Reviews For Moonlight
Reviewer: purplepanther
Date: 09/20/06 19:10
Chapter: Moonlight

I loved it- great writing!

Reviewer: MaraudersAffair
Date: 04/30/06 15:52
Chapter: Moonlight

Oh.My.God.

I must say that this is the best piece of work I've read on this site. It's amazing and Lupin's anguish over Lily is brilliantly perfect. I have just been inspired.

Great work!

Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina
Date: 04/22/06 16:58
Chapter: Moonlight

The first part is great! The second part is a little confusing, but let me talk about the first part for a bit before I get into that.

I loved the Remus/Lily goodness. I wish there could have been a little more of it - it seemed like after he lost himself in thoughts of her he forgot about it. Which is okay; the whole beginning is obviously his random thoughts and musings.

I like the Marauder's Map little meme too. It's when we get to James' letter that I got a little confused . . .

The letter itself is fine, besides the fact that I'm not sure why it was written in the first place, but the whole Remus/Sirius fight just seems a little ... odd. I didn't understand who was accusing whom at first. Also, it seems a little unlike Sirius to be so quick to suspect Remus.

And the rest ... is history.

I love how you set this up. Nostalgia, confusion ... the emotions Remus is feeling are very well represented. When I clicked on this story it was marked incomplete - I think that it could work as a one-shot, but if you've got more coming that's okay too.

It's still worthy of being published on MNFF. Don't be silly. Have a nice day! *D*

Reviewer: I_Luv_Draco4ever
Date: 04/22/06 16:44
Chapter: Moonlight

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