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Reviewer: melie
Date: 08/14/06 17:57
Chapter: You've Been Alive All this Time?

I'm sorry, but alot of these lines were borrowed from the movies. With a little description, this could have been a good story.

Reviewer: Lord_Voldemort93
Date: 07/24/06 15:03
Chapter: You've Been Alive All this Time?

CLAPS, CLAPS, and keeps Clapping! Bravo! You are a saint. This story was well plotted and execllent twist on things. Five thumbs up. If i had five.

Author's Response: Thanks! I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil
Date: 07/14/06 9:05
Chapter: You've Been Alive All this Time?

This is better! The only thing I didn't understand was why Regulus was sent to kill James and Lily. The prophesy wasn't made yet. Even if it was, they would have known about it from Dumbledore right away and protected themselves as soon as possible....Although now I'm thinking that since their pictures are on the wall, Voldie could have known that they knew something important, and ordered them killed. He wouldn't have known that the DoM would have their portraits, of course. If that was your idea, you might want to go back and explain that a little more. Other than that, it's a good story!
~JBV

Author's Response: thank you, and that was my intention. The prophasy was made not long after Voldie-thingy sent Regulus to kill James and Lily.

Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil
Date: 07/13/06 19:28
Chapter: You've Been Alive All this Time?

I agree with minoe. (Sorry.) The first two chapters were very good, but this one didn't seem to go with the rest of the story. Maybe if you rewrote this chapter and elaborated more on what happened, it would be better. Don't be afraid to make it 4 or 5 chapters, even. Also, the part at the end where Regulus came over to the good side seemed a little fast. All Harry had to do was suggest it and he agreed. If you want to do it that way, I recommend that you draw it out more and give them time to forgive him for the mistakes he made. You really had some great ideas for this and I hope you think about my advice. Oh and I almost forgot...*does second reviewer dance*
~JBV

Author's Response: FYI, JBV, I feel that Regulus was pressured by his parents to become a Death Eater in the first place, so he was on the fence between good and evil for the longest time. But I will take your and minoe's advice and adjust the story a bit.

Reviewer: minoe
Date: 07/11/06 17:56
Chapter: You've Been Alive All this Time?

really good up untill this chapter, you've gone so far out of cannon land this story fails to make sence. snape, RAB, even he who must not be named. take a look at your characterazation and dialogue again

Reviewer: potter4220
Date: 06/14/06 22:57
Chapter: The Department of Mysteries

Your story was great again.
Please read your email I've got a surprise.

Author's Response: Ok. You can just e-mail me instead of reviewing my stories so offten. :-)

Author's Response: Ok. You can just e-mail me instead of reviewing my stories so offten. :-)

Reviewer: potter4220
Date: 06/14/06 20:14
Chapter: The Top of the Stairs

You say you had to kill off someone. Why not Snape or a villian. D.L

Author's Response: That would be too predictable. Don't ya just love an exciting fanfic?

Reviewer: potter4220
Date: 06/14/06 20:12
Chapter: The Department of Mysteries

Your story was great. I sent it to our friend. You know who i am. Dr. L. Great Stroy

Author's Response: Thanks, Potter.

Reviewer: pheonix_flight
Date: 05/21/06 21:30
Chapter: The Top of the Stairs

wow!!!!!!! write more!!!!!!!!!! What's going on? do they find out major important stuff? wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: You're right, they do find out major important stuff!

Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil
Date: 05/21/06 12:19
Chapter: The Top of the Stairs

YOU KILLED LUPIN!!!! How could you?!! Other than that, good story.

Author's Response: I had to kill SOMEONE!

Reviewer: Libby Granger
Date: 05/13/06 10:26
Chapter: The Department of Mysteries

that's really cool! i can't wait until you finish the next one!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil
Date: 05/12/06 18:03
Chapter: The Department of Mysteries

Hi! Great story! You write a lot better than I thought. I put you on my favorites list. Can't wait for Chappie 2!

Author's Response: Thanks! I think.

Reviewer: Leahr
Date: 05/11/06 22:05
Chapter: The Department of Mysteries

Nice! Bit short, though. Where is Voldemort in all this? Is he still around or is this post-final battle? I hope you'll continue this soon, I wonder what Harry is looking for in this room. Interesting idea, doing the locked room, I wonder if your idea resembles JKR's idea at all. Curious, curious. It's pretty well written, too.

Author's Response: I decided to make short to hold readers in suspence, and I plan to submit the next chapter soon.

Reviewer: Khrys
Date: 05/11/06 18:40
Chapter: The Department of Mysteries

Wonderful. I am looking forward to more. I can't wait to hear how Harry's first conversation with his parents goes.

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