I loved it! I think Merope is an interesting character that doesn't get much credit and rarely shows up in fan fiction. Your writing is amazing as well. It's captivating and flows like all stories should. Great job! :D
I'm in awe of you. It's so powerful, the way you capture Merope's fear of the dark, and for her baby's future. Absolutely amazing.
That's it, you're going on the favorites list. No questions, no arguments now, you write wonderfully harsh and beautiful, and you need to write more. 'Nuff said.
Really original story; Merope Riddle is not a usual fanfic subject. I love the last line.
I really like this story. I know what's going to happen but I still couldn't turn away. I really like the ending too. Her thoughts were perfect for a woman in her situation and you did a nice job of really getting across the hopelessness of her situation. Good job!
I really like what you've done with Merope. Even though we don't see much of her, you've done an acurate job portraying her last moments. Her thoughts are very realistic for a woman in her situation, the lack of a will to live, the reminiscing on an earlier life, and her thoughts about her baby. As for your style, I think it's good; All in all, good job and good luck for the future.
Very well written, and very engrossing (even though I knew what was going to happen in the end).