Damn, someone beat me to the first review. YAY! It's up! Woohoo. And after all my naysaying, 'parcel of doom' did the trick. You got a chuckle out of me... FRIEND! I love the final draft, and I loved working on it with you, but thank you for the author's note. Now, I wonder how many other people will, like me, see how brilliant the word "pointy" is, much like I wonder when I'll get to see chapter 2... FRIEND!
Author's Response: LOL ...okay, okay. I get the hint.
Excellent beginning. I am looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Glad to hear it, thank you.