Reviews For Senses
Reviewer: Raven Girl
Date: 07/01/06 19:48
Chapter: Harry Potter and the Sense of Guilt

this is awsome! im a little confussed about Harry and the whole lie thing, sorry, but other than that its really good

Author's Response: A few months before this took place, Harry had a brief moment of doubt regarding the security of the Order, so he told a lie to see if it spread outside of those he confided in. Little did he know, the ministry had been using the Imperius Curse on people to get information on him, which eventually leaked to the Death Eaters. Voldemort wants Harry, they dont really know why yet, but since they knew he would be at the wedding, they decided to attack. When Harry disappeared (he was unconscious away from the main part of the fight), they assumed his made up battle strategy was real, and that he'd "become someone else." Make sense? I hope so! Thanks for reading =)

Reviewer: hermoine_10
Date: 06/29/06 23:25
Chapter: Harry Potter and the Sense of Guilt

good chapter... but i would've liked it to be a little longer

Author's Response: Really? That was my longest chapter yet!

Reviewer: hermoine_10
Date: 06/29/06 23:25
Chapter: Harry Potter and the Sense of Guilt

good chapter... but i would've liked it to be a little longer

Author's Response: Really? That was my longest chapter yet!

Reviewer: Phoenix 86
Date: 06/29/06 16:54
Chapter: Harry Potter and the Sense of Guilt

Thanh God. One thing I lke about this story is that mushiness is kept down--I hate that (probably b/c I'm a guy, but one who reads romance fics with no shame). And the best part about in my opinion was Flint's reaction.

Author's Response: Thanks! I, too, find excessive fluffiness annoying (and I'm a girl). Glad you liked Flint's reaction, I wasn't sure if anyone would really catch that =)

Reviewer: Courtney Black
Date: 06/29/06 16:22
Chapter: Harry Potter and the Sense of Guilt

Wow... Ron is sooo stupid! Lol! xD Anyway, I loved the chapter. :)

Author's Response: HAHAHA! Oh, I can't stop laughing! Thanks for that comment!

Reviewer: PuffTheMagicDragon
Date: 06/29/06 11:34
Chapter: Harry Potter and the Sense of Guilt

i really like how you gave just enough information to keep the reader interested, but didn't give too much away as to lose suspense and edge! hurry please with the next chapter!


Author's Response: Hi Lauren! Oh believe me, there is still so much that hasn't happened yet! Get ready, there is much more to come!

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 06/29/06 1:05
Chapter: Harry Potter and the Sense of Guilt

Woo-Hoo!!!! I've been waiting for this chapter!!!! It was amzing! Brilliantly written! I absolutely loved it!!! Can't wait till the next chapter (as always!) 11/10 (also as always!) lol.

Author's Response: Hi Chloe! Yes, that chapter was inspired by you, hence why I love reviews so much! Sometimes they give me ideas that take my story to a whole other level, so thanks for the inspiration!

Reviewer: muggleclaw
Date: 06/28/06 23:27
Chapter: Harry Potter and the Sense of Guilt

Ah, brilliant chapter! I'm looking forward to the next update, as always :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to get it up soon!

Reviewer: Her My Own EE
Date: 06/28/06 22:04
Chapter: Harry Potter and the Sense of Guilt

Great chapter! There was so much in there to comment on, but I'll keep it simple. It was well done how the Harry/Ginny scene mirrors the Ron/Hermione scene. At least when it came to the desire to protect your partner & realizing that isn't always possible. Also how that led both Harry & Ron to recognize that it is a good idea to show your love now.

Author's Response: Thank you! I love reviews like this, it's wonderful to see exactly what the readers liked or didn't like =)

Reviewer: marvologirl4
Date: 06/28/06 21:20
Chapter: Harry Potter and the Sense of Guilt

aaawwwww. that was cute that ron/hermione and harry/ginny both made out if u will before theyt go into battle. haha. good chapter. and i loved the quick update. please do it again.

