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Reviews For Heart's Betrayal

Name: Cruciatus Love (Signed) · Date: 04/26/06 20:56 · For: Heart's Betrayal
Ooh, Trishelle, nice one.

The beginning of it was a tad bit slow and could use a sort of hook, but once you start to read it the end was great!

I really loved the way you characterized Ryalda! And the use of the locket was good too, nice job!

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