Reviews For On My Own
Reviewer: tapdancer
Date: 08/08/08 12:48
Chapter: On My Own

that's way to sad

Reviewer: tonkzie
Date: 10/26/07 9:19
Chapter: On My Own

omg! that was... well i'm crying anyway, that's the first fic that made me properly cry. i don't cry for anything, that was... i can't describe it was awful yet wonder ful. *sniff,sob, sniff*

Author's Response: Aw, wow! That's great ^^. For me anyway...probably not for you :P. I love it when I can make people cry with my writing, thanks so much for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: koolio_jollymints
Date: 08/07/07 12:06
Chapter: On My Own

Wow. Umm...I'm sorry, but making them both die at the end was a little bit...well, it was a lot. It was a good story, aside from that.

Author's Response: think. Thanks for taking the time for reading and reviewing, though :).

Reviewer: kehribar
Date: 04/07/07 15:48
Chapter: On My Own


I really loved your story. The language is beautiful and flows easily. What I like most about this story is that it doesn't follow the classical Tonks/Remus story pattern. I like it how you mildly avoid the clichéd ways of R/T romance. The ending is my favourite part - half through the last chapter I was inwardly hoping that they wouldn't just realise that they couldn't do away from each other and run to each other's arms, so to conclude it with a desperate cliché about the happy ending after hopeless situations. So, weird, but I'm happy you didn't end it on a happy note! It makes the story unique.

Thanks for a lovely read!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, and thanks for taking time to leave such a lovely review! I wrote this before reading any R/T fics, so I'm pretty glad I managed to avoid any cliches. I'm also glad you liked the ending, 'twas originally going to be their wedding but decided against that at the last minute, thank goodness. Thank you again for this brilliant review!

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot
Date: 03/06/07 21:42
Chapter: On My Own

I love it but that's one horrible sad ending. Great fiction and I'm in love with it! Amazing job! MJ

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate it when people take time to read and then comment on my work. I'm going to work on an alternate happier ending at some point so all those that hated this one will have something to smile over. :) Thank you so much for reviewing every chapter, I appreciate it so much!

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot
Date: 03/06/07 21:38
Chapter: A Little More Love In The World

This is really good! Love it! But I'm pretty scared to read the last chapter. MJ

Author's Response: Hehe, thanks, and I hope you do read it!

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot
Date: 03/06/07 21:30
Chapter: Bitter Tears and Wasted Years

*Sad* this is so sad. C'mon Remus! Stop being so thick! YOU LOVE TONKS! FACE IT! Sorry for the all CAPS, but really, men are thick at times! MJ

Author's Response: Oooh, definitely, men can be the thickest things on the planet sometimes. Bah, he'll get over himself eventually, the mug :P Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot
Date: 03/06/07 21:24
Chapter: Remus the Werewolf

Freaky ending! I'm on the edge of my seat! Good as always! MJ

Author's Response: Thank you so much! *grins*

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot
Date: 03/06/07 21:19
Chapter: A Bottle of Firewhisky and a Diary

Oooooohhhh Remus you bad man! Lol! I can't wait to see what happens next! MJ

Author's Response: Thanks for the positive review!

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot
Date: 03/06/07 21:14
Chapter: On My Own

I love this! I printed off the first chapter forever ago and now I'm going to finish reading it! I love this! MJ

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you!

Reviewer: madelynn
Date: 12/22/06 19:23
Chapter: On My Own

alternative ending... you're forgiven.
well, i'm not the one to hold grudges (except agains JK for killing sirius and Dumbledore)
i don't have anything else to do, so i review. and no, i won't kill you, living can be nice sometimes.
sight... got a photo yesterday by E-mail... i'm totally going to call Cissi and see how Faler is, god, i miss him.
well, draco's hiding in my pillow again, he was spreading my shoes around the house when i woke up, mean huh?
well, have a happy christmas!

Author's Response: Well, I gotta admit, this review has relieved me a great deal ^.^ Draco's not so mean, my dog moves my shoes around a great deal, usually in the pond in our garden, ah well, that's life :P Have a great Christmas too, and anyone else who happens to read this!

Reviewer: madelynn
Date: 12/21/06 7:39
Chapter: On My Own

well, i've clamed down a bit. you know, this shouldn't be in this section, this is about Remus and Tonks RELATIONSHIP, you know, when they get married, or something wonderful like that? atleast happy fics. this belongs in the angsty section.
i think you made all of us cry, which shows us that you're quite the talented writer, though you are soooo mean to us by doing that. i'm just saying it. SO MEAN...

right, er.. i didn't break anything. i just throwed the fifth and the sixth harry potter books in the wall. (that didn't matter, becuase i've read them like... 10 times, though i always skip the part where Sirius and Dumbledore dies. oh how cruel JKR can be! why did she have to kill my secret love, er... that was supposed to be a secret... :P and my favorite oldie?)
right.. think i said everything now... still mad at you, but i don't feel like finding your adress and going on a murdering spree. okay, overreacting here, wouldn't do that, i would send my ferret on you instead. (if that doesn't make sense to you, check out my authors bio, look at the title PET, everything will become clear then.)

