Reviews For Senses
Reviewer: Glittering_Pheonix
Date: 11/26/06 22:51
Chapter: Common Sense

OH MY GOSH! They need to validate it soon!!! They should just let it through, I mean look at the previous chapters! I SO cannot wait to read to!!

Author's Response: Haha, that would be nice, but I think it's only the mods that have the priveledge of skipping the validating process. One of the perks that goes with all the work involved I suppose ;) Hopefully it will be up to standards and validate soon!

Reviewer: Potter_You_Rotter
Date: 11/24/06 15:14
Chapter: Common Sense

Validate? Why must they keep us waiting? It is against Pottertology!!! I am outraged. Anyway I am sure it will be wonderful. Hope all is going well! Happy belated Turkey Day!!!

Author's Response: Haha, I know most of the mods. They need a break just like the rest of us =) Hopefully it will be up soon next week!

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 11/22/06 23:53
Chapter: Attuning Your Battle Senses

can't wait till the next chapter this is the best story i've ever read other than the HP series of course.

Author's Response: Wow, what a compliment! It should be up soon =)

Reviewer: brwnharedlady
Date: 11/21/06 19:23
Chapter: Attuning Your Battle Senses

Great story, I can't wait for the next installment.

Author's Response: Thanks =)

Reviewer: UltimateAuror
Date: 11/21/06 14:59
Chapter: Attuning Your Battle Senses

Oh, come on! What is this? Here I thought I was starting a completed, award winning story, and now I am left dangling from the edge of a hideously evil cliffie?! Who does that?!?

Wow, where do I start? It is no wonder this story won an award, it is exciting and enticing! I find myself on pins and needles, waiting for more pages to tumble forward.

You have such a maturity to your author's voice, I don't think I have read anything like this. Grammar gymnastics, that's what it is. And it is amazing, for lack of more enthusiastic terminology. On one note, I want the story to progress and hurry up so I can see what happens, and on the flip side, I don't want this to end. You can captivate the mind, and envoke multiple emotions with a single paragraph. A job well done, and congratulations on your accomplishment. I cannot wait to go further with this.

Author's Response: That was quite possibly the coolest review ever. *grins ridiculously at the term "grammar gymnastics"* I'm sorry about the hideously evil cliffie(s). I love them. Truly, I think I'm obsessed. But there isn't much you can do in this plotline to avoid them, so I blame it one that, lol. Thanks so much for this fabulous review and for reading! Hopefully the next chapter will be up soon =)

Reviewer: h3art0f1nk
Date: 11/20/06 20:57
Chapter: Common Sense

OMG! When will this be validated?!?!?

Author's Response: Haha, it might take awhile in the R/Hr category =/

Reviewer: Mrs_TwitchyFerret
Date: 11/18/06 23:15
Chapter: Common Sense

since WHEN does Kelley find out that stuff's updated before I do!!??!!?? grrr...*storms off to find kelley- jk!*



Author's Response: Hahahaha, perhaps because you have seperate names now? I hope you like it once it's up =)

Reviewer: PumPkin_JuiCe22
Date: 11/18/06 22:22
Chapter: Common Sense

YEAH ITS UP!!!!!!!!!!!now all i have to do is wait for it to validate hooray!!!!!

Author's Response: =D

Reviewer: h3art0f1nk
Date: 11/18/06 21:28
Chapter: Common Sense

OMG IT'S FINALLY UP!!! I love the title of this chapter. I can't wait to read it! Oh, it must be validated soon.

Author's Response: I know! The long horrible wait is almost over. I hope you enjoy it once it's validated!!

Reviewer: AKA294
Date: 11/18/06 8:40
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

I read your note on your profile... and I was wondering HOW do you ever find the time to write?!? Everybody's nagging you, so I'm going to NOT do that and just wait patiently...

Author's Response: Haha, well, this morning I got up at 5 so I could try to update (yes, I got up at 5am on a Saturday for my lovely readers). The chapter is basically... done. I'll be updating today I think =) Thanks for understanding!

Reviewer: emmaholloway
Date: 11/17/06 17:53
Chapter: Attuning Your Battle Senses

this is amazing
i hope that isnt the end
i want to know what happens to ron and hermione
they cant die when theyve just realised how much they love each other
i actually couldnt stop reading
and it wasnt predicatable
i kept thinking things were going to happen and then they didnt
its really amazing
you are a very talented writer
keep it up
x x

Author's Response: Yea, them dying now would be unbelievably tragic, wouldn't it ;) I'm glad the story wasn't predictable, I do my best to be creative to keep you on your toes! Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: LiaWitch20
Date: 11/16/06 17:33
Chapter: Attuning Your Battle Senses

The next chapter will be THE BEST...
That's the only reason why you are taking soooo long...
But Please!!!! Not tooo long!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: <.< >.> Hmmm.... well, I hope it's good anyway. Updating soon!

