Reviews For Joy from Sorrow
Reviewer: FaunaCaritas
Date: 06/23/06 4:43
Chapter: Joy from Sorrow

A suggestion... don't ryme 'life' and 'lowlife', it's repetative. Also, you use the phrase 'once again' twice in the third part. But bonos puntos for the difficult format! Pax.

Reviewer: HermyRox12
Date: 05/06/06 16:30
Chapter: Joy from Sorrow

Ah, that was sweet. Sad, but sweet. Since Ginny is a Weasley, wouldn't the baby have red hair? Green eyes from Harry, red hair from Ginny? It's not that big, I just sort of like that tradition. I like it.

Reviewer: hirere
Date: 04/26/06 13:41
Chapter: Joy from Sorrow

I loved this short thing,i dont know what to call it,id like to see more especially in a long story :)

Reviewer: ProfPosky
Date: 04/26/06 9:09
Chapter: Joy from Sorrow

My favortie lin here is "What was lost was recovered once again."
Do my eyes deceive me, or is this almost a sonnet? Have you tried it without the isolated line to see how you like it? I've always loved the sonnet form myself, but have never succeedes in writing one...Hmmm, maybe I should try again...Thanks for the inspiration to attempt a difficult format!

Author's Response: Yes. Its a Petrarchian sonnet. I studied it at school, and decided to give it a try. I am so glad you liked it.

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