Reviews For Senses
Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 08/20/06 10:16
Chapter: Battered Senses, Undying Devotion

One more thing - you have the funniest fans following your story. Reading some of the reviews is almost as entertaining!:-)
I especially wanted to read what people had to say about this chapter. I don't think they figured it out. I may head over to the dueling club again and ask about that. I won't say anything else except - great job!! I'm adding it to my favorites so don't abandon it! :) ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Yea, I have some fantastically entertaining readers on this story. And no, I don't think anyone has figured it out yet (so I'm really excited to see if you did!!). This is my favorite story to write at the moment, I'd never abandon it! ~ashley

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 08/20/06 10:10
Chapter: Battered Senses, Undying Devotion

This is great! You do a wonderful job of creating suspense, which is why I just went ahead and read the rest of it! And this is why I don't read a lot of chaptered fics, because now I have to wait for the next chapter, and it's getting so excitng!! :)
I love what you've done with Ron and Hermione, but I was so glad when you wrote Harry's story as well. This chapter was brilliant, at least if I've figured things out correctly. :) I can't wait to see how it resolves.
You're writing has really evolved over the course of these nine chapters. You must be having so much fun. I really enjoy reading your work. I hope you update soon! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Hey Gina! I am actually surprised with how nicely the suspense is building in this story. You'll have to let me know in the next chapter if you figured something out (I wouldn't be surprised if you did, I think I left a few hints). I do feel like I've grown as a writer through the course of this story, thanks so much for reading!! I'm going to update today, I think =D

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 08/19/06 23:53
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

you know what i realized you writing is so good i feel smarter when i read it.YEAH!

Author's Response: Hahahahaha, thank you!

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 08/19/06 23:50
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

omg i finished chapter& finally i feel bad that it took me so long to read it. and now i really have to read the other ones that was so awesoem!!!!!!!!!!!!And now theres a clifff hanger but since i waited so long the next chapter is already out an di can read it !HAHAH!!! i love your stories they are so awesome. But i have to go cuz its late and i have to wake up early tomorrow so i can march in a parade!!weeeeeeee im gunna finish your stories tomorow and im gunna start reading your other ones!!!byebye!!

Author's Response: Hey Kelley! Glad you're back!! Thanks for reading this story, and if you do read my others I hope you enjoy them as well. Have fun in the parade tomorrow!!

Reviewer: hpgirl_91
Date: 08/19/06 14:50
Chapter: Battered Senses, Undying Devotion

AHHH! I can't wait for the next chapter- this story is so good! I saw it on the featured section and had to read it. On my favorites list definitely!

Author's Response: Why thank you! Writing the next chapter right now!

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 08/19/06 9:19
Chapter: Sense and Reason

What a great kiss - and I like how you showed it from both of their points of view! You also do a good job creating suspense. I miss Harry and hope he is alright! Good job!! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Yea, from now on you basically get to see things from both angles. Harry is coming up in a few chapters =)

Reviewer: Dumbledores_army
Date: 08/18/06 19:20
Chapter: Battered Senses, Undying Devotion

I love this story! I can't wait to read the rest. You should consider writing romance novels or something like that. You're a really good writer! Um, whats with the whole silent G thing?

Author's Response: Thank you! I'd love to be a writer someday, perhaps when my fanfiction career is over ;) Haha, Chloe has been reading this fic (and my others) for awhile now, so at some point she made a joke about people having silent g's in their names while waiting for a chapter to validate. Lets just say we have fun on my review pages when the mods are busy...

Reviewer: Rowan Weasley
Date: 08/18/06 17:26
Chapter: Battered Senses, Undying Devotion

No, don't stop there.....I have to know what's going to happen next.

Please update soon!

Author's Response: The goal is to update this weekend. Thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 08/18/06 16:43
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

Ahhh! Chappie 11 of HP+theDL got validated! I SOOOO can't wait to read it! And I'm really mad cuz i can't right this minute!!! It's all Kelley's fault! grr. I'll read it some time tonight (trust me, the first minute that i can!) Kelley's trying to get me to come over and spend the night, and we're gunna watch HP (one of the four, not sure which one) but Jessie's coming too, and she doesn't wanna watch a movie (dorky non-hp fanatic...jk) so I have to get over there right now so we can start watching the movie with Brooke and then when jessie comes, she'll be forced to watch it because we'd already be in the middle of it!!!! Muahahahaha!!!!!!
~Chloe (i'm almost dying! Need...griffinpufgf's...story!!!!!)
p.s. On a totally different note: Yay! My first humor fic got validated today! It got excepted after the first submission! Though it took a while, but the mods must be pretty busy, and I'm not complaining cuz i'm just excited! :D

Author's Response: I love that you left me a message about Harry Potter and the Dark Lord on the Senses review page... hahaha! Have fun tonight, watch all the movies in a marathon and turn Jessie to the dark side ;) I'll check out your fic this weekend, congrats!

