Reviewer: Angel of Dreams
Date: 10/14/07 22:43
Chapter: One-Shot

Wow, quite the little sphere Cadmus had, eh? And he sold it to Borgin? Why didn't he just use it on him and make Borgin hide it for him? I'd like to know your reasons, behind his logic, because besides being peculiar, I'm surprised Borgin would have even taken it!

I'm particularly perturbed by the power of the object. To make somebody permanently obedient. Vicious, and dark to the extreme. I wonder, idly, what would ever happen if the Dark Lord had found that little sphere, or why Malfoy never bought it in Borgin & Burkes when he had the chance...

Still, fast-paced and a great story! Bravo.

Reviewer: Sariza
Date: 04/25/06 17:55
Chapter: One-Shot

Wow, this has started out really good, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Sorry, this is going to stay a one-shot. If you want to read more of my works, i have a story in General/post-hogwarts called Christopher Potter and the Forbidden Ally. Thanx! Silver Phoenix

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