Reviews For Creating a Ghost
Reviewer: dragonfoot
Date: 06/25/11 21:55
Chapter: Epilogue

what happened?where'd she go? is she alive?

Author's Response: Hey there Dragonfoot, Creating a Ghost is the first in a trilogy. You'll have to read on. Life in the Interim is next, then Life in the Shadows (then a couple of one-shots). The next ones , however, are considerably longer. And, Once Upon A Time is the prequel to all of it. Good luck. Let me know what you think. As you can see, even though they're older, I still reply. Dani

Reviewer: dragonfoot
Date: 06/25/11 21:42
Chapter: Chapt 10 - Lessons Taught

sounds a bit scottish at the end, but very cool

Reviewer: dragonfoot
Date: 06/25/11 21:28
Chapter: Chapt 8 - Life Goes On

confusing, confusing, confusing :)

Reviewer: dragonfoot
Date: 06/25/11 21:20
Chapter: Chapt 7 - Special Events

is she dating Snape or Remus?

Reviewer: dragonfoot
Date: 06/25/11 21:14
Chapter: Chapt 6 - Friends and Other Creatures

Cooperating and socailizing... sounds complicated

Reviewer: dragonfoot
Date: 06/25/11 21:06
Chapter: Chapt 5 - Roommates

how come she didn't use her hands?

Reviewer: dragonfoot
Date: 06/25/11 20:59
Chapter: Chapt 4 - School Days

Epic!

Reviewer: dragonfoot
Date: 06/25/11 20:54
Chapter: Chapt 3 - Getting To Know You

Weird!

Reviewer: dragonfoot
Date: 06/25/11 20:48
Chapter: Chapt 2 - Things I Must Know

this is so weird! Cool, but weird!

Reviewer: dragonfoot
Date: 06/25/11 20:43
Chapter: And So It Begins...

DUMBLEDORE'S A GRANDFATHER?!

Reviewer: dragonfoot
Date: 06/25/11 20:43
Chapter: And So It Begins...

DUMBLEDORE'S A GRANDFATHER?!

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/30/10 10:57
Chapter: Epilogue

That was so heart wrenching. Such powerful women brought down. Such a waste. I'm kind of stunned. I'm guessing it was Severus who came to get Alicia, but too late. I don't blame Elizabett for saying what she said to Albus. Great story. Sad at the end though. Wait a minute--I just reread the last section. She didn't die did she--she left by portkey?? I guess I'll find out in the next installment.

Author's Response: Tee he hee about the portkey. Dani

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/30/10 10:18
Chapter: Chapt 11- Last Days

That was so sad. On the one hand, Alicia was going back to Italy--to the warmth and good food. On the other hand, she was leaving her first love and was being totally manipulated again--prepared for her grandfather's battle. All I could think was thank goodness I've been able to make my own decisions from an early age. I haven't always made the right ones but they were my own to make. I'm glad Alicia found out that Remus was a werewolf. She didn't think any less of him for it. I think I liked the Marauders because JKR wrote them up to be heroes but when you actually think about it they really did have their issues. James Potter wasn't perfect--he was murdered for the cause and he was Harry's father. Sirius was a lady's man and was very confused after how he'd been raised. Peter was a despicable traitor. Remus was bright but had such low self-esteem that I think that got in the way of many things. Anyway, those are my thoughts. One more chapter and this story is done. This chapter was great, by the way.

Author's Response: I cuold feel her pain at not finding Severus, and it's good that she and Remeus "made up" this will help in the future. Dani

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/29/10 14:43
Chapter: Chapt 10 - Lessons Taught

That was totally cool--how Alicia rescued Severus. I love the Marauders and I know three of the four were heroes but let's face it, they were also big bullies. Maybe if Severus hadn't been bullied so bad he wouldn't have turned to Voldemort. He was entranced by the brotherhood and the power--much like someone joining a gang. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Interestingly enough, I never liked the Marauders. I saw them as bullies. I know what you mean about turning to Voldemort as a feeling of brotherhood. My heart goes out to Severus. sigh... Dani

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/29/10 13:04
Chapter: Chapt 9 - Lessons Learned

I'm sure Remus doesn't see it this way but he shouldn't be disappointed in seeing Alicia kiss Severus. Remus hasn't really made any moves on Alicia and Severus is about as slow a romantic as I don't know what--Remus has had plenty of time to do something. I know he can't just pop out and say that he's a werewolf but it seems he could do a little more in the dating department. The thought that Alicia will be her grandfather's secret weapon against Voldemort is disturbing. If you go back to your other story it seems like Alicia was manufactured for this purpose. Grandpa is still being very manipulative. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Remus, ah, Remus. So quiet. so shy. so awkward. He shows up in later stories. As for Albus, hmmm, Alicia "manufactured for this purpose"? You think? I certainly wouldn't put it past him. manipulative %#&&*% Dani

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/29/10 12:47
Chapter: Chapt 8 - Life Goes On

I can imagine Alicia's disappointment in not being able to go to Italy for Easter. It has to be much warmer than Scotland. Alicia really does need to learn to control what she does with her thoughts. What possessed her to buy a Sour Puss for Severus and tell him it reminded her of him:D The notebook was perfect though. Great chapter.

Author's Response: At this point in time, Alicis is only 15. Her control will come. As for the Sour Puss, as a teen, it was one of those "learning" experiences. ooppsss. It shows that she's not entirely social smooth. Awkward... Dani

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/29/10 12:34
Chapter: Chapt 7 - Special Events

I think Alicia's one of the first people I've seen who can handle Sirius and she's not even trying:D I loved your description of her worship in the beginning. I was impressed that Severus was respectful and knew what was going on. I'm glad he went to the dance. Great chapter.

Author's Response: I did a whole lot of research for these stories, so the information is real and accurate.Glad you liked the ritual. I wonder what Severus' real motivation was to go to the dance? Dani

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/21/10 14:12
Chapter: Chapt 6 - Friends and Other Creatures

I'll bet Alicia can "see" what Snape's been through. I was a little surprised that Slughorn didn't know who Alicia was, although they have been trying to keep her identity secret. I guess there's only so much Slughorn would want to share with a 15 year old girl too--about her grandmother and grandfather. Great chapter.

Author's Response: I thought about adding Slughorn into the mix, but I didn't want to take too much away from the original story. He does have a reoccurring role, however. I may try to slip something in later. Dani

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/21/10 13:47
Chapter: Chapt 5 - Roommates

I like to read on this site because I can get into it at work so I read in between things when I have time. It's nice when you respond however you want to. Remus sounds like the right kind of guy for Alicia, but isn't he the right kind of guy for most women? I must admit that I'd probably be entranced by Snape if those characters actually lived. He's kind of the intelligent, broody, bad boy who's mysterious that I go for:D Great chapter.

Author's Response: Oooo Severus... He's my kinda guy... Dani

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/21/10 12:20
Chapter: Chapt 4 - School Days

Alicia must have inherited her mother's talent and power. Either that or she's doing the uncontrolled magic that young children do. This seems to be more powerful magic though--she just doesn't seem to know she can do it. There also seems to be a connection to Snape. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Yes, she inheritted her mother and grandmother's magic, but it's stronger. You'll find out just how strong later in the stories. As for Snape...ooo la la... Dani

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