Reviewer: Samuri Rose
Date: 09/25/06 11:27
Chapter: Chapter 1

Love this!
I don't ususally read poems but this one was well worth it!
Samuri Rose xxx

Author's Response: Aww, thank you sweetie! XD

Reviewer: Lilypudding
Date: 04/28/06 15:23
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is a really amazing poem! It was a great idea, and you went through with it well. Congradulations on participating in challenge one, I noticed few entries in this one. I'm not sure if it entirely applies to "Apathy is lethal" but it is a good work of poetry. Fear is portrayed nicely in Draco's eyes in his compelling narrative which is your great poem. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you! That's the part that I was most concerned about -the Apathy is Lethal part. Basically, Draco realizes that at the last minute, being a Death Eater is not for him, and suffers the consequences. Thank you for reviewing this poem also. I was very pleased to see your review.

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