Ashley, congrats on a great story!!! I read it with bated breath and completely ignored my work all day. This was really a great R/Hr, one of the best!! You captured them so well- made them realistic and mature. Loved every word!!!!
Oh. My. Word. This is unquestioningly the best fanfic I have ever read. I have accomplished nothing for hours now because I simply couldn't stop until I knew how it all ended (though I confess skipping to the epilogue a few chapters back to make sure Hermione would pull through). JI am a die-hard R/Hr shipper too, but only enjoy fanfics where they are truly in character... you have written them both wonderfully, as well as everyone else. Great job on this. You are a wonderful writer and I hope there is more from you around here. Thanks. somewhere.
Bravo
It would have been so easy to make Snape the total villian of the piece but You managed to keep all the characters in character
I look forward to reading more by you
Ahh that was sweet. I really almost reviewed youu badly fro the ending to the last chapter. I sorry to hear that Mrs.Weasley died, but it was a nice ploy to make us think that this was Hermiones funeral. All in all simply Marvelous. That was great. The tension was really good. I'M SO GLAD HERMY IS ALIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-WIndy who hates it when Hermy dies
I agree with so many of the reviewers - i thought Hermione was dead! wow. and i can't believe molly and kingesly died. in my opinion they are the two strongest characters in harry potter! i could not believe it.
You did a stunning job. Absolutely no criticism.
wow. that was a spectacular fic. you kept my absolute attention to the very end. if you only received runner-up as best romance fic, I bet the competition was very close. i wish i could write like you! I look forward to reading your other fics! congratulations again!
wow. that is amazing. usually by the 2nd last chapter i can figure out how a story will end. but not yours!!!! gotta read the last chapter!
i know that it is probably too late to offer my opinion but i will still say that it would be a good idea for this fic to be in the R/Hr and H/G category!
Gotta keep reading!!!! i actually have absolutely NO clue how this will end!!!!!!!
you are trying to kill me with suspense!! aaah! i know you are!!
cliffie extrordinaire. keep up the great writing! i love the irony of the last line - ginny might die but they still won the battle.
ahh!! keep reading!!
ahhh, well i am reading this after it is already finished!! but if i had to wait for an update, i dont think i could stand the suspense! keep updating!
wow crazy cliffie!! amazing fic!!! and for the 8th time, gotta keep reading!
awesome!! "i told a lie." sweet. gotta keep reading!
great fic!! you are an amazing writer! i can't wait to keep reading!
great story. i really enjoyed reading. keep writing!!
I love this!!! I really love R/Hr and THIS is one of the best I've read. I love the stroryline too, nicely done! Looking forward to reading more of yours!!
YOU GAVE ME CHILLS WITH THE LAST LINE!!!!!
"all too soon reallity would bring them crashing back to there senses"
chills even typing that i got chills!!!!! omg i love how u bring back the title... is it bad to just now relize that all the chapters had something to do wiuth "senses" in the title lol?
OMG WHAT R U PLAYING AT?!?!?!?!?!
u scared me sooo bad!!!!
i was crying my eyes
out because i thought
hermione died right after
she finally was in love
with ron!!!!
then i thought u might
be playing at something so i got my hopes up it was somebody else
then it was like "this lovely young lady" or something and i
started crying again and
then it said arthur was in pain
and i was like SNAP and started cracking up at how stupid
i was being lol
i think u should have made
it longer but i loved it anyways!!!
did you mean to make
ppl think hermione died?
because u did a good
job lol
god u scared the crap
out of me lol
Loved it! Absolutely loved it! No complaints, only praise. That was a great story! Thanks for writing it!
