This is a wonderful ficiton, paticularly for a first one. To be honest, at first I did not like the way it was in first person, but it grew on me. Writing this in first person gave good insight into how Harry was feeling and thinking. I can't wait to see more fan fics from you. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review, originally I was going to do it from a third-person type POV but it wasn't allowed, this was the next best thing and I think it turned out well.
Hey that is fantastic. I have just that to say nothing more.....
Author's Response: Thanks for the reveiw! You don't have to say anything more as long as you liked it!
I am glad that you had Harry visit the Hollow by himself and not propped up with the other characters. When I read the books, this is exactly how I imagine HP. Even though he has his friends who he shares almost everything with, he is also a solitary figure, one who could very easily brood about the sucky deal he has received, but solid in his determination to carry through.
Author's Response: Thanks for the reveiw, I also pictured it this way because Harry can get emotional, and I believe he realises that. I also think (as I said in the story) that he might've wanted Ginny with him, for support, but most likely he would go on his own.