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 08/17/06 22:18
Chapter: A Sense of Duty

Well that surprised me! :) Malfoy! And the Cruciatus Curse - poor Ron! Good job with the battle, its tough keeping things straight when there is a lot of complicated action involved. I hope Harry is all right. :) Looking forward to reading the next chapter! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: It gets a little bit easier to follow after chapter four once Ron and Hermione are back together. Thanks for reading Gina!!!!!

Reviewer: Magical Me
Date: 08/17/06 21:31
Chapter: Battered Senses, Undying Devotion

It just gets better and better. Featured story, that's so awesome!

Author's Response: Hey! I was wondering what happened to you! Welcome back! Thanks!!

Reviewer: BrittLovesRon
Date: 08/17/06 15:52
Chapter: Battered Senses, Undying Devotion

wow. i dont know what it was that told me to read this story i had seen it many times when i came her but i never thought of reading it.

but im really glad i did today because it was one of the best i have ever read please please continue this soon. i really love it.

Author's Response: Thanks for giving it a chance! I think the title/summary scare some people away, but I'm too attached to both to change them =P I'm really glad you liked it, I will be updating soon.

Reviewer: Yammo
Date: 08/17/06 10:39
Chapter: Battered Senses, Undying Devotion

Ah... oh my gawd. The best bloody fanfic I have ever read in such a long time. I've always loved Hermione as a character in the HP series, never really liked Ron--but now you've just made Ron as amazing and human as Hermione really is. BRAVO.

Author's Response: Wow, fantastic compliments! That means so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it, I'll be updating soon. Thanks!

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 08/16/06 21:55
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

tee hee hee! kelley's weird!!! she wrote that comment while i was on the phone with her, cuz i've been bugging her to read the next chapters of your story. grsh. tommorrow's our first day of school. ugh. not looking forward to it. i'm nervous!
Kellgey forgot to sign her name and put a silent g!!!!!

Author's Response: First day of school, huh. What grade will you be in? Man I feel old... it's hard to believe I've already gone through college. Have fun today, and good luck!

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 08/16/06 21:51
Chapter: Sensing Fear

HEY im back i havent been on this site for a while but YOU WROTE more and now i can read more at one time and then ill have to wait till chapter ten. Just wanted to say hi and stuff. But im gunna read chapter seven and then reveiw again!!!byebye

Author's Response: Hey Kelley! I was wondering where you'd been. Welcome back!

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 08/16/06 20:09
Chapter: A Sense of Self

Poor Hermione! And poor Percy - I am intrigued by what he discovered at the Ministry. I like the way you layer your stories with things like that.
See, I kept reading :)
Great job! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Hahaha, thanks Gina! Layering plotlines is one thing I pride myself on, and it means alot that you pointed it out! ~Ashley

Reviewer: Trinidy Sagaro
Date: 08/16/06 15:55
Chapter: Battered Senses, Undying Devotion

T.T *snif*


I absolutly love this story!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you stick around for the next few chapters!!

Date: 08/16/06 14:03
Chapter: Battered Senses, Undying Devotion

okay please continue! this story is sooo good cant wait to read more!!!!!!

Author's Response: I should have the next chapter posted this week! Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: LiaWitch20
Date: 08/15/06 20:27
Chapter: Battered Senses, Undying Devotion

I just dont find an adjective to describe your story
It is wow I dont know, I really bit my nails!!
It is too much suspense that I got accustomed myself to (well, maybe except for Jo and another few fics)
I read it and damned! It is EXCELLENT, one of the best I have ever read.
You have got a REALLY good reader.
Please, dont give up like other authors!!!!
Update soon.
Pd: I love Ron, he's tooooo sweet!

Author's Response: Yay, thanks so much for your kind words. You gave me some major compliments there, I'm speechless. I appreciate the reader comment, because I actually beta for myself, and don't worry, I have no intention to give up on this or any of my stories. I update my chapters about once a week. Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Liadian Weasley
Date: 08/15/06 19:39
Chapter: Battered Senses, Undying Devotion

I tried to wait. What an awsome story. Truth be told, I love the way you end the chapters. Thats what keeps us coming back for more.

Oh yeah, where the heck is Harry !?!

While I'm waiting I'll go check out your other fics.

Author's Response: Where oh where is Harry... hmmm... I bet someone will figure it out before the next chapter. Yay! I hope you enjoy my other stories. I'd recommend Iduna and One Last Golden Day first, though I do love my book 7 story (it was my first one).

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