I like your story so far! i can't wait t read the next chap! please dont take to long to update!!!!
Your characterization of the golden trio is very good, especially Hermione. "Don’t be stupid, Harry...". You very much nailed her tone.
I do wonder, however, whether the Dursleys would allow Ron and Hermione to stay over. Other than that, good job! I look forward to reading more.
Snape's Talon / Snapes_secret
How's the second chapter going? Need my help? I'm quite free now you know.
I like the beginning of your story. You have definetely confused me with the authors note!
please update as soon as possible!!!
Author's Response: I can assure you, I will. Thanks for the review. =D
What a web you are weaving. I really like the way you are writing the characters. Ron isn't bafoonish, Harry is still a coward when it comes to anything mushy, (I just want to slap him sometimes!!!), Hermione is as strong and self doubting as ever. I adore the way you wrote Ginny, calm, cool, calculating and collected. She has a plan, baby. She got Harry once by being coy, she can do it again! You stuck to canon very well and I can't wait for the update. You are now in my favorites!!!
Author's Response: I have this big goofy smile on my face! That is exactly how I wanted them written and I'm glad you picked up on that. Thank you so much for taking the time to review. Love your pen name, by the way. =D
He he Bling Bling! I have a whole site devoted to bling bling, can't wait!
Author's Response: Mmm, edible bling bling... I mean, thanks for your review! Lol. xD
I like it!! I hope Harry gets back with Ginny quick!!! Did Molly forget Harry's B-day? Update asap!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks a bunch. I love the positive reviews. I'm actually well into the second chapter. It's a tad angsty but it is, afterall, a Harry PoV chappie. Poor angsty H-Man. And no, Molly didn't forget Harry's birthday. My brother pointed it out before I posted.
"She turned to Harry and hugged him warmly and wished him a happy birthday, although, as she had with Ron, she had to stand on her tippy-toes to kiss his cheek."
Nope, didn't forget. Thanks again for your lovely review.
Author's Response: P.S. I'm the biggest H/G shipper. Ah, stupid noble Harry.
"`S okay. Not the best but you have some talent. Do u know any beta readers that could make my story so that other ppl can see it, too? Thx, if ya can, bye!"
It's really well written in my opinion, very close to canonity... I mean it's not cliche and all, you know the characters are very much the same, not a lot of flaws and all, that's why I like it. OH and, True Blonde7, visit the Mugglenet Beta Boards, and browse on the "Beta Services, for Sale or Rent" forums, there's some people that are willing to be Beta's there.
Pia ;) (Lol!)
Author's Response: *blushes* Thanks, Pia. ♥
`S okay. Not the best but you have some talent. Do u know any beta readers that could make my story so that other ppl can see it, too? Thx, if ya can, bye!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review. It was okay, not the best but you have some reviewing talent. Keep it up! One day you will write beautiful reviews, now, my friend, you must nurture your review-giving talent. Then you may spread your creative wings and soar, free and unburdened into Review Heaven. One day, my friend. One day.