Reviewer: RavenClawHufflePuff
Date: 09/24/06 10:06
Chapter: Chapter 3: Harlan Hufflepuff

That was brilliant! You have to write more! I found myself at the end of my chair and my nose almost touching the computer screen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Starry Sky 44
Date: 06/11/06 20:45
Chapter: Chapter 3: Harlan Hufflepuff

I really like the story you have so far. I've only just gotten into Founders fics, and I'm glad to have found a good one. I'll definitely be reading from now on.

I really like your portrayal of the Founders, especially Helga. They're all pretty much how I imagined they would be.

Forgive me if this sounds far-fetched, but I wonderif Helga's father somehow foresaw Voldemort and what he was going to do with the cup. Just a thought.

Update soon!

Reviewer: tarot
Date: 05/15/06 19:27
Chapter: Chapter 3: Harlan Hufflepuff

This story is interestin and i enjoy seeing the twists is takes. Not to mention, very good character development.

Reviewer: LexiGirl
Date: 05/06/06 18:45
Chapter: Chapter 3: Harlan Hufflepuff

Wow, this story is really interesting. Most Founder-Era stories I have read didn't seem to have a point, but this one already does. Good job to all the writers and editers! I look forward to the next chapters. 10/10

Reviewer: LexiGirl
Date: 05/06/06 18:45
Chapter: Chapter 3: Harlan Hufflepuff

Wow, this story is really interesting. Most Founder-Era stories I have read didn't seem to have a point, but this one already does. Good job to all the writers and editers! I look forward to the next chapters. 10/10

Reviewer: slipstick
Date: 05/04/06 22:56
Chapter: Chapter 3: Harlan Hufflepuff

How sad, and after such a glorioius battle.

Reviewer: slipstick
Date: 05/04/06 22:32
Chapter: Chapter 2: House Management

Oh, yes. This is lovely. It explains so much. And so nice to provide for the young lovers.

Reviewer: slipstick
Date: 05/04/06 22:14
Chapter: Chapter 1: Ethelred, the Unready

Fabulous! I love historical context. You make the founders sound so human with their own every concerns and the political situation.

Reviewer: Keris
Date: 05/04/06 3:39
Chapter: Chapter 1: Ethelred, the Unready

I assume you know that Ethelred wasn't king of Scotland, just England, as the thrones didn't merge until 1603? Sorry to bother you if it's some sort of plot device.

Author's Response: Have you checked your sources to see who was king of Scotland?

Reviewer: leeloo
Date: 05/04/06 3:16
Chapter: Chapter 2: House Management

Love the way they came up with the name

Reviewer: leeloo
Date: 05/04/06 3:11
Chapter: Chapter 1: Ethelred, the Unready

interesting so far, i like it. Question: were they planning on such a large number of students right away?

Reviewer: Lurid
Date: 05/04/06 2:31
Chapter: Chapter 2: House Management

Poultry, this is a fabulous idea! I can't wait to write my own entry for Ravenclaw! I know there's jus so much more to come, this idea is great! One idea that never brewed in my mind was Rowena/Slytherin, Helga/Godric. Interesting... *muses* ♥

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 05/03/06 20:24
Chapter: Chapter 2: House Management

super! applause all around.
two things I found confusing were the very beginning and a couple of paragraphs in the middle of ch2. I couldn't figure out at first whether the story was written in 1st person, and if it was, whose point of view was it? Also, in the middle, when you transitioned between the different points of view, I got lost easily. It would make for much less confusing reading if you made it clearer whose point of view each paragraph is from.
I look forward to reading the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yikes! Thanks for pointing that out. I thought I had smoothed over all my cut/pasting, but I missed a spot or two. As we continue to write the round robin, perhaps we can pay better attention to POV and tense. thanks again, Poultrygeist

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