Reviews For Life As A Girl
Reviewer: pebble_kitten2
Date: 05/01/06 18:59
Chapter: Chapter 1

I love this idea. It is going to be funny to see how these four handle being girls. Keep writing. I can't wait until the next chapter comes out.

Reviewer: nikster
Date: 05/01/06 14:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow this really good and funny

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad u like the story.

Reviewer: xpenguin_freakx
Date: 05/01/06 11:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

I like this idea very much. It may not be completely original, but you've made it your own.
The only thing I can see that could use a bit of improving would be the jumping around. A few parts just don't flow together, and it gets a bit confusing at some points.
Other than that, well done!

Author's Response: Well, I write stories over at fanfiction.net and there wasn't really any stories of where the Marauders turned into girls, so I decided to write one. Then I came to see if MNFF would accept the story and they did. I'll try to make it flow and sound less confusing. Thanks for the review.

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