This is such a great story! I love The Chronicles of Narnia! There one of my favorite series!! Good job!
Great idea for a story. I think you also did a good job at keeping the characters close to form. Keep on writing.
i love this story, please hurry with the sequal! i can't wait to read it!
i absolute love it I would have to say its my favorite story!!!! I can't wait for the sequel!!!
OMG!!!!!!!!! I've been readng this for the last few days now and finally managed to complete it (I would have tried to read it all in one go, but had other stuff that needed doing and wanted to give it my full attention) it is probably THE best story I've read yet on mugglenet, brilliant story, very well written and certain *ahem* scenes were done way better than many others -it's all just brilliant! Snape still stayed in character throughout, the Lupin subplot was good and it was all so believeable! I'm chuffed for Snape though! He deserves Gaenora! Hurry up with the second part please, but it'll have to be out of this world to beat this! Gaenora4Snape4ever!
Author's Response: hey, man, I'm just aiming for "equally as good"...lol... Book two takes place outside of Hogwarts, quite a bit, since I don't think that Hogwarts would have a pregnant teacher, or that it would be "acceptable" for Gaenora to live at the school while pregnant and not teaching... Made some real headway last night and today!
Wow that story was brilliant!I can't wait to see snape attempting to be a daddy!Looking forward to no. 2!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!
Woah...that was amazing, I must say, I only started it a few days ago, but what an increadable story. Is there going to be a book two?
Author's Response: yes...eventually :-) I've been crazy busy with work and my edumication, so sleep has been my numero uno priority the last few days.
Never saw that coming! Wow! Excellent story!
Author's Response: Do I sent a hint of sarcasm? LOL....I felt like the pregnancy was visible from a mile away, but it's absolutely essential for book two!
is that the end? that was absolutly awesome!!! I wanna see a sequel... like now!!! lol im kidding i know how it is when words don't want to come out... I have like five stories all happening at once, and not one of them has gotten any further in the past month, because of extreme writer's block!!!! so Im taking a break from writing for a month or two and reading other peeps fics to try and get ideas... no, I'm not plagerizing, im just... mooching... lol 1 kadjillion out of ten for you!!!!! Lurve, Cassandra
Alright, that was the best ending you could have come up with. I'm expecting a sequel! Wonderful, wonderful fic!
Author's Response: You're all way to nice to me! THANK YOU for the great reviews! I don't want to say that the sequel is coming along nicely...it's really coming along kicking and screaming. LOL...sometimes I have a hard time putting what I see in my head into words on paper (er, the computer)...but it's coming.
Author's Response: And of course life is not all coffee and cherry-flavored taffy for Gaenora and Severus now that Essex is gone...they're haunted by a prophecy as old as the Gwennan and Snape families. (Which is very old, by the way.)
WOW I LOVE IT:) THEY ARE SO SWEET TOGETHER!!!! U GET 2 THUMBS UP1~
absolutely adorable... i love the ending and can't help but laugh at Trelawney's prediction. i would love to see Snape as a daddy
O.K., that's not fair. Now I'm all choked up. (But I can't stop smiling, either!!) That was just too perfect for an ending. Since the begining of your story, I have wanted Severus to have the "Happily Ever After"...I loved this story. I am hoping in Book 2 we get to find out what happens. Here is to Gaenora and Severus, long may they live, happily ever after.
Wow. It all happened perfectly...that slimy git Malfoy back in Azkaban, Essex was the one to die a death so gruesome that Satan himself would pity him. And Severus still has Gaenora, 'till death do them part...and now we know that will be a great many years, indeed. Well done! :) I loved it!
oh no... second to last chapter... *sigh* im sorry for the empty thingy b4, but I saw there was more and so that was the only way to see it... w/e Im absolutly loving this i wish this wasn't the end... Lurve, Cassandra
*sigh* there are only 2 more chapters after ths? im sooooooooooo sad!!!!! that's absolutly adorable, we get to see the softie side of Snape... I'm so happy that they are getting married... *happy sighs* i absolutly adore Snape, so im happy he's happy... w/e... Lurve, Cassandra
I love this story!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!
Author's Response: chapter 23's in the mods' queue, so only it and chapter 24 are left!
Wow. That was a powerful chapter! (Although I could have done without the threats, of a sexual nature, by Essex. Ewwwww.) Before I realized what was going on, I was SO mad at her mother...can you say, “Dysfunctional Family”?! Talk about making “Mommy Dearest” look like Mary Poppins! Phew!
Author's Response: Abigail has huge reservations about the whole magic thing, but she really does love her daughter no matter what. And I'm really sorry if I grossed everybody out with Essex's threats...I was in some sort of mood when I wrote that...I think "9 1/2 Weeks" was on TV or something... besides, if you think about it - he's been locked up in prison for thirty years, and now he's face to face with this beautiful woman...I mean, I think it would be impossible for him not to have...feelings...lol But I promise it doesn't get any worse.... the only person I intend Gaenora to have any sort of relations with is Severus! (And I'm sure to some of you THAT is gross as hell, but I think Alan Rickman is a sexy beast! tee hee :)
awww...soo great story...plz update reall soon...............