Reviewer: Xriak
Date: 12/28/05 7:28
Chapter: When the World Was Not Right

Great story, great ending! leaves a lot of space for imagination...that's cool...Anyways, keep up the writing, you're good at it! :))

Reviewer: HeartSinger
Date: 01/20/05 14:16
Chapter: The Final Entry

Congrats on completing the story. You found an interesting concept to explore.

Reviewer: kerzza
Date: 01/04/05 15:04
Chapter: The Final Entry

As good or even better than the first. That says it all

Author's Response: thanx a lot! i didn't really think this one is good, but ur review has lifted my spirits on that subject.

Reviewer: hp4life
Date: 12/21/04 0:22
Chapter: Someone to Share With

posting 4 chapter

Reviewer: beautifulstag
Date: 12/20/04 11:44
Chapter: Someone to Share With

omg, don't stop there, update update update:)

Reviewer: beautifulstag
Date: 12/20/04 11:42
Chapter: Someone to Share With

pfc

Author's Response: wut does pfc mean?

Reviewer: HeartSinger
Date: 12/17/04 20:11
Chapter: Alone With My Feelings

Nicely done -- I'm looking forward to seeing more of it!

Reviewer: Dracoluver
Date: 12/15/04 20:42
Chapter: Alone With My Feelings

by the way......she wirte poetrry cuz!!! ya no what i'm sayin sista??? i like poetry......yas think u is gonna wright potry cuz?? what would u says if i's makes a songfic on a 50 cent song?? lol

Author's Response: im a bit confused, but its all good, thanx for the reviews!

Reviewer: Dracoluver
Date: 12/15/04 20:38
Chapter: Alone With My Feelings

I don' no if u wanna no but i read her stories(her=Makenna Prongs) and she aint bad cuz/ Ya no what I'm sayin'? that's alot comein from me man....she and u is good writas yo.........

Reviewer: Dracoluver
Date: 12/15/04 20:35
Chapter: Alone With My Feelings

I don't no if u wanna no but i wear the same t-shirt every day......it says "I love white boyz" on it.......(aka)...Tom Felton.....I don' like black boyz tho....don' u dare tell the other sistas in the hood tho......like my bling-bling??? Nah......j/k====10

Reviewer: Dracoluver
Date: 12/15/04 20:31
Chapter: Alone With My Feelings

yeah.....i's likes it.....nah just playin cuz......write more

Reviewer: Dracoluver
Date: 12/15/04 20:30
Chapter: Two Important Discoveries

His diary is cool.....when is you gonna have that....um....um.....4th chap up man?

Reviewer: Dracoluver
Date: 12/15/04 20:28
Chapter: When the World Was Not Right

it's me again......sry again 4 the simple plan one......(by the way,where'd it go?)....I can't write for shit so i shouldn't even be talkin sry........oh yeah this is good

Author's Response: i deleted it.....i totally accept ur apology and thanx for allllll the good reviews!

Reviewer: Makenna Prongs
Date: 12/15/04 20:24
Chapter: Alone With My Feelings

I like this story-please write more.....that is all-good story=10

Reviewer: witchwithaB
Date: 12/07/04 19:48
Chapter: When the World Was Not Right

AAAahh I can't wait for the next chapter! Write it or I will come after you! Wonderful job! I love sirius!

Author's Response: thanx a ton...the next chapter should be up soon!

Reviewer: Sad4Sirius
Date: 12/05/04 19:30
Chapter: When the World Was Not Right

ok i sont really get it but im sure that i will later on in the story.... what i understood was good so update soon

Author's Response: thanx...to understand more, i suggest u read "Is This How Its Supposed to Be?"

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