hmm, its a bit odd. it is ok though.
write more stories, i'll read them.

This was really good! The only thing I would change is that you mentioned Dumbledore's "moving eulogy", but you didn't include any of it? You could have really made readers cry if you'd done that, ;) But other than that it was perfect, I especially liked the bit of irony at the end, Harry's stuffed animal being a stag. I wonder how many people will catch that? Great job!!!