Reviews For Senses
Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 08/26/06 17:55
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

yeah they call it a soap game because when they first came up with idea we had to pay with bars of soap because we needed some for the locker rooms and bathrooms i guess, so now we dont have to pay in soap we pay in sports drinks. i am going to read one last golden day it sounds really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!and guess what today is chloes birthday!!!!( chloe if you read this happy b-day again. ) and so yeah im not sure if she already said anything or not! I need chapter TEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! if i ever find out who hacked into the mugglenet system thing i will hunt them down and throw things at them!!!! lol jk.
i gotta go read now byebye
~kelleuy (haha i spelt my name wrong again)kelley

Author's Response: Haha, hey Kelley, hope you and Chloe had fun at the party and today with her birthday. Thanks for explaining the soap game thing... yea, the hacker really just messed everything up. I think alot of people would throw things at them if they had the chance.

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 08/26/06 9:56
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

Yeah! It was so much fun, actually it wasn't that much fun, we left early to go to the party. we don't really even know who the teams were. but everyone just went to sociallize. hehehe. Instead of paying to get in, we had to bring a sports drink. and that has to do with a soap game i guess. ha. that made absolutely no sense. ah, don't ask me, i'm no good with sports info.
~Chloe and Kelley

Author's Response: Haha, ok, glad you had fun though =) Oh, one of my stories got updated, in case you didn't know it. Something for you to do while you wait for Senses to update ;)

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 08/25/06 17:09
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

yea, it's the It don't mean a thing if it ain't got that swing. Do wah Do wah Do wah Do wah Do wah Do wah Do wah Do waaaaaahhhhhh! Like that. kelley and i sang it while i typed!!!! hehehehehehe! we're going to a soap game!!! woo-hoo! and the after party! which really isn't like an official after party, but it's a party after the game, so you know, is that the same thing?

Author's Response: Soap game?

Reviewer: rachellia
Date: 08/25/06 14:13
Chapter: Battered Senses, Undying Devotion

UPDATE!!!!
i must know what will happen!!!!!!!!!
update!

Author's Response: It's been in the queue for awhile, so hopefully it will update soon! The hacker issue has slowed things down a bit. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 08/25/06 13:38
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

Have you heard that song called It Don't Mean a Thing if it Ain't got that Sing Sing Sing??? Cuz we're singing it in Treble Choir and it ALWAYS gets stuck in my head! it's really catchy!
*goes off humming that song and snapping fingers*

Author's Response: Is it based off of the jazz tune, "Sing, sing sing?" Or is it the standard "It don't mean a thing if it ain't got that swing" followed by do-wops? Ah, I miss singing. *goes off thinking of operatic songs from college*

Reviewer: neopetsrule
Date: 08/24/06 23:11
Chapter: A Sense of Failure

at first i was confused with all the repeating what already happenned but then it all started to make sence.

Author's Response: Glad that it finally started to come together. I kind of liked the confusion, since a battle must be immensely confusing with everything happening at once. Now that they have found each other, things should be pretty good. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 08/23/06 21:48
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
They're shutting down the queue! (sp? looks like it's spelled wrong)
Merlin! This is getting juicier and juicier by the minute! (which happens in this case to be bad more than exciting) now i have to wait longer for your story! aww man!

Author's Response: My stories may get through in the next couple days. They said they were letting submissions continue for two days, and my stories have been in for a week. Hopefully they get this all resolved soon...

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 08/23/06 21:44
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

Oh, duh I never even thought of that! *wakes up from sleeping on the job* This is even more serious than i thought! YOU'RE REALLY GOIIN DOWN!

Author's Response: Yea, its really scary to think that my story might have been personally messed with. Now I want to go to other sites and make sure no one is using it as their own work or anything. Sigh.

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 08/23/06 17:17
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

Ooo! Good idea!
And tell me about it!!!! We've barely even learned anything so far TO take a test on! But of course, leave it to teachers to find something! hehehe. all right, i'm gunna go study now.
~Chloe
p.s. Have you seen the new post on the main page of MNFF? I just saw it and it's about some hacker jerk who hacked into the staff's thing and sent a bunch of rude emails or something. psh. how rude. *gets terrible idea*
Oh...my...gosh...
WAS IT YOU!!!???!!! hehehehehe. just joking. it wouldn't/couldn't be you. but I'm gunna get to the bottom of things around here! I'll be like a junior detective! YEAH!!!!
*sets up office and shifts head side to side suspiciously searching for suspects.*
I KNOW YOU'RE OUT THERE!
*gets bored and falls asleep*
well, i tried.

Author's Response: Yea, that's crazy, isn't it? I think they're the ones that deleted my story from the featured list, and probably removed me from your author section though. I just hope they didn't do anything else to my account =/

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 08/23/06 17:02
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

We keep playing the sport until about five minutes before the bell rings, then we change, but if we want to take a shower, we have to have permission from the teacher cuz sometimes it takes more than five minutes.
Ahhh! I gotta get off the computer! Three tests tomorrow!!!!
~Chloe

Author's Response: Ask one of the female teachers. At my school they always had a male and female in a pair (I guess so you could go to the other one, even if it wasn't your designated teacher, to ask about personal issues). If they see you looking awful, hopefully they'll be cool about it. Three tests? It's your second week!!

