W O W
thats all im going to say.... not really :)
its so well written. ive read a few fics in my time...okay alot, but this is up there with the best. i love the structer the language and the plot line. its almost as good as JK.
I'ts a very very cute story and I love it!
That was fucking amazing.
this is like seriously one of my fave fan fics of all time!
good luck and keep on writing!
Awww, I love it!
Aww that was so cute.
Love the way ol' Jamesie is characterized. :]
Lovely. Fantastic job.
I ABSOLUTELY ADORE THIS.
i thought you should know.
james and lily's conversations are completely adorable, and i find this fic absolutely sweet and fluffy.
very very good. not too cheesy or cliche, pefect. exactly what they'd say together. love love love.
You had to hand it to Muggles, James thought as Lily raked a hand through his hair, making it stand out in every directing and sending shivers down his spine. Sometimes they knew what they were talking about.
*sighs* this was SUCH a good story! i luv the stories w/ the fluff in them--may cm weird, but im a hopeless romantic, and i luv the fluff. i luv ur story SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO much! keep writing!
Awwww. That's so sweet! Now I feel like hugging someone and smiling all night long. And I would, but people would look at me funny.
wow! that was wonderful!
Ahhh! how cute! great story 10/10
aw so cute
After I read Caducus, I went to your author's page, and this looked cute. And see what I find!
I can't remember what movie that is, but I know I love it. :D That makes sense, doesn't it?
I also love how you can capture raw emtions with your words. That's what separates a good writer from a great one. Guess what category you fall in?
this has got to be the one of the best lily/james oneshots i've ever read... i love it!
Aww...that was sweet! Gotta love It's a Wonderful Life.
wow. I liked it. Is that it? Damn. I was enjoying that!