Please Please Please write more SOON! That was a great story. You are a very good writer.
Author's Response: Thanks! Plenty more is on the way!
Wow...I mean, what can I say? WOW. I can't wait for the next chapter! Seriously, have you written any books of your own, or thought of it? You should. At least think about it. You have the talent, that is for sure. PLEASE post the next chapter soon!
Author's Response: I do actually write original fiction, as well, although Rapture is currently using up most of my little grey cells. And thank you for the kind words, I'm really glad you like my story!
This is a great story, please make another chaoter soon!
I love this, it's looking really good. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks! This story was both the bane and the purpose of my existence all summer! It's actually completed, but you know the rules -- I can only submit one chapter at a time! Hopefully you like it from beginning to end, because I'm currently working on book two!