeezum crow - the last bit with the it hot in here? I don't know why I've not reviewed this yet - it's a great story, quite out of the ordinary, but so well done. Rosemerta is so well drawn, really, you've got excellent character development all around. I look forward to reading more.

Author's Response: *grins ear to ear* Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're reviewing now, and like the story..and the kissing...romance fics should have lots of kissing- it's a moral imperative! ^_~

Reviewer: hogwartsgirlhg
Date: 08/07/06 10:41
Chapter: Grow the Roses

not some thing i usually read but i like it write more

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you gave a pairing you don't usually read a chance! ^_^

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