Whoa, that was wicked.
Wow...this is a really powerful piece of work. It just seems so realistic and your writing is exquisite. The plot is amazing and Harry is perfectly in character. It is such a good characterization because Harry's revenge is so real and yet he feels regret aftewards, which is exactly how I would imagine him reacting.
It almost feels like I could be reading the climax of the seventh book. Amazing.
I just want to tell you that I did not blink teh entire time it took me to that. I couldn't. If I did, I might have opened my eyes and found that there was Harry, standing in front of me, and there was Voldemort, cowering in fear before his most hated enemy. It felt as though I were there. I could feel the hate, smell the air, sense the slowing of time.
You have a gift. This is the best hate-related story I've ever read. Good job. I hope to read more from you.
Well written! You did an excellent job of capturing Harry's very intense emotional angst.
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that was so good! Really descriptive and I could easily imagine a real scene like that in Book 7 (not that I've read it or anything, it just seems like the sort of emotional journey Harry would go through).
Excellent! Amazing chapter, very descriptive.
Excellent job...wow. That's about all I can come up with.
Wow. That's absolutly brillant. Its so descriptive and.. wow. I'm really dumbfounded. Keep it up!