Author's Response: You know, if I was about to go into battle, I think I'd do some snogging myself ;) I will definely update as soon as possible. The rest of the story is plotted out but not written yet, but this last chapter only took me a day to write and post, so I'm hoping I'll have the next up by the weekend. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Her My Own EE
Date: 06/25/06 23:04
Chapter: A Sense of Foreboding

Where is Harry!!! Oh evil, evil cliffies... *thinks cliffies are a plot to take over the world*

Author's Response: *grins evil author grin* Yea, you're probably right about cliffies taking over the world ;) But, being the nice author I am, you'll find out really quick what Harry's been up to all this time (next chapter in fact!), though I still have a few secrets left in store... Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 06/22/06 22:14
Chapter: A Sense of Foreboding

Once again, SUPER COOL!!! I loved it! It's really great. But I can't stand cliffifes! I mean, u gotta have 'em and everything, but I'm just such a curious person in general, it's a wonder i even go to sleep at night!!! jk. but it was a really great chapter! I REALLY REALLY can't wait to see what happens next! byebye!!!

Author's Response: Hopefully by the end of the weekend I'll have it fully written and posted! Thanks for reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Courtney Black
Date: 06/21/06 19:42
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

Wow. Last time I checked your series, Chapter Two still wasn't up! XD

I'm sorry for the loos in your family. :(

OMG THE FIRST KISS! I loved the chapters! Finish the next chapter soon! :)

-Courtney Black♥

Author's Response: Hey Courtney Black! Yea, I update pretty quick apparently =) So glad you liked the first kiss! Chapter five is in queue!!

Reviewer: marvologirl4
Date: 06/18/06 19:24
Chapter: Sense and Reason

aawww. this chapter was so sweet. i really enjoyed it. usually i dont read stories with this littledialogue because i love dialogue, but this is very well written.
please update soon.

Author's Response: You're right, there has been mostly just internal monologue thus far. I'm glad you are enjoying it though! You'll be happy to hear that there is more dialogue in the next few chapters!

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 06/17/06 22:09
Chapter: Sense and Reason

Woo-Hoo! Validated! I just read it and it was SUPER cool (as always)!!!! totally my number one fave! Can't wait till the next chapter. 11/10!!!

Author's Response: Haha, working on it tomorrow! Things are going to get a little crazy after the next chapter or two...

Reviewer: RGismyKing
Date: 06/17/06 14:25
Chapter: Sense and Reason

awwe. that is so sweet. you definatly do ron/hermy shippers justice!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad to hear that =)

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 06/16/06 22:50
Chapter: Sense and Reason

C'MON C'MON C'MON!!! Be validated!!! This is like my ALL TIME favorite story EVER!!!!!!!! I love this story and I can't wait till it's up! 11/10 even tho i haven't read this chap yet. hehehe

Author's Response: =D I only hope I can live up to such high standards! Thanks PotterFan22!

Reviewer: marvologirl4
Date: 06/12/06 23:49
Chapter: A Sense of Duty

please get hermione and ron together so the reunion can be sweet!!! great chapter. please update soon!!!

Author's Response: Your wish is my command! I think you will like chapter 4, it will be posted soon...

Reviewer: DeathByMoonlight
Date: 06/12/06 20:43
Chapter: A Sense of Duty

No...! This chapter can`t be over already!!!
Argh-please update again soon! T'was really good!!

Author's Response: Yes, I apologize for the shortness of this chapter! What started in the beginning as only five chapters has grown to quite a few, as the mods recommended I post in smaller sections. I'll update soon, I promise!

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 06/12/06 18:41
Chapter: A Sense of Duty chapter...NEED...NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love this story. It's definately my favorite one ever! Can't wait till next chapter! (obviously)
You're a great writer!

Author's Response: Hahahaha! I'll get it up as soon as I can, both of my stories got updated at once, so I've got alot of writing/editing to do! Hopefully it will be up tomorrow =)

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