lol, now chapter 3. this chapter was great but i don't understand why hermiones with ron..she obviously doesn't love him
great...on to the next chapter
Your story so totally rocks!!!!!! So like finish it.
Wow.. will you make that Ron discovers Harry? Or you'll keep prolong the discovery? I just can't make my mind too about Harry and Cho will turn out. As i know, both Harry and Hermione is still loving each other.
I didn't really like the first scene because there was Cho in Harry's life within two years and about the baby. Maybe, you are going to plan other conflicts. I hope that baby wasn't Harry's. And the mystery is still there about why Harry came into Hermione's life like that after ten years uncontact and still being with Cho. What had made him thinked to act like that. The last comment is poor Ron. When the true will come on the surface?
I think it's a good idea of the engagement. There will be more conflicts. As for the way of Harry came to the reunion, i confused why Harry did something like that to Hermione. He knew that Ron had made him to not contact with others. Why Harry kept to meet Hermione?
I like this chapter..
it maked me wonder what will the story going on..
keep up good ok!!
I hope you aren’t in hurry, so you can describe more in your story. I think, in some parts, you can prolong yours, so readers can feel the scenes.
I love your story! It is really fun to read and hard to quit reading. I can't wait untill the next chapter!
great story so far. can't wait to read more.
please update immediately..really wanting to read the next chapter...*wink*
Ahhhh!!! Cliffhanger. Nooo!!! Please update soon, this wait's killing me.
I heart your stories but tell me whan is the next chapter cominig out?
Great chapter!!
I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Cont soon
AHH. OMG. Please please update soon! I really want to know what's happening. I feel so bad for Harry and Hermione. They clearly love eachother, but Ron is just getting in the way! Lol. I really am wondering what will happen when Ron finds Harry. Will Harry be able to Apparate out of Hermione's closet? Oh boy... ;) I really look forward to reading the next chapter! :]
[[ xx vicky ]]
AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! More please.
OOOOOOO very evil cliffie! I love this fic, and it's wonderfully believable. I love it how Hermione is trying to balance her love for Harry with Ron's happiness - really believable predicament.
OMG Harry wins over Ron anyday. Hermione is really bad at making up excuses too :). I love it. Poor Harry, having to watch Ron and Hermione making out.. not awkward or anyting. Anyway keep up the good work!
its been a long time since i read this story, i had to reread the first chapter to remember. Please hurry up with the next chapters!