Reviewer: Thespidermanblanket
Date: 11/14/06 23:09
Chapter: Attuning Your Battle Senses



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: wizard lover
Date: 11/13/06 16:43
Chapter: Attuning Your Battle Senses

This isn't all there is. This can't be it. HOW COULD THIS BE ALL YOU WROTE?
love the story .

Author's Response: Haha, there is more coming, I promise. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: hpobsessed
Date: 11/13/06 16:09
Chapter: Attuning Your Battle Senses

O and the story is wonderfully written, and I love the going back to the other characters POV to tell it from their side! It really gives the story a depth that other stories don't have!

Get the next chapter up soon PLEASE!


Author's Response: Almost ready to post! I'm glad you like the changing viewpoints, it can be tricky but its really affective I think =)

Reviewer: hpobsessed
Date: 11/13/06 16:06
Chapter: Attuning Your Battle Senses

ARG!!!!!!!!!!! I thought the story was finished, but I read it wrong!!!!! Congrats on getting runner-up though!!!! This story is wonderful, but that it absolutly the worst cliff hanger ever known to man! That plus the character death warning is enough to drive any person insane!!!!!

lovely story though


Author's Response: Technically a character death already happened (Percy), but I'm not going to say in that warning applies to anyone else... and believe me, I have worse cliffies up my sleeve *insert evil laugh here* Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Mrs_TwitchyFerret
Date: 11/12/06 18:50
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

And by the way, take your time on updating! I'm sure when you update the next chapter it will be absolutely perfect and i can wait until then!
p.s. Plus, the longer you wait to post, the louder people scream when they see the next chapter! ;D

Author's Response: Hahaha, let's hope so.

Reviewer: Mrs_TwitchyFerret
Date: 11/12/06 18:48
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

Are you kidding? I love the bad boys!! haha just joking but I really do love Malfoy! i don't think he's really evil! He just needs a little love...FROM ME!!! JK!

Author's Response: Chloe, I'm sure Malfoy would change for the better if you got your hands on him for even a day. Personally, I've latched onto the Malfoy is a werewolf theory pretty hard, so his evil side will probably die off by the end of book 7 anyway =)

Reviewer: Her_mi_o_ne 16
Date: 11/12/06 14:24
Chapter: Attuning Your Battle Senses

THIS IS AN AMAZING STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It is beyond words.
I desperately wait for more of it on the edge of my seat.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON, for your poor reader's sake, the one's who hang on to every word you write and don't want them to stop.

Author's Response: Haha, thanks very much, more coming very very shortly.

Reviewer: potterlurvesginny2
Date: 11/12/06 0:09
Chapter: Attuning Your Battle Senses

daaaaaaaaaaaang i can see why you won a prize! this story is FANTASTIC! its so addicting! The back-tracking for other people's POV is a little distracting but your writing is amazing. Can't wait for more!


Author's Response: Haha, half the readers love the backtracking and half of them really don't care for it. Either way I think it's an interesting effect =) Thanks for reading, updating soon!

You must login (register) to review.
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.

We have stories and authors in this archive.


Choose Theme:
Tom Riddle and the Cave of Living Waters by alittletiefling 6th-7th Years
What would happen if Tom Marvolo Riddle had been adopted by well-meaning squibs?...
Molly Weasley's Apple Dumplings by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
Molly has studied history and knows the old stories, but she also knows what...
Early, Early Spring: Professor Sinistra Reflects by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
I didn't know much about Professor Sinistra, the Astronomy Professor, until...
It Takes Two to Tango by lucca4 3rd-5th Years
They cannot keep doing this; it is only a matter of whose resolve will break...
In The Heat Of The Morning by welshdevondragon 3rd-5th Years
Summary: In the heat of the morning, Katie and Leanne lie in the grounds...
Can't Fight the Moonlight by Acacia Carter 6th-7th Years
A life-changing disaster at work drives Neville Longbottom to seek aid from...
The History Teacher by iLuna17 6th-7th Years
Maybe he didn’t just love history, maybe he loved being a history teacher.
white on white by Padfoot11333 6th-7th Years
Three vignettes about scars, love, and sex.