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Reviewer: ginny96
Date: 06/25/12 9:23
Chapter: Chapter 1

its really well written. i really like it. :)

Reviewer: lilyfan
Date: 08/26/10 17:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

cute story.

Reviewer: lilyfan
Date: 08/26/10 17:41
Chapter: Chapter 1

cute story.

Reviewer: Lana Moonland
Date: 08/04/07 15:34
Chapter: Chapter 1

i looove it! for once a fic that doesn't portray lily as an alien! she isn't a cold-hearted bitch that all of a sudden decides that her nemesis is the love of her life. thank you for that one!

Reviewer: Aura_light
Date: 07/17/07 10:06
Chapter: Chapter 1

good job!!! loved the experiment part... keep it up.

Reviewer: flushTHEtoiletx3
Date: 01/28/07 21:22
Chapter: Chapter 1

wonderful!!!!!!!!!!

i love the last sentence especially. As an...experiment

haha that was priceless

Reviewer: pheonixflame
Date: 09/28/06 21:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

hehe wow that's great. Never thought about it like that. Keep writing :)

Reviewer: pheonixflame
Date: 09/28/06 21:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

hehe wow that's great. Never thought about it like that. Keep writing :)

Reviewer: sirius_rox
Date: 09/19/06 20:05
Chapter: Chapter 1

very good.. i really enjoyed it.. u made james chaser!!! finally someone gets it right.. so many ppl mess that up!!!

Reviewer: Lilypudding
Date: 08/23/06 20:44
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is a wonderful story, You kept Lily in perfect character the entire story, a skill that very authors possess and I greatly admire. Furthermore, Lily's murmerings to herself and insightful comments were funny and a pleasure to read. The only thing I would suggest for this fic is to involve Lily's friends-- remember, Lily always had a lot of her friends around her and was very popular. Besides that, this fic is absolutely perfect and I really enjoyed it! Great job!

Reviewer: goobersam9
Date: 07/06/06 17:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

Great!

Reviewer: sarcastic hp lover
Date: 05/30/06 16:39
Chapter: Chapter 1

Leave it to Quidditch to bring out the best in people. nice story.

Reviewer: maria_taglioni
Date: 05/26/06 22:43
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awww... great one shot and a different way to show Lily's change of atittude towards James. Loved it!

Reviewer: maria_taglioni
Date: 05/26/06 22:43
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awww... great one shot and a different way to show Lily's change of atittude towards James. Loved it!

Reviewer: HeRmYgInS
Date: 05/22/06 15:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was great! Loved it.

Reviewer: NoteToSelf
Date: 05/04/06 19:27
Chapter: Chapter 1

your first chapter is really good; you should keep writing more! job well done :p

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I don't currently have any plans to expand upon this particular story, but perhaps something will occur to me, I definately haven't ruled the possibility out! :)

Reviewer: hp_princess
Date: 05/01/06 21:50
Chapter: Chapter 1

I really liked this. You do a great job capturing Lily's emotions and her feelings towwards James. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks! I worked really hard to try to make everything seem as genuine as possible; I'm glad you liked it! :)

Reviewer: WannaBeMrsRonWeasly
Date: 05/01/06 17:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is such a great story, you are a very good writer. I hope to read more of your stories soon.

Author's Response: Thank you! :) I've got a few ideas forming in my mind, hopefully they'll look good on paper *lol*

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