Reviews For Beautiful Mess
Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 11/02/06 0:40
Chapter: Beautiful Mess

Aww... I was attracted to the title here, I must begin by telling you, because I've prayed a "please bless this mess" about many relationships that were just not meant to be - you know how guys can never take hints and all - but anyhow, I'm ranting, and I need to review, but you reminded me of that, and that was awfully nice of you.

So. Back to our point, then... This was beautiful. You captured Ginny's every move, every feeling so wonderfully - she was so vivid in my mind that I can still hardly believe it. I like the recurring lines - they really give oomph to the poem. You drew everything over the years together, and that... Well, the whole thing was a masterpiece. Great work! Bravissima!

~Juliet

Author's Response: Juliet, thanks again for these reviews that you've left me lately. I enjoy reading every one and they brighten my day. I totally agree with you on the guy part there, hun, I'm honored that you found the poem so great. Thanks again!

Reviewer: HunnieBuns88
Date: 09/19/06 23:46
Chapter: Beautiful Mess

Hah! Sorry about that last review =] I was being weird... Anyways, I really meant what i said, it was really beautiful. you showed and captured how Ginny felt in such an amazing way!

I'm really inspired now... =]

i.l.y. Emma G

Author's Response: Lol, that's okay! *hugs* I'm glad you liked and it and it's great that it inspired you! =)

Reviewer: HunnieBuns88
Date: 09/19/06 23:43
Chapter: Beautiful Mess

Anna =]

2 Words.... That was beautiful!...

Wait... Thats 3.....

Author's Response: Aww, thanks love!

Reviewer: FeatherTrader
Date: 06/13/06 21:05
Chapter: Beautiful Mess

I love the use of repetetion and how you portrayed Ginny's feelings. It was very...deep? I also like how the 'when I first saw you' contradicts the 'when I last saw you' it shows the changes Ginny has noticed and how Harry has changed since she met him.

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review! It made me grin! =)

Reviewer: FeatherTrader
Date: 06/13/06 21:04
Chapter: Beautiful Mess

I love the use of repetetion and how you portrayed Ginny's feelings. It was very...deep? I also like how the 'when I first saw you' contradicts the 'when I last saw you' it shows the changes Ginny has noticed and how Harry has changed since she met him.

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: hufflepuffgal
Date: 05/28/06 14:08
Chapter: Beautiful Mess

*tear, tear*, *sob* very heartfelt.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: comewhatmay
Date: 05/20/06 22:23
Chapter: Beautiful Mess

*tear* how sweet :)

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I really appreciate the input! ;)

Reviewer: littleWoNdErFuL
Date: 05/07/06 20:45
Chapter: Beautiful Mess

*sighs* I hope this works, sorry if there's a double review from me, but I found an error in my last review, then deleted it so that I could submit a new one, but found it was still there, so I'm just submitting another. So here's what I have to say about your lovely poem: I really like it a lot! You conveyed how Ginny actually felt after Harry broke up with her exactly how I thought she felt! Awesome job!

Author's Response: Thanks Rachel! I'm flattered that you like it. Thanks so much for your kind review! *gives cookie*

Reviewer: littleWoNdErFuL
Date: 05/07/06 20:42
Chapter: Beautiful Mess

I love it! The end rounds up exactly how I thought actually fealt when Harry broke up with her! Great work!

Author's Response: Thanks, dear!

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 05/01/06 10:20
Chapter: Beautiful Mess

Hello Periwinkle! I was first of all drawn in by the excellent banner for the poem on MNFF forums- whoever made it deserves upmost praise!

I liked this poem very much. It has some lovely words in it (e.g. lustrous, obsidian, abyssal etc.) which I think make it work and also make it more poetic.

Although I am normally all for poems that rhyme, I think that this one works quite well without the rhymes. They are almost substitued by the way you repeat the question of 'why did you leave' at the end of every verse.

I'm not 100% sure who the poem is actually about but I'm shadowing a guess at either Harry + Ginny or Harry + Hermione (well it didn't take a genius to work it out- your eyes had lost their green sparkle hehe)

I think the way that the reader is left guessing is also instrumental to the success of the poem; it leaves a nice sense of mystery to the words.

All in All a nice solid piece and well written poem. Good Job!


Author's Response: Thank you very much for your kind review!! It is a Harry/Ginny from Ginny's perspective. I am very flattered and glad that you enjoyed it. You really made my day! And Foxy Wolf made the most wonderful banner. Thanks again!

Reviewer: chislarina
Date: 04/29/06 23:56
Chapter: Beautiful Mess

hmmm ive enjoyed it

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: sinktheships
Date: 04/28/06 14:54
Chapter: Beautiful Mess

Wowzers. That was really good. It got me reading it right at the beginning. Its got a great title too! I loved that!

Author's Response: Thank you, Trishe. I'm very flattered! :D I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm going to have a fic banner for it very soon. Thanks, dear!

Reviewer: Lilypudding
Date: 04/27/06 20:05
Chapter: Beautiful Mess

This is a very good angsty romantic poem. I must say, I really enjoyed reading it. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! You just made my day. I'm very glad you did. ;)

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