Reviews For Crept Upon
Reviewer: ravenclawrox
Date: 07/07/06 19:46
Chapter: Prologue

i love this! "-Prongs, who’s going to get Lily a cool nickname if it kills him" lol! 10/10!

Reviewer: muchlikeluna
Date: 06/01/06 0:54
Chapter: Prologue

I absolutly love it!!! Can't wait until you update. Please do so soon.

Reviewer: True Blonde7
Date: 05/06/06 15:42
Chapter: Prologue

I absolutely loved this!!!! You are a terrific writer! Please write more about James and Lily!! You rock! Oh and can you please check out my first story if it gets approved? Thankz, just keep on looking to see if i have any stories!

Reviewer: u no poo
Date: 05/06/06 9:16
Chapter: Prologue

hey its really great but plz update soon

Reviewer: Her_mi_o_ne 16
Date: 05/03/06 1:29
Chapter: Prologue

this is really good, UPDATE!

Reviewer: nymphadora08
Date: 05/02/06 17:04
Chapter: Prologue

You're off to a great start! Do you have a beta? They can really help with making the story flow better without having to use different fonts. Great story, love it!

Author's Response: I've been having my grandmother beta for me, which works out well since she's read the books and she used to be an english teacher back in the day. However, she is, for lack of a better term, afraid of the internet and wouldn't go near a computer if you paid her. So she is blissfully ignorant of what a font even is. Though I must say that really haven't found it to be that much of a problem yet, especially since most chapters won't be like that. I'm glad you like it! :)

Reviewer: Medora
Date: 04/25/06 17:35
Chapter: Prologue

What will Lily do? cant wait to find out!

Reviewer: ms weasley
Date: 04/25/06 3:55
Chapter: Prologue

Nice! Really enjoyed it. It had humour, and I loved that Lily was friends with the Marauders - there are too many fics with them as enemies. I could also see a lot of Harry in Lily, which was nice, as it made it seem more authentic. I hope you update, as I would love to read more, and I'm adding you to my favourites, so that I get an email if and when you do update. :-)

Author's Response: I agree. It's so hard to find a good Marauder fic that isn't entirely a hating game. I tend to write fluffier stuff anyway, and it's difficult to have them fall in love if they're fighting all the time!

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