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Name: RavenClawHufflePuff (Signed) · Date: 09/24/06 10:06 · For: Chapter 3: Harlan Hufflepuff
That was brilliant! You have to write more! I found myself at the end of my chair and my nose almost touching the computer screen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Name: Starry Sky 44 (Signed) · Date: 06/11/06 20:45 · For: Chapter 3: Harlan Hufflepuff
I really like the story you have so far. I've only just gotten into Founders fics, and I'm glad to have found a good one. I'll definitely be reading from now on.

I really like your portrayal of the Founders, especially Helga. They're all pretty much how I imagined they would be.

Forgive me if this sounds far-fetched, but I wonderif Helga's father somehow foresaw Voldemort and what he was going to do with the cup. Just a thought.

Update soon!


Name: tarot (Signed) · Date: 05/15/06 19:27 · For: Chapter 3: Harlan Hufflepuff
This story is interestin and i enjoy seeing the twists is takes. Not to mention, very good character development.


Name: LexiGirl (Signed) · Date: 05/06/06 18:45 · For: Chapter 3: Harlan Hufflepuff
Wow, this story is really interesting. Most Founder-Era stories I have read didn't seem to have a point, but this one already does. Good job to all the writers and editers! I look forward to the next chapters. 10/10


Name: LexiGirl (Signed) · Date: 05/06/06 18:45 · For: Chapter 3: Harlan Hufflepuff
Wow, this story is really interesting. Most Founder-Era stories I have read didn't seem to have a point, but this one already does. Good job to all the writers and editers! I look forward to the next chapters. 10/10


Name: slipstick (Signed) · Date: 05/04/06 22:56 · For: Chapter 3: Harlan Hufflepuff
How sad, and after such a glorioius battle.


Name: slipstick (Signed) · Date: 05/04/06 22:32 · For: Chapter 2: House Management
Oh, yes. This is lovely. It explains so much. And so nice to provide for the young lovers.


Name: slipstick (Signed) · Date: 05/04/06 22:14 · For: Chapter 1: Ethelred, the Unready
Fabulous! I love historical context. You make the founders sound so human with their own every concerns and the political situation.


Name: Keris (Signed) · Date: 05/04/06 3:39 · For: Chapter 1: Ethelred, the Unready
I assume you know that Ethelred wasn't king of Scotland, just England, as the thrones didn't merge until 1603? Sorry to bother you if it's some sort of plot device.

Author's Response: Have you checked your sources to see who was king of Scotland?


Name: leeloo (Anonymous) · Date: 05/04/06 3:16 · For: Chapter 2: House Management
Love the way they came up with the name


Name: leeloo (Anonymous) · Date: 05/04/06 3:11 · For: Chapter 1: Ethelred, the Unready
interesting so far, i like it. Question: were they planning on such a large number of students right away?


Name: Lurid (Signed) · Date: 05/04/06 2:31 · For: Chapter 2: House Management
Poultry, this is a fabulous idea! I can't wait to write my own entry for Ravenclaw! I know there's jus so much more to come, this idea is great! One idea that never brewed in my mind was Rowena/Slytherin, Helga/Godric. Interesting... *muses* ♥


Name: mock_turtle (Signed) · Date: 05/03/06 20:24 · For: Chapter 2: House Management
super! applause all around.
two things I found confusing were the very beginning and a couple of paragraphs in the middle of ch2. I couldn't figure out at first whether the story was written in 1st person, and if it was, whose point of view was it? Also, in the middle, when you transitioned between the different points of view, I got lost easily. It would make for much less confusing reading if you made it clearer whose point of view each paragraph is from.
I look forward to reading the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yikes! Thanks for pointing that out. I thought I had smoothed over all my cut/pasting, but I missed a spot or two. As we continue to write the round robin, perhaps we can pay better attention to POV and tense. thanks again, Poultrygeist


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