Reviews For My Father's Face
Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 03/21/07 19:46
Chapter: My Father's Face

Different. But interesting, definitely interesting. As an all-out L/H shipper, I can see how this makes sense with Harry's character - Luna is the only one who ever saw him for what he really is. I don't think Hermione and Ron would ever turn on Harry like that, though. Still, this was a good read, well-written. I liked the ending. And it definitely made me think!

Reviewer: HJPCATI
Date: 02/04/07 20:27
Chapter: My Father's Face

The writing is okay but this is not Harry at all.

Reviewer: honey_dukes_lolipop
Date: 11/30/06 12:33
Chapter: My Father's Face

omg this is so totaly not like harry...but it was very good, dramatic and i liked it it touched me....*weep*

Reviewer: stormy_lovegood
Date: 10/20/06 19:19
Chapter: My Father's Face

I loved it, except for how you put Hary's feelings for others. I love most Lunarry stories, but this one bugs me, becasue Harry simply does NOT think that way about his friends, family, or any of the people you put down. Sorry. I can't rate this, or I might get flamed.

Reviewer: stormy_lovegood
Date: 10/20/06 19:18
Chapter: My Father's Face

I loved it, except for how you put Hary's feelings for others. I love most Lunarry stories, but this one bugs me, becasue Harry simply does NOT think that way about his friends, family, or any of the people you put down. Sorry. I can't rate this, or I might get flamed.

Reviewer: confidentialroze
Date: 08/23/06 11:39
Chapter: My Father's Face

this story is very... touching. it has it's sad moments, and it's serious moments, even it's funny moments! it's perfect in every single way, there most likley won't be a story like that in a long time... 189% pure prefection ~roze

Reviewer: confidentialroze
Date: 08/23/06 11:35
Chapter: My Father's Face

this story is very... touching. it has it's sad moments, and it's serious moments, even it's funny moments! it's perfect in every single way, there most likley won't be a story like that in a long time... 189% pure prefection ~roze

Reviewer: ronnyc718
Date: 07/28/06 12:46
Chapter: My Father's Face

This so well-written. Even though I don't think the characters would act that way (Ron and Hermione - grrr!!!), I didn't think it was OOC. It basically showed the downsides of their personalities. Ron really was jealous of Harry sometimes (cough4thbookcough) and Hermione really put too much stock in rules sometimes. I really like your exploration of the dark what-ifs.

Oh, by the way, my favorite part is when Harry talks about fighting their own wars - beautiful!

Reviewer: joyheart
Date: 07/19/06 0:38
Chapter: My Father's Face

wow that was so beautiful i think i'm crying a little. u r a talented writer.

Reviewer: ValorOrgulloso
Date: 07/12/06 20:16
Chapter: My Father's Face

That is making me get all teary! I love this story! *adds to favorites*

Reviewer: stormy_lovegood
Date: 07/05/06 21:33
Chapter: My Father's Face

I kind of liked it... but wasn't it kind of... OC? Harry loves his father, Dumbledore ,and Hermione and ron DO see Harry for what he really is... and, as much as I hate to admit it, so does Ginny. Snape is a git, but Harry himself said that he never thought Snape would do that. I think you kind of twisted the story. It's not the best, but like you aid, I'll have to settle for good enough.

6/10-7/10.

Reviewer: xpoisonx
Date: 06/17/06 11:32
Chapter: My Father's Face

Wow! dude amaizingly awsome!! I never really saw it that way.

Reviewer: abbycadabra
Date: 05/20/06 10:11
Chapter: My Father's Face

Very good! Great writing, good story. Maybe a sequel? I hope so - it keeps me wondering. Great job!

Reviewer: brokenhearted
Date: 05/09/06 15:55
Chapter: My Father's Face

Interesting... I liked it. I mean, they didn't get together, but it made sense. Nice. Well thought out.

Reviewer: HermyRox12
Date: 05/06/06 10:50
Chapter: My Father's Face

This was a bit sad. I like it, though. Where you wrote, "them you are a fool." when he was talking about Ron and Hermione, I think you meant Then, not Them. Just letting you know. Very goo, though.
HermyRox12

Reviewer: KnuckleHead6270
Date: 05/01/06 16:08
Chapter: My Father's Face

Amazing... that's all I have to say...
Amazing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy my other stories once the are validated.

Reviewer: Felix Felicis 101
Date: 04/27/06 19:34
Chapter: My Father's Face

If I had the power, and HP wasn't copyrighted, I'd put on an airplane to go see Random House, or Scholastic, or Tor, or whoever the hell you wanted to publish your story.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! That's so nice! Thank you so much for reading my story. :)

Reviewer: Lily_James_luvinSirius
Date: 04/26/06 17:22
Chapter: My Father's Face

omg *furiosly wipes tears from eyes*
that was bloody brilliant!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you took the time to read my story! :)

Reviewer: Mortmagic
Date: 04/25/06 7:30
Chapter: My Father's Face

Very good, love the bit about chocolate,good advice.

Author's Response: Thanks, I got the idea from Lupin, in PoA. Thanks for taking the time to read my story! :)

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