wasn't there supposed to be a sequel to this?
its a great story!!! You write really well, I like it :) keep writing, everything!
I love this story!! keep em comin i look foreward 2 reading more!!
You write very well. I think you are writing what most of us wanted .. to see Severus find love and not be such a foul prat. But he is still in limbo on which way he will turn out isn't he?. i enjoy your ability to carry on multiple story lines just lkie JK.
Ha okay so this is my first Snape story and it will certainly not be my last. Bravo it was an excellent story... the battle was rushed.. but its a romance story so I have no complaints.
That was...i`m lost for words. i found this story a while ago, and have been reading it ever since. Of course, I can`t wait for the sequel (or anything else you have written!!). Just one question-how do ou provounce the title?
I love happy endings!! Great job!!
Aw, how sad. Poor baby. Essex is well on his way to making her miserable.
I knew I liked her, she likes Narnia=must have good taste. I think Remus would be an excellant man to have as a first crush. He'd be aware of such feelings and be careful of them without encouraging them.
I do so love Remus. Awarding points in that instance was so Dumbledore. His personality is so hard to capture. It doesn't like tupperware boxes.
I love the "hair thing". She should realize she's with a bunch of teenagers, purple hair on a professor will be relatively cool.
I felt like I was missing something during the argument. Or like Gaenora was missing something, someone was missing something anyway. Poor Severus.
Aw, I love Neville. He's so sweet when he's not scared out of his wits. Note: It would be helpful to me if not too much bother if you would do individual chapter summaries, I keep forgetting which one I read last then I can't find it. But not if you have too much to do.
Hmmm. Is it just me or has Snapes hair miraculously been cleaned? Yes the films make it not all that icky but in the books it's rather his trademark isn't it? Of course hair doesn't always look bad greasy. Anyway, I think it would take him longer to warm up to someone, he's out of practice. Still, I've always been fond of him.
found your story tonight and read beginning to end. excellent, story moved right along, I didn't have to stop and think about the action. looking forward to the sequel. git er done!
good but why isn't Ron playing Keeper?
Author's Response: well, we don't know for sure who's on the quidditch team during their sixth year, and quidditch isn't very important to me or my plot so...*shrug*
OHMYGOD!!!!That was the best story I've ever read!!!!!Please write a sequal!!!!!!!!!!!Perfect10!!!!!!!!
Ahahahah! O my gosh what an awesome ending! ive been reading the entire story chapter by chapter over the last few days and I absolutely loved it! I definetly look forward to the sequel!!
Author's Response: a bad run of the lovely disease 'mono' has slowed me up a bit in writing R2: Agony of Heaven, but I promise it is coming!
I love this!! All I have to complain about is that they seem to raise thier eyebrows a lot!!
Author's Response: It's true...what can I say. :-) Until I find another description for the silent, 'What the F are you talking about...', the Raised Eyebrow it is. I'm sure I know a few more somewhere, but I can't think of any at the moment. (Sometimes I'm not the genius I say I am, lol)