This is great! Update soon! Sorry, I suck at reviews.
Author's Response: U don't suck at reviews. I put down the same thing all the time. Thanks for the review.
Wow, so funny so far, i just cant stop reading, great job!
i like it alot 10/10 write more soon (and add it)
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cant wait till next chapppter!!!
update asap!!!
This is quite entertaining. I have a query though. Why were Lily and Emily ever friends with Marie in the first place? She's really weird and nasty....especially weird...
Author's Response: I really don't know why they are friends with her. I guess she needed a friend. Well glad u like the story. Thanks for the review.
Jeez! Marie is a bit of a b......witch, isnt she? LILY LIKES JAMES!!!! YAY!!!! SHES OUT OF DENIAL!!! YAY AGAIN!!!
great chapter, I can't wait until the next
Yeah, James is right, this IS going to be good. Please update soon. I think i'm addicted!
YAY!!! The're going to get Marie back, yay, this is going to be good.
What a mean evil girl! I feel sorry for Sirius now. Anyway, well done, another good story part.
lol, i can't stop laughing!! What sort of girl is Marie, obviously not a very nice one! :P lol.
Oh dear, what are they going to do now? Is Emily a real person, like a friend or someone? Or just a made up character? Really nice story, my sister likes it too.
Author's Response: Emily is a fake character. I never use my friends names for stories. Glad u like it. Thanks for the review.
Omg! This is exciting, they are SO dead. Well done, this story is really good!
nooooooooooo plz uptate soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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It's a good idea, and i can see where your going with it. Well done. I can tell it's going to be funny.
That's a little mean how you treat Peter. He wasn' evil then. He has some talents. If you were a little nicer to Peter, than I would REALLy like this story. For now: 7/10.
Author's Response: Peter. Yes, Peter. I've decided to have him do something in the nineth chapter. It's not anything mean. Thanks for the review.