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 08/23/06 16:09
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

Chloe gets most of the credit for the last review cuz she typed it! sorry, had to get that out there...
*kelley makes angry face...OOO like this >:( and chloe slowly and silently slips away*

Author's Response: Hahahaha, you two are the highlight of my day, seriously!

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 08/23/06 16:07
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

wow. another unbelievable day at school. my gym teacher is a total sexist. he's majorly against girls. today, the class was playing football, and the boys' team won (i hate playing boys vrs. girls, cuz then the boys have to tackle the girls, and the girls are always scared they'll break our noses or something) so our teacher's like, "well, since the girls are obviously no good at football, go do some laps!"
and we're like "what!"
cuz we tried and all, we just didn't play as well as the boys. and aren't teachers sposed to boost your confidence even if you weren't the best?
so we ran really hard (while the boys took a REST) and when we were done, everyone was sweaty and stuff, and jodi's like, "can we go take showers!?" (i usually hate taking showers in the locker room, but i was so smelly i wanted to)
and he's like, "NO! rawr!" without that last part, and we're like, "awww man!"
and then we all went back to class (and our school doesn't have air conditioning even though it's 90 degrees so we were even hotter in there) and like four guys came in late to class with the gym teacher, and our gym teacher's like, "excuse them for being late. they were taking showers"
So he let the guys take showers but not the girls!!!! SO NOT FAIR! Isn't that illegal or something!!! >: (
~Chloe and Kelley

Author's Response: How would he be able to stop you from taking a shower after class? Aren't they in the girls locker rooms? He wouldn't have any control over that. I do think they are supposed to let you out of class with enough time to shower if you want to, so if it keeps up I suppose you could send an anonymous note to the principal or something (or a petition cuz it sounds like alot of girls were annoyed).

Reviewer: Bewitching
Date: 08/23/06 0:11
Chapter: Battered Senses, Undying Devotion

I enjoy your fanfic very much! I love your word choice, it creates amazing imagery and I can just see the scene ply out in my mind! The only problem I found were a few grammer mistakes that probably just came from quick typing.
[Quote]His father smiled at his weakly, his face shining with loving support. [/Quote] Just little things like that, they are a pet peeve of mine, thats why I notice them. Maybe double beta? I do that sometimes when I'm having issues getting my fic accepted. Overall, I loved it!

Author's Response: Yea, those are the things that drive me crazy when I go back through, the stuff that never gets picked up by spellcheck... thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: AKA294
Date: 08/22/06 21:22
Chapter: A Sense of Timing

This is a great story, I can't wait to hear more. I think I'll try what Potterfan22 did...

Abra Ka Validate!!!! Maybe it has a late effect...
Validate soon, MNFF!!!!

Author's Response: Maybe if you get together and say it at the same time... Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 08/22/06 17:59
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

I finally finished the chappie seven through nine stories and they were SO COOL!!!! I love 'em!!!!! Now I have to pace around till the next one's up! Byebye!!
~Kelley

Author's Response: Thanks Kelley! Glad to see you back!

Reviewer: AKA294
Date: 08/21/06 21:12
Chapter: Battered Senses, Undying Devotion

OMGOSH!!!! LOOOVE THIS STORY!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Next chapter should be up soon!

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 08/21/06 18:34
Chapter: A Sense of Timing

hehehe. I think strange people do have strange pets. Well, I know I do. My dog has one blue eye and one brown one and she's like three different mixes and she seriously looks like a wild coyote or something, but she's still so cute cuz she's just a wittle puppy!!!!
And yeah, Maddie Sage is my 16 month old little sister. And it's my other little sister's 11th birthday today and my big sister's first day of college! Woo-hoo! Go them. Now stephanie and i are just left out...
~Chloe
*sneak attack* ABRA KE VALIDATE!
...
...
Ah well, I had to try.

Author's Response: Haha, so close to working too! Try again later =) Wow, so many girls in one family. My condolensces to your mother ;)

Reviewer: TMonkey
Date: 08/21/06 17:56
Chapter: A Sense of Timing

Pins and needles, pins and needles; that is what you will be on by the end of this chapter! It is a fantabulous one indeed. There is some espionage afoot, and is all I will say.

On another note, I'm assuming Maddie Sage is a human, since there was some toy throwing involved in your little parable of goldfish and lapsitting; but I have two cats that can sometimes wreak the same childlike havoc. Strangely enough, food satiates them in the same manner; peanuts for one cat, and oatmeal for the other. Who'd have thunk a cat would like oatmeal?!?!?

Author's Response: It makes perfect sense seeing as how its your cat, Monkey ;) I'm betting thats lily, right?

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 08/21/06 17:31
Chapter: A Sense of Timing

New chappie! Yeah yeah yeah yeah YES!!! oh gosh i broke the 'yeah' chain...
I'm baby sitting maddie sage again, but i found her weakness!!!!! I was eating some goldfish, and i gave her one, and she really liked it, and she stopped throwing around everything in the toybox, and she started eating my goldfish! So i just gave her my bowl, and now she's sitting peacefully on my lap!!! SUCCESS!
Can't wait till this chappie is out!!!!!!
~Chlgoe *goes off to get a new snack...*

Author's Response: Yay for healthy snacks! I hope everyone enjoys this chapter. Answers some questions and creates a few new ones (and its more Harry/Ginny for you!). =D

Reviewer: EmilyJayne
Date: 08/21/06 11:18
Chapter: Battered Senses, Undying Devotion

so well written!!!
captivating!
I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! More to come soon =)

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