Reviews For Senses
Reviewer: rachellia
Date: 09/01/06 21:56
Chapter: A Sense of Timing

cliff hanger much???
holy crap the suspense is killing me....
this story is so very addicting........

Author's Response: Hahaha, haven't you heard? I have a cliffie machine, it's permanently stuck to 'on.' Some of my readers are trying to find a way to disable it, but have had little luck. I really don't do it on purpose, its just where the chapters feel right in ending. Will update this weekend, thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 09/01/06 16:11
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

WOOHOO! School ended with a wicked awesome pep rally and i am PEPPED up!!!! I SO can't wait for the game tonight! *goes off screaming and shouting school song*
~Chloe
(kelley gets to perform her flags routine for half time tonight with her team, and we gotta wish her luck!)

Author's Response: Have fun!

Reviewer: Pearl_Moon
Date: 09/01/06 6:21
Chapter: A Sense of Timing

Hey. I've just read this whole story for the first time and i think it's absoloutly fabulous. At times I have to remind myself i'm not actually reading the books! The plot is fantastically well thought out and original. The description and imaginary is also top notch, I cannot wait for more. Congratulations on being a fantastic author! 10/10 xxxxxxxx

Author's Response: Wow, that's a major compliment! Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Next chapter should be up soon if I don't lose power from the tropical storm...

Reviewer: GillyWeedEater2006
Date: 08/31/06 23:04
Chapter: A Sense of Timing

AWESOME chapter!


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Magical Me
Date: 08/31/06 21:28
Chapter: A Sense of Timing

Perfectly crafted as usual.

Never a chapter ending without a cliff-hanger.

Author's Response: Haha, I don't think I know how to end without one. I wouldn't be surprised if I managed one on the final chapter, too, lol! Still waiting for your next chapters! I can't wait to see what happens in your fic =)

Reviewer: justlikehermione429
Date: 08/31/06 20:29
Chapter: A Sense of Timing

AHHH I HAVE BUTTERFLIES IN MY STOMACH! Excellent, im very happy with this chapter. the characters are truly getting to be amazing, so real, and so much like their canon counterparts. Ginny and Harry's relationship reallly caught me, because it is exactly as I would have pictured it.
Once again, left with a big cliffie, but no matter I know you dont take too long to update so i cant wait for more. next ch promises to be an exciting one...

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks alot! Yea, I was rereading my early chapters today and I realized how much my writing has grown already. Its fun trying to show the contrast between H/G and R/Hr, because the relationships really are completely different. Next chapter will hopefully be ready this weekend =D

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 08/31/06 19:22
Chapter: A Sense of Timing

Double review! :) I agree, you do write Ron the best. You make him into the character he truly is, the man we don't always get to see, especially in fanfic. I sort of want to comment on where the story might go with Ron but I've learned my lesson, I think. You do what you need to do with Ron, you don't need to know what I want. ;)
Dueling question is up. As for the hints, I'm determined to find them now. Here I thought I was getting better at slowing down as I read and actually piecing things together. I'm so going back over this.
As always, your fan reviews are a hoot! It's like a whole second story to read along with the main feature, lol! What fun. :)
~Gina :)

Author's Response: Hooray! Gina this is review #200on this fic! *throws confetti* Glad it was from you! Please, comment away. I'm actually intrigued as to where you think this is going for Ron, because I'm afraid I may have foreshadowed something I didn't intend to have happen... And yes, I love my reviews. They light up my day =D

Reviewer: hpgirl_91
Date: 08/31/06 19:19
Chapter: A Sense of Timing

oooh.. graveyard...GOF... can't wait to see how this turns out!

Author's Response: Hmmm, could be... maybe not... nice catch, though, no one else has noticed that ;)

Reviewer: hpgirl_91
Date: 08/31/06 19:17
Chapter: A Sense of Timing

Such a good chapter! I really like this one- I was wondering what Ginny was looking so hopeful about in last chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter! This story is so well writen, congrats on your featured stories award!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! Yea, I was excited to let everyone in on the secret about Ginny's odd behavior last chapter. Glad you liked it, will update soon!

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 08/31/06 18:21
Chapter: A Sense of Timing

Hi! I really liked seeing things from Harry's perspective. I'm excited I picked up the hints about Harry-the-Deatheater. Good plan! I'm somewhat surprised he roughed up Flint: I'm tempted to throw one of those dueling questions you asked me back at you. ;) I think you write Ron and Hermione really well so I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I wonder where the Death Eaters took Ron and Hermione? Did I miss another hint? Are you really going to answer that? ;) Great job and good luck as you continue! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Oooo, dueling club throw back, huh *cringes* could be interesting ;) Thanks, I think Ron is my best character in writing, though I've grown by leaps and bounds wtih Hermione. Where or where have they gone... hmmm... (I always leave hints, btw)

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 08/31/06 17:42
Chapter: A Sense of Timing

yes that last one was me, but it didnt come out right after that it was supposed to say i love it so much and please right more soon!!!
~kelley

Author's Response: Haha, I understand, it's happened to me plenty of times. Thanks for reviewing =D

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 08/31/06 17:40
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

that last reveiw didnt come out right it was supposed to say i love it so much pretty please write chapter11soon.!! cain't wait to read more!!!!!
~kelley

Author's Response: Ah ha! I thought it was you!! Will do, dear =)

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 08/31/06 17:37
Chapter: A Sense of Timing

AHHHHHHHHH cliffie!!!!!!!! i

Author's Response: Hahaha, was that Kelley?

Reviewer: EyelashWishes
Date: 08/31/06 16:40
Chapter: A Sense of Timing

Three Cheers for gryffinpuff.
Hip hip Hooray! Hip hip Hooray! Hip Hip Hooray!
I love this story i couldnt stop reading. I was completely glued.
You rock, please update soon x x

Author's Response: *waves* Thank you, thank you, thank you!! I'm glad I kept you captivated. Updating soon, I promise!

Reviewer: smiley10792
Date: 08/31/06 16:39
Chapter: A Sense of Timing

Amazing. The story just keeps getting better. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you! Will do!

Reviewer: molly jo 7
Date: 08/31/06 16:36
Chapter: A Sense of Timing

wicked i can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Thanks! Working on it =D

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 08/31/06 16:29
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

THANK MARSHMALLOWS!!! the chappie is finally validated! Hooray!!!! It was so brilliant and exciting and suspensful! Loved it!!!!!

Can't wait for more!!!!

AHHHHHH! That darn cliffie machine!!!! *tries to come up with evil plan*
~Chloe

p.s. Kelley should be reviewing shortly :D

Author's Response: Maybe if you cover the cliffie machine with marshmellow fluff...

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 08/31/06 16:28
Chapter: A Sense of Timing

oh I love this!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Starmaiden
Date: 08/31/06 15:32
Chapter: A Sense of Timing

Oooo. Exciting! I only picked up this story fairly recently, but I like it a lot. The changing points of view are confusing, but also a very cool technique.

Good characterization -- having Harry ruthless enough to hurt Flint but not enough to like it, and with Ginny. They've matured nicely. I recognize them, but they're more sensible about things like compromising for the sake of the battle.

This line's a little awkward:
This had led to some rather excruciating to witness moments
It would flow better as "This had led to some rather excruciating moments" or "This had led to some moments that were excruciatingly hard to witness". Just feels easier.

Great piece of suspense when Harry almost gets caught watching the Death Eaters. And it doesn't stop the suspense when Ron screams, because you know that Ron's in pain, though Harry's safe for the moment.

“We’re going to have to get your captured,”
This should be "get you captured".

“Let’s go,” she said in a brave voice, throwing herself into the darkness. She’d already lost one brother today. There was no way in hell she was going to lose another.
Great lines. Perfect for Ginny -- determined and strong, even in times of terrible fear.

It made Harry sick to realize how easily someone could hide behind this disguise, becoming less than human in the safety of its secrecy.
Good insight into how the Death Eaters can live with themselves. They can play tricks on their own minds, separating (to some degree) the human from the evil.

Fantastic concept, by the way, completely different from anything else I've seen. It gives you so much more room to work with.

Well done, as is all the rest of this. Keep it up!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! I hope the alternating POV doesn't get too confusing (it's hard to know as the author since I know exactly what's happening at all times). Thanks for pointing out all my little mishaps. One of these days I'm going to track your reviews and edit my chapters *looks at calendar and sighs* I agree about that line, it didn't sit right with me either and for some reason I didn't change it. Thanks for reading/reviewing!!

Reviewer: LiaWitch20
Date: 08/31/06 14:03
Chapter: A Sense of Timing

Ohhhh, that was TOO GOOD!

But...yaw! I read it too fast and I have to wait for the next chappie again!!!
Hehe, I think I'm getting mad... well, maybe that's normal about me, can't say.

You just keep us coming back for more!!
Ohhh, you're such a great writer!!

Keep going!! And fast if you don't mind, hehe ;-D
Luv ya!

Author's Response: *Big happy author grin* Thanks for that! I update pretty fast, and plan to do so this weekend (so long as I don't get blown away by the hurricane....).

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