Reviews For Freeze
Reviewer: sonal
Date: 07/05/06 7:07
Chapter: Chapter 5: The Thaw

awww such a sweet story and such a sweet ending. i love ron n hermione n loved your story as well. wish u wud write more stories about them.

Reviewer: MrsMurphy
Date: 07/01/06 18:01
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Parcel

I absolutely love this story! It's so well written. I can't wait for the last chapter!

Reviewer: Levicorpus010
Date: 06/30/06 8:59
Chapter: Chapter 4: Frozen

Wow! This is great! Just enough humor and sadness. You're a great writer!!!! I hope ch. 5 is here soon, I can hardly wait!

Reviewer: phoenix_tears13
Date: 06/29/06 11:54
Chapter: Chapter 4: Frozen

very cool, liking it more all the time

Reviewer: phoenix_tears13
Date: 06/29/06 11:33
Chapter: Chapter 2: Roommates


Reviewer: phoenix_tears13
Date: 06/29/06 11:26
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Parcel


Reviewer: windie
Date: 06/27/06 9:54
Chapter: Chapter 4: Frozen

great story! i'm loving the way you are developing this r/h dynamic! keep the chapters coming!

Author's Response: You rock for reviewing. Thanks. :)

Reviewer: Kelin
Date: 06/26/06 18:47
Chapter: Chapter 4: Frozen

Maaan...Close call back there! When'll Tom find out about Ron?

Author's Response: HEE HEE HEE

Reviewer: Kelin
Date: 06/26/06 18:42
Chapter: Chapter 3: Bygones

Awwww....So where did Hermione's letter go?

Author's Response: Um... what letter are you talking about?

Reviewer: futureMRSpadfoot
Date: 06/25/06 19:22
Chapter: Chapter 4: Frozen

I really love this story..I love the whole consept of the frezzing, and how it (as far as i can tell) is going to bring them together..please keep up with this, its great!

Author's Response: Awww... thanks! Happy reviews are the bomb. Have a good day!

Reviewer: qwerty123
Date: 06/25/06 8:43
Chapter: Chapter 4: Frozen

i love this story!
keep up the good work!!
update soon pls!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks man, will do! :)

Reviewer: Kelin
Date: 06/24/06 19:51
Chapter: Chapter 2: Roommates

Oooh! So what'd Ron do to Hermione?

Reviewer: Kelin
Date: 06/24/06 19:44
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Parcel

Nice start! Interesting, seeing Hermione living as a Muggle....or could've been a little clearer. But Muggle!Hermione is a bit OOC, don't you think?
On to the next chappie now...

Reviewer: Ice Nine IV
Date: 06/24/06 16:16
Chapter: Chapter 4: Frozen

Sorry but the nerd in me is flaring up.

Xbox 360 didn't come out till late 05, meaning that you would have to account for nearly 9 years from the end of the books, which you don't. 02 was Xbox, so that's plausible, but you really would have been better off saying Playstation 2.

Beyond that it was a great chapter.

Author's Response: I hate it when your nerdy side flares up. Actually, I have no clue what you're talking about. And I really want to. So email me or something.

Reviewer: Ice Nine IV
Date: 06/24/06 13:38
Chapter: Chapter 3: Bygones

I like the chapter, it's well laid out, and Informative. But I'm gonna say one thing, and don't hit me or anything.

This chapter, to me, seems to be the one that really sets up the conflict here. The problem as I see it, is that you've said it's only going to be five chapters. Which means you've just started your conflict but now you have only two chapters to build it up between them in the present, then have a resolution and a wrap up. I haven't read the last two yet of course, but the pacing here could end up feeling rushed at the end.

But it's still a great chapter and all that.

Author's Response: Yeah well, you can thank Bjorn for that one. I had a lot less going on in the story - everything was more... "short and sweet" and he kept telling me to put more in there. So yeah, unless I added another 3 chappies to this story - which I"m not gonna - it may seemed a little rushed. But I refuse to add more chaps. Heck, a five chap story was pushin' it for me already. I'm more of a one-shot girl. Bam, bam, bam. (By the way, I'm confused. Am I talking to the nerdy Ice or the cool Ice? Hmm...)

Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 06/24/06 13:20
Chapter: Chapter 4: Frozen

OOPS-sorry, my bad. Forgot to go back and reread to keep myself up date with what has already happened. Good chapter. Really looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: You know... you brought up an interesting point. I read a lot of fan fics myself and when you have so many saved in your favs and then an author updates, it's like "what the heck happened a month ago? Can't remember. Is this the story with the circus or the bus or the-?" I remember reading a fan fic (can't remember the author to give them credit and that sucks 'cause they deserve it) but they put a brief synopsis of the previous chapter at the begining of each new one. It was so cool because you were instantly reminded which story it was. To make a long story short (TOO LATE), I should have done that. I guess I can always go back and do that...

Reviewer: Khrys
Date: 06/24/06 11:59
Chapter: Chapter 4: Frozen

This is another wonderful chapter. I like how you have incorporated different Muggle ideas into your story, drawing out the torturous meetings (No, that's not the right word... encounters, maybe) between Ron and Hermione. You chapter flows smoothly and the emotions feel completley genuine. I was shocked, for a moment, when Hermione broke her date. Then, I realized that it made perfect sense. They are coming together in just the right amount of time, making it completely believable. By the way, I have a small end table in my bedroom made out of my college textbooks. Go Hermione!

Author's Response: Khrys, you get the "BEST REVIEWS EVER WRITTEN" award, I swear. I don't know how you do it, but you always do. Heck, I'M not even that good and I thought I had a pretty good handle on that sort of thing. By the way - cool about the table! Rock on. *hi-5*

Reviewer: heartsdesire456
Date: 06/24/06 11:59
Chapter: Chapter 4: Frozen

lol, its funny trying to imagine Ron playing an X-Box... LOL! actually, its almost as funny as trying to imagine me trying to figure out all those buttons and knobs... LOL! great story.. UPDATE ASAP! but im happy for now.

Author's Response: Hey, thank you for reviewing! I had fun with the game stuff. Helps that husband and I play games together so I kinda knew what I was talkin' about there. Keep your eyes peeled - Chap 5 - final chap - is on its way!

Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 06/24/06 8:12
Chapter: Chapter 4: Frozen

Competetion! Almost as good as arguing. I REALLY want to know what happened 3 years ago. Looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Er... that's what chapter 3 was about. ??

Reviewer: hpmaniac666
Date: 06/24/06 5:29
Chapter: Chapter 4: Frozen


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