Reviewer: JusticeForMedea
Date: 11/29/06 23:15
Chapter: Learning About Light And Dark

Hmmm... Interesting. I like the way you split the lines, and the lack of rhyme is daring. Not many chance it, I can think of only once that I've tried it, not that I'm this amazing writer or anything :p. Good job, keep writing.

Author's Response: I think poems are a lot easier to write without rhymes, actually. Not that I'm speaking with much experience here, hee hee. :) Thanks so much!

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot
Date: 08/28/06 16:36
Chapter: Learning About Light And Dark

Really good! Love it! WIcked poem!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks, I never thought I was much of a poet! ;)

Reviewer: Sly Severus
Date: 06/23/06 22:37
Chapter: Learning About Light And Dark

Cool take on Severus' thoughts. He is such a great character, my all time favorite! You do really interesting things with him. Good work!

Author's Response: Yes, Snape is the best. :) Thanks very much!

Reviewer: MrsRuebeusHagridDursley
Date: 06/03/06 14:48
Chapter: Learning About Light And Dark

I actually thought this was pretty good. I see how it relates to real life and I liked that.

Author's Response: Yeah, what I love about the HP series is how, even though it is fantasy, a lot of it is very real, and I try to keep that realism in my work. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Heiress_of_Slytherin
Date: 05/20/06 11:09
Chapter: Learning About Light And Dark

Whoa, Snape's got a consciense! Don't see that everyday, eh? THIS POEM ROX! And forgive me if I spelled consciense wrong.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it! And if you're interested, it's conscience. S'okay, I just learned how to spell disgusted a few days ago. :)

Reviewer: HermioneTonks
Date: 05/13/06 16:47
Chapter: Learning About Light And Dark

*mouth falls off*
Wow!!!!!!!!!!! That is way totally Wicked!!!!! You go girl!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much!

Reviewer: HorcruxHunter14
Date: 05/10/06 18:02
Chapter: Learning About Light And Dark

I liked it. You did a good job of showing what snape was going through.

Author's Response: Thank you! Your review is appreciated!

Reviewer: hufflepuffgal
Date: 05/10/06 15:17
Chapter: Learning About Light And Dark

Interesting poem.

Author's Response: Thank you!

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