Author's Response: Wow....thanks for reviewing....again. Remus and Tonks do have a relationship, albeit a very short and not much mentioned one, in this fic :P At the moment, my laptop has crashed, but once I'm back after the holidays, I'm working on what was going to be the final to chapters, so you'll have a happier alternate ending :) Everything I write seems to end tragically, which is slightly annoying, but I guess I'm influenced a lot by tragic happenings. Try not to throw the books again, I'll bet they cost a lot :p and if JKR wasn't cruel, her books wouldn't be such an amazing thing in this world. Please don't kill me....I like living quite a bit, actually.... Yeah, read your bio after your last rather charming review. The ferret sounds cool, I'd love to meet the little guy sometime. I also have my own little minions *evil chuckle* Anyways, thanks for reviewing, you can hold me to that alternate ending :)

Reviewer: madelynn
Date: 12/18/06 3:25
Chapter: On My Own

i shouldn't comment right now. i'm to angry. actually, i am shaking with anger. how could you do that? oh god. i'm going to go and throw something heavy in a wall to calm bown, and then forgett i ever read this. sorry, but i definitly didn't like the way it ended!

Author's Response: Ooh, I am sorry! I know this probably won't help, but I was going to end it with them getting married, and another chapter, but really, isn't all that "Happily Ever After" scene getting a bit old? And would J.K Rowling actually ever have a completely happy ending? Well, my apologies again, and please try not to break anything!! It could result in much pain which I do not wish my writing to inflict on you :(

Reviewer: honeyness
Date: 11/06/06 7:27
Chapter: On My Own

im not going to not going to not going to cry....
but there are still tears in my eyes!

Author's Response: Aw! Thanks, and sorry!! I'm thinking about writing the alternate and original ending, maybe that'll help?! Thanks again for reviewing.

Reviewer: wizard lover
Date: 11/05/06 18:45
Chapter: On My Own

Loved the story. The ending SUCKED

Author's Response: Lol, glad you liked it :P Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: HPwizzzard
Date: 11/01/06 16:19
Chapter: On My Own

Sorry. I was just mad. I wanted the "happy ever after" chapter, and instead they break up! It really was good, the whole story was.
P.S. You've forgotten your character death warning.

Author's Response: I did too! It was originally seven chapters with them getting together, but as I said, I wanted something different. Thank you so much! And I'll see to that warning immeditately!

Reviewer: HPwizzzard
Date: 11/01/06 16:07
Chapter: On My Own

Oh my Godric! that is the most depressing endind I have ever read! You should have warned us! Merlin, it was beautiful but tragic... how could he do that to her? How could she let him? Why didn't he just go find her and tell her how much he needed her? I'm crying as I type this...

Author's Response: I'm sorry, I just wanted something different from Remus married Tonks and lived happily ever after. He left her because he didn't want to "stain" her life, the typical "too old, too poor, too dangerous" thing again. She let him because she knows she can't win. They're both too stubborn and protective :P I'm glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: clover_01258
Date: 10/31/06 20:10
Chapter: On My Own

That was so sad i wanted them to get together and live happily ever after...

Author's Response: I'm sorry! I wanted them too, I was even going to make them with another chapter, but then I thought how Remus really wouldn't "sacrifice" Tonks like that. Thanks for the review, though!

Reviewer: Fading
Date: 10/31/06 16:54
Chapter: On My Own sad! Good...but sad! *sniff*

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Sorry I made you sad, 'twas my evil side taking over and killing everyone. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: HPwizzzard
Date: 10/30/06 21:11
Chapter: A Little More Love In The World

Well, the ending was none too romantic (meaning the owls, NOT the kiss) but I liked the rest. Fleur was quite funny. I see Chapter 6 has not got through yet, which is very, very sad. However, I DID see the title. Are you planning an evil depressing ending? Please don't do anything stupid. I've read those song lyrics you know.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review, I'm not saying anything about chappie six, you'll have to wait and see *evil grin*. My apologies for it not getting validated, that was due to me being really, really stupid and giving Remus a middle name of Paul instead of John. I've always got those names muddled up :( Anyway, I'll be editing it and resubmitting it tonight. Thanks again for the review!

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