Reviews For More Than a Memory
Reviewer: Helena Valentine
Date: 05/08/06 17:54
Chapter: More Than a Memory

This was really good. I love how your were able to write it like it was actually somthing that would happen in the Harry Potter world, and not just a colection of romance that's really never going to happen. It seemed so real, i mean it really sounded just like the Harry Potter series!!! Jo would be proud ^_^

Reviewer: chislarina
Date: 05/02/06 3:52
Chapter: More Than a Memory

hmm, its a bit odd. it is ok though.
write more stories, i'll read them.

Reviewer: Rider_Jr
Date: 05/01/06 16:50
Chapter: More Than a Memory

Sad. But good

Reviewer: PadfootBaby
Date: 05/01/06 9:49
Chapter: More Than a Memory

This was really good! The only thing I would change is that you mentioned Dumbledore's "moving eulogy", but you didn't include any of it? You could have really made readers cry if you'd done that, ;) But other than that it was perfect, I especially liked the bit of irony at the end, Harry's stuffed animal being a stag. I wonder how many people will catch that? Great job!!!

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