Reviewer: hpfreak519
Date: 05/09/06 16:35
Chapter: I'll call you on the fellytone

awww so cute and so suspenseful :) I luved it. wow, this story really made my day :-D

Author's Response: wow...MY story MADE your day??? gee, i'm glad it did!! thaks for the review! =)

Reviewer: Alexys_Nicole
Date: 05/08/06 23:50
Chapter: I'll call you on the fellytone

How sweet. That was good.

Author's Response: thank you! =)

Reviewer: charles2180
Date: 05/08/06 19:50
Chapter: I'll call you on the fellytone

I really enjoyed that story. Good pacing, characters stayed pretty true to themselves. Spelling however was off for one word consistently. You use the wrong "to". A couple of times it should be "too" as in "also". But that's just nitpicking. Keep up the good work. (And it wasn't really fluffy, just [I hate this word...] cute.)

Author's Response: i'm glad you enjoyed it! thanks 4 telling me about the spelling stuff, i'll work on that. thanks for reviewing!! =) (why don't you like the word cute?)

Reviewer: charles2180
Date: 05/08/06 19:50
Chapter: I'll call you on the fellytone

I really enjoyed that story. Good pacing, characters stayed pretty true to themselves. Spelling however was off for one word consistently. You use the wrong "to". A couple of times it should be "too" as in "also". But that's just nitpicking. Keep up the good work. (And it wasn't really fluffy, just [I hate this word...] cute.)

Reviewer: mudblood48
Date: 05/07/06 7:46
Chapter: I'll call you on the fellytone

this is a great fan fiction and it truly relates to the books

Author's Response: thanks! =)

Reviewer: Fly to Dawn
Date: 05/07/06 0:54
Chapter: I'll call you on the fellytone

Adorable. In one place you put 'Barley' instead of 'Barely', but overall it was fantastic!
I liked how Ron and Hermione were nervous, I could see them talking to each other like that. Harry was a tiny bit OOC, as I'm wondering if he would push the two together. (Remember what happened in the Greenhouse, HBP)
A lovely story. Good job!

Author's Response: yeah, i guess harry was quite...not himself.. ^_^ (maybe he was sick or something?? hehe) but thanks so much 4 the review!! =) *and thanks for telling me about the 'barley' thing...* =)

Reviewer: Magdalene Rose
Date: 05/06/06 22:03
Chapter: I'll call you on the fellytone

I absolutly love your story!!!!!! 10/10!!

Author's Response: thanks!! i'm glad you liked it! =)

Reviewer: fairlywitchy
Date: 05/06/06 21:05
Chapter: I'll call you on the fellytone

first real paragraph that has the description of why the boys are at ron's house needs work. Rest reads well.

Author's Response: thanks 4 the review! =)

Reviewer: maria_taglioni
Date: 05/06/06 20:20
Chapter: I'll call you on the fellytone

They were so real... very good story, good touch of humor and I loved the end.

Author's Response: i'm glad you liked the end. i intended to end my story with a striking/catchy line... =) tnx 4 reviewing =)

Reviewer: Ave
Date: 05/06/06 19:02
Chapter: I'll call you on the fellytone

I thought it was kind of funny how Ron was so nervous to talk to Hermione on the fellytone.

Author's Response: yeah it is funny...and cute =) hihi... thanks for the review! =)

Reviewer: plugcollector26
Date: 05/06/06 18:37
Chapter: I'll call you on the fellytone

sounded good to me!

Author's Response: thanks! i'm glad you liked it =)

Reviewer: WannaBeMrsRonWeasly
Date: 05/06/06 18:13
Chapter: I'll call you on the fellytone

There is absolutly no reason to not like this story, it's great.

Author's Response: hey you're back! hehe...thanks =)

Reviewer: WannaBeMrsRonWeasly
Date: 05/06/06 18:12
Chapter: I'll call you on the fellytone

There is absolutly no reason to not like this story, it's great.

Author's Response: *blushes* thanks!! =)

Reviewer: notabanana
Date: 05/06/06 17:52
Chapter: I'll call you on the fellytone

Ron was very Ronish and Hermione was very Hermioneish but Harry wasn't very Harryish. Harry tries to avoid any potential Ron/Hermione conflict. Well, thats how I always saw him. The story was cute, though. It made me smile, and wasn't too overdone.

Author's Response: yeah,even i myself think that harry wasn't that harryish...let's just say that he...uh... wasn't himself at the time... (hehe) anyway, thanks so much for the review!! =)

Reviewer: SAMANTHAKITTY
Date: 05/06/06 16:04
Chapter: I'll call you on the fellytone

SO,THAT WAS A FIRST EFFORT? I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS AS YOU GO!

Author's Response: gee, thanks so much for the review! =)

Reviewer: hpgirlbizarre
Date: 05/06/06 15:20
Chapter: I'll call you on the fellytone

it was a great story but u should add more chapters to see wat happens if ron tels hermione or hermione makes the first move it would be a great conclusion. Great First Story though!

Author's Response: i'm glad you think it's great...thanks =)

Reviewer: The_Wright_Girl
Date: 05/06/06 15:14
Chapter: I'll call you on the fellytone

How cute! I'm all for the romance!


Author's Response: yeah...me too! =)

Reviewer: Khrys
Date: 05/06/06 15:12
Chapter: I'll call you on the fellytone

Good start!

Author's Response: thanks!! =)

Reviewer: HermioneHair
Date: 05/06/06 15:02
Chapter: I'll call you on the fellytone

Very, very good. It's very much what I imagine JKR could be writing at this very moment. They're so polite to each other each time they get closer than simply being friends and you captured that stage perfectly!! Keep on writing and UPDATE ASAP!!! XXXXXXX

Author's Response: gee, thanks so much for the review!! =)

Reviewer: True Blonde7
Date: 05/06/06 14:37
Chapter: I'll call you on the fellytone

This was an excellent story except for one thing, it had too many silences in the conversation. I know they feel awkward, but i just feel like it`s too many pauses. Anyways, luved your ending, it flowed nicely!

Author's Response: i guess i like ron/hermy awkward silences...i think it's cute (hihi) but thank you so much for the review! i'm glad you like my story!! =)

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