Great story, great ending! leaves a lot of space for imagination...that's cool...Anyways, keep up the writing, you're good at it! :))
Congrats on completing the story. You found an interesting concept to explore.
As good or even better than the first. That says it all
Author's Response: thanx a lot! i didn't really think this one is good, but ur review has lifted my spirits on that subject.
posting 4 chapter
omg, don't stop there, update update update:)
Author's Response: wut does pfc mean?
Nicely done -- I'm looking forward to seeing more of it!
by the way......she wirte poetrry cuz!!! ya no what i'm sayin sista??? i like poetry......yas think u is gonna wright potry cuz?? what would u says if i's makes a songfic on a 50 cent song?? lol
Author's Response: im a bit confused, but its all good, thanx for the reviews!
I don' no if u wanna no but i read her stories(her=Makenna Prongs) and she aint bad cuz/ Ya no what I'm sayin'? that's alot comein from me man....she and u is good writas yo.........
I don't no if u wanna no but i wear the same t-shirt every day......it says "I love white boyz" on it.......(aka)...Tom Felton.....I don' like black boyz tho....don' u dare tell the other sistas in the hood tho......like my bling-bling??? Nah......j/k====10
yeah.....i's likes it.....nah just playin cuz......write more
His diary is cool.....when is you gonna have that....um....um.....4th chap up man?
it's me again......sry again 4 the simple plan one......(by the way,where'd it go?)....I can't write for shit so i shouldn't even be talkin sry........oh yeah this is good
Author's Response: i deleted it.....i totally accept ur apology and thanx for allllll the good reviews!
I like this story-please write more.....that is all-good story=10
AAAahh I can't wait for the next chapter! Write it or I will come after you! Wonderful job! I love sirius!
Author's Response: thanx a ton...the next chapter should be up soon!
ok i sont really get it but im sure that i will later on in the story.... what i understood was good so update soon
Author's Response: thanx...to understand more, i suggest u read "Is This How Its Supposed to Be?"