Reviews For Senses
Reviewer: Pearl_Moon
Date: 09/16/06 17:44
Chapter: A Sense of Grace in the Light of Mortality

NNOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! You vant do this to me!!! u have to update quickly! still a fab story...please tell me this has a happy ending!!!??? 10/10 (still!)

Author's Response: I think everyone will be more than satisfied by the time they finish this story. Thanks for reading, I know its getting so exciting!!!

Reviewer: justlikehermione429
Date: 09/16/06 1:03
Chapter: A Sense of Grace in the Light of Mortality

WOW Id have to say that was one of the best chs yet. i cant wait to hear the next part, and im really liking the changing povs.

like always, brilliant

oh and btw ch 1 of my fan fic is up, go check it out!!! lol later

Author's Response: Thanks very much! The next (and last) chapters should be pretty good. I'm excited =)

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 09/15/06 22:09
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

Tell me about it!!! What ever happened to preschool?
1. Socialize with little friends
2. Recess
3. Snack Time
4. Recess
5. Nap Time
6. Recess
7. Arts and Crafts Time (make something for mommy and daddy)
8. Go home
And it starts over the next day!
*sigh* The good ole days...
Now it's like:
1. Nine classes a day
2. Two minutes to go to your locker and then go to your next class (two minutes is NOT enough time, i swear!)
3. Get trampled by all the older students
4. Take lotsa quizzes
5. Gets lotsa homework
6. Lunch - this includes a *delightful* meal including frozen milk, frozen cookies/brownies, raw-ish meat, and maybe some disgusting side dish or something (if we're lucky).
7. Continue with next classes and pretend that you're not about to throw up your raw/frozen lunch.
8. buy diet soda from the machine. (they took out all the regular yummy sodas and now they're all just diet stuff. diet pepsi, diet mountain dew, diet green tea (seriously), diet wild cherry pepsi, etc.)
"Ahem, excuse me teacher, WHEN'S RECESS!?!"

Phew...glad i got that rambling out of my system...

Author's Response: *Hands Chloe some cookies and a naptime mat* Recess as soon as you take your nap and drink all your milk! *curls up with teddy* (I miss the good old days, too)

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 09/15/06 21:33
Chapter: A Sense of Grace in the Light of Mortality

AHH AHHH! *hypervenalates* AHHHHHH! Grr Snape! I'M HYPER! Great story! Two word sentences! That was three words! OOO four! Okay *deep breaths*
*deep breaths*
*deep breaths*
Great Chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved it SOOOO much!
~Chloe :D

Author's Response: Hahahaha, Hyper? YOU? Never! ;) I've missed seeing you around Chloe, your school really is taking up far too much of your time ;)

Reviewer: amsies360
Date: 09/15/06 21:29
Chapter: A Sense of Grace in the Light of Mortality

oh hurry with another up date this chapter was soooo short! love your story.

Author's Response: Sorry it was short! Will update soon, I promise!

Reviewer: Rowan Weasley
Date: 09/15/06 19:51
Chapter: A Sense of Grace in the Light of Mortality

No! Don't stop there! I can't wait for another update.....

This is fantastic, Keep up the awsome work and update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks! At least it wasn't a major cliffie this time, right??? Updating soon =)

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 09/15/06 19:14
Chapter: A Sense of Grace in the Light of Mortality

Fascinating chapter! Wonderfully descriptive - you really do know how to build the suspense. I loved how you didn't reveal the mysterious Death Eater until the end. I figured it out as soon as Hermione saw him. Of course it was him. Saving grace indeed. I can't wait for the next bit.
~Gina :)

Author's Response: Nice interpretation of the title, Gina dear ;) I wanted people to wonder if it was Voldemort under the hood to be honest, or at least leave people frightfully confused for a minute. Next bit should be up soon!

Reviewer: hpgirl_91
Date: 09/15/06 19:12
Chapter: A Sense of Grace in the Light of Mortality

AHHH SNAPE! I was totally not expecting that. It completely threw me! Great job on an interesting plot twist. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yay! I was hoping to confuse people with him showing up. Glad to see it worked =) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: MeGustaElRupertGrint
Date: 09/15/06 18:57
Chapter: A Sense of Grace in the Light of Mortality

blah! this one was short :[ can u try and make them longer if possible? i love ur story and how fast u up-date it :D please make the new one soon


Author's Response: Was it really that short?? *looks back at chapter* I will try to post soon. Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: smiley10792
Date: 09/15/06 17:34
Chapter: A Sense of Grace in the Light of Mortality

Wow. Once again, a very descriptive chapter. Update soon!

Author's Response: Is descriptive good? Hope so =) Thanks!

Date: 09/15/06 17:03
Chapter: A Sense of Grace in the Light of Mortality



Author's Response: THANKS!!!! I'm fairly certain all the chapters from here on out should have the same affect. Glad you liked it =D

Reviewer: LiaWitch20
Date: 09/13/06 16:47
Chapter: A Sense of Grace in the Light of Mortality

Damned! It was too long for me!!!

Hey Author, you got two girls named Gina here, hehe.
Isn't grea?t!!!
Hehehe, i'm just happy and i don't know why...
Well, a chapter going to be up... that makes my day!

luv ya

CaŽn't wait!!!!!!

Luv ya!

Author's Response: Hi Gina number 2! I hope they validate soon and that you enjoy the chapter! Thanks for checking back, you all crack me up =D

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 09/11/06 21:45
Chapter: A Sense of Grace in the Light of Mortality

All right, I can't resist: I'm spamming a review before the chapter is up. :)
I am hearing the Jeopardy theme in my head as we wait.
But then I think about the chapter title: it's fascinating. Very musical. Now I hear Brahms or Mozart.
I'm sure there are clues in it. I am most curious about the word Grace. It could mean so many different things.
Maybe I should have taken you up on your offer!
Anyway - can't wait to see how it turned out!
~Gina :)

Author's Response: Haha, I was feeling a little musical when I wrote this chapter I think. As with most of my chapter titles, there are dual meanings within the text, one meaning much more prevalent than others. What can I say, I like to play with the meaning of words *cousensesgh*. The offer still stands ;) ~Ashley

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 09/09/06 16:05
Chapter: A Sense of Grace in the Light of Mortality

*runs away screaming*

Author's Response: ROFL!!

Reviewer: Lainie xox
Date: 09/08/06 16:11
Chapter: A Sense of Timing

Oh my god, dontttt leaveee me hanging like this!! I got so teary while reading about Ron and Hermione sacrificing themselves for Harry, oh my god, it's horrible.... I couldn't read very well because of the tears obsuring my vision! Way to leave us hanging here! I can't wait for the next update... I'm a great fan of yours and I love how this story keeps me hooked and the whole Ron and Hermioneness and Harry and Ginnyness. I love it. More please, but I shall be patient. =D

Author's Response: Next chapter is very close to being done, I want to post tonight if possible. Thanks for reading, Lainie!

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 09/07/06 19:43
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

OMG Thank you so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I mean that more than anything. I get so nervous with these kinds of things, i'm such a loser, i know. thank you so much tho and i definitely did it right this time!!! THANKS!
~Chloe :D

Author's Response: You're welcome dear =)

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 09/07/06 19:32
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

nevermind. you just PMed me. :D

Author's Response: Solved! Hope I caught you in time!

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 09/07/06 19:05
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

another stupid comment: it's not working.

Author's Response: solved!

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 09/07/06 19:00
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

Cool! So put it under Ron/Hermione, right?

Author's Response: Haha, I believe it would be canon romance category, and yes its a R/Hr fic =)

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 09/07/06 18:16
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

Erm, yeah...the category was sort of an accident, and i feel pretty bad about it, cuz i messed it up, so sorry! but i still TOTALLY think that you should win! if anyone wins it should POSITIVELY be you!!!!!! Cheers! To the bestestest author EVER!

Author's Response: Lol, PM a mod if it was really an accident, they'll understand. And thanks for your compliments, Chloe, you are too sweet.

Author's Response: Hey Chloe, I just talked to a mod. If you go under your post and push edit, you can actually delete it and post it someplace else if you want to.

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