Reviewer: JasonBourne
Date: 07/08/09 23:31
Chapter: Loyalties

Very good story, spent the past few days reading all of it. Hopefully we'll see an update before 2010 ;)

Reviewer: alyssa_S
Date: 04/26/09 4:49
Chapter: Loyalties

plz plz pretty pretty plz updat soon. i just found your story and am hooked. it is a very good story and i like how ginny has just come into it. hopefully u'll update soon! i'm putting this story in my favs!!!!

Reviewer: ginnylover5
Date: 02/11/09 20:45
Chapter: A Dish Served Cold

update asap this is an awesome story

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 01/16/09 22:58
Chapter: Delacours Arrival

Well, sounds like everyone will have a nice time at the wedding. Ginny seems disappointed that she can't go with Harry and the others.
She seems sadden, that she can't go, but it is for the best.
Great story by the way.

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 01/16/09 22:37
Chapter: The Homecoming

I really like this story! Congratulations on your first fanfic..It takes alot of courage to put a fan fic out here on the internet.
I'm glad the Dursleys were civil to Harry and his friends. At least they got good meals.

Reviewer: Kris potter
Date: 01/15/09 16:25
Chapter: A Dish Served Cold

this was great, hope you update soon,
im looking forward to read the rest

Reviewer: dona682
Date: 11/10/08 0:04
Chapter: Holiday Intrusion

Love your newest charater. ALSO, YO SHOW GOOD USAGE OF COMIC RELEIF

Reviewer: dona682
Date: 11/09/08 23:21
Chapter: The Forest

It would have beentoo easy toget the horcrux. Nice treatment of Mudungus. You made him alittle more balanced than he is usually depicted. looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Javah
Date: 11/06/08 21:23
Chapter: Little Hangelton Burns

I liked this chapter. The only bad part is having to reread the rest of the story to remember what had already happened. Please try to update quicker on the next chapter. I can't wait.

Reviewer: mlskojin
Date: 11/02/08 23:12
Chapter: Little Hangelton Burns

That was a good chapter. You may have to wait before you start getting more reviews because people will have to reread the story to realize what has happen before. But it was a good chapter and continued the story well. I can't wait to read the end.

Author's Response: thanks for the compliment. and yeah i realize that i won't be getting a lot of reviews seeing as i'm taking so long. my goal right now is to get it in.

Reviewer: snpdrgn
Date: 07/10/08 9:16
Chapter: The Battle Begins

Great chapter!  Very exciting now that the battle is underway!  Looking forward to finding out what happen's next and who this other "fake" death eater is!

Author's Response: glad that you liked it, and the next chapter is in the works. as for the "fake" death eater it was really only someone coming out of the imperius curse, and starting to attack real death eaters. sorry if i didn't make that clear enough.

Reviewer: Ravenclaws Noble Heir
Date: 06/01/08 10:52
Chapter: Holiday Intrusion

I’m not going to stand in the way of her standing in your way, boys,” I love that line!!

*~* Ravenclaw's Noble Heir *~*

Reviewer: Ravenclaws Noble Heir
Date: 04/26/08 14:11
Chapter: The Spell

Your chapters are certainly very long but I'm getting use to it. Keep on writing, you have a talent for it, as do everyone who takes the time off to write an incredible story for the enjoyment of others.
Thank You!

*~* Ravenclaws Noble Heir *~*

Author's Response: i will. glad you enjoy it.

Reviewer: Ravenclaws Noble Heir
Date: 04/20/08 18:19
Chapter: A Month's Wait

*sigh* First I was complaining in other stories that there chapters were too short, now I'm complaining again. These are too long!

*~* Ravenclaw's Noble Heir *~*

Author's Response: yeah i'm really bipolar when it comes to length.

Reviewer: Ravenclaws Noble Heir
Date: 04/20/08 18:13
Chapter: Delacours Arrival

Ron is such a hungry belly dog!

I mean is he ever going to change?

To tell the truth I never really liked Ron.

To me he was just necessary to complete the story.

Always jealous of Harry and he has a nasty temper too not to mention irrational.

*~* Ravenclaw's Noble Heir *~*

Author's Response: hm, ron is actually my favorite character. well we all have our own preferences, i just hope you keep on reading.

Reviewer: crazyhpgirl
Date: 04/19/08 22:28
Chapter: Change in Plans

I can't believe Ron did that! I would never have expected, which means you are doing a great job as an author. Keep up the great work and update soon!

Author's Response: i'm doing a great job? wow thanks a lot.

Reviewer: harryfan100
Date: 04/18/08 18:38
Chapter: Change in Plans

wow the last time I read the story was when you released the key and the vault, then I think I took this off of my favorite stories list because you hadn't updated fro like 7 months

Author's Response: more like 4, but i see your point. i would release chapters faster if i could.

Reviewer: harrietamidala
Date: 04/17/08 18:29
Chapter: Change in Plans

ron was a mole to infiltrate the death eaters? Never saw that coming? But what were the clues in the story? What did I miss? Was that the mysterious mission Ron was assigned to?

Author's Response: ron only showed up as a death eater once in the story, and i only gave VERY subtle hint as to his true indentity, him saying that you can only be a traitor if you were on that side in the first place (chapters 4 and 27). i'm gonna explain more later on.

Reviewer: harrietamidala
Date: 03/28/08 11:42
Chapter: Betrayals

I am confused. When the Incarcerous spell is cast, is there a rope that binds the mouth like a cloth gag? Also, are the arms held on either side of the body, or are they behind a person's back?

Author's Response: a very good question. i can't recall everytime i used it in the story, but i've used it to only just tie up the arms on either side, and sometimes cover up the mouth as well--mainly when i don't want the tied up person to speak. i can't think of examples from the books at the top of my head.

Reviewer: harrietamidala
Date: 03/28/08 1:54
Chapter: Preparation

when will you have chapter 33?

Author's Response: already in. don't know about it being accepted though

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