Reviews For Your Eyes
Reviewer: Lusito
Date: 06/17/06 7:47
Chapter: One-Shot

Great poem, I absolutely love it!

I would like to ask, can I use it for an ACD (Arts and Cultural Development) assignment for school. I am supposed to find a love poem, put some or all of it on a poster and then add one image to strengthen it. Of course you'll get the credit for the poem (or not if you'd prefer that).

Big Hug,

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! Oh my god, of course you can use it. I'm sorry I didn't respond to the review sooner! I'm really honored. What image are you going to use? This is really surprising, in a good way! Thanks for the review again!

Reviewer: Snotori
Date: 05/21/06 21:31
Chapter: One-Shot

This was a beautiful piece of work. Well done!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for your reivew, Snotori! Also, I've wanted to say this for a while, but thanks for your wonderful fanfiction site!

Reviewer: obsessedwithron
Date: 05/15/06 11:20
Chapter: One-Shot

This is a beutiful poem, maybe a sequel type thing about what happens after she realizes?

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, obsessedwithron. I'm glad you like the poem. This poem was unsuccessful in pairing me up with the person who wrote this poem, but I'm glad it had some use.

Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond
Date: 05/04/06 20:01
Chapter: One-Shot

It seems very similar to the song in RENT... the one that Roger sings to Mimi when she's like half dead? Did you base it off that, or is it simply your own thought? Just curious about that part, I really liked it. I liked the free-form and short sentences, kind of reminds me of my poems. Keep on writing, and a 10/10

Author's Response: I seriously did not base it off the song in RENT, cuz I don't really like that part when Mimi's half dead because I feel its overdramatic. If it seems like it, that's because RENT has actually became a part of my life, and I probably based on it without realizing. I write free form because I can't stick to a set rhyme scheme, and I used short sentences because I wanted to make the point of being numb with emotion, and I actually was numb with emotion. I've never read your poems, but I'll check them out. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Angst_Angel
Date: 04/30/06 19:48
Chapter: One-Shot

There is a song from RENT called 'your eyes'!! did you base it off of that song?

Author's Response: Aah! Double reviews!

Reviewer: Angst_Angel
Date: 04/30/06 19:45
Chapter: One-Shot

There is a song from RENT called 'your eyes'!! did you base it off of that song?

Author's Response: I love RENT! I just turned off the movie! I didn't base it off the song, but more of how I felt. That felt like the only thing to call it.

Reviewer: chislarina
Date: 04/30/06 0:17
Chapter: One-Shot

keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Chislarina!

Reviewer: Periwinkle
Date: 04/28/06 16:00
Chapter: One-Shot

I really liked this poem. You focused solely on the eyes, describing them in their entirety. It's very well written! I'm left speechless by this poem, especially in the last stanza. It has a lot of raw and unsaid emotion poured into it, making it heavy and light at the same time.

Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Periwinkle. I focused on the eyes because the person who I wrote this poem thinking about has very nice eyes. :) I put emotion into it because that what I was feeling as I wrote it. This entire poem is the truth. Anyway, thanks for the reivew!

Reviewer: AstroFire
Date: 04/25/06 3:11
Chapter: One-Shot

Ah, 3:00 am, and here I am, reviewing your poem :) Well, first of all, I liked it very much. I think your poem described just perfectly how Hermione might feel after she realizes her feelings for Ron (yay H/G and R/Hr shippers! lol).
Maybe another reason I liked your poem is because I found myself in the middle of a crush. Unfortunately, it is not meant to be right now. But *sighs* no one can take my dreams away from me, right? (sorry for rambling!) Anyway, very good poem. IT has emotion between its lines that I consider describe R/Hr relationship perfectly. Good job. On my fav list :D

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, AstroFire! It's made me really happy! I really didn't write it based on Hermione/Ron (it was meant for a friend of mine that looks and acts nothing like Ron!) but it just turned out that way. That emotion between the lines was real - I was almost crying when I wrote the poem. Good luck with your crush (I hope you have better luck than all of mine!) and thanks for